Spartan15:

The other Offensive Bias:

thank god, a good read for once on this site :)

Well a lot of the other fanfics were a good read. When your a reviewer you try and help them improve in particular areas where they need too.

I think he was just joking

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Halo: TCW
"As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley

when is the next Chapter coming out.

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Master Gunnery Sergeant Sanchez:

Spartan15:

The other Offensive Bias:

thank god, a good read for once on this site :)

Well a lot of the other fanfics were a good read. When your a reviewer you try and help them improve in particular areas where they need too.

I think he was just joking

Oh right lol. How is your next chapter coming along?

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I stand proud and dominant in the heat of a battle.

......oh yea. i kinda 4got. ill get on it

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Halo: TCW
"As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley

Master Gunnery Sergeant Sanchez:

......oh yea. i kinda 4got. ill get on it

You get too easily distracted Sanchez lol.

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I stand proud and dominant in the heat of a battle.

for too long have i been scrolling down the fic to the last sentence seeing if its different but the familiar words of she was determined to get back at them. keep staring back at me...

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SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.

The other Offensive Bias:

for too long have i been scrolling down the fic to the last sentence seeing if its different but the familiar words of she was determined to get back at them. keep staring back at me...

check pg 15 Offensive

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Halo: TCW
"As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley

Master Gunnery Sergeant Sanchez:

The other Offensive Bias:

for too long have i been scrolling down the fic to the last sentence seeing if its different but the familiar words of she was determined to get back at them. keep staring back at me...

check pg 15 Offensive

omg i feel so stupid for missing that out. yet another brilliant chapter sanchez. and chap 13 will be a battle chap i guess?

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SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.

so....yeah..... how the new chapter coming along

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Master Gunnery Sergeant Sanchez:

The other Offensive Bias:

for too long have i been scrolling down the fic to the last sentence seeing if its different but the familiar words of she was determined to get back at them. keep staring back at me...

check pg 15 Offensive

omg i feel so stupid for missing that out. yet another brilliant chapter sanchez. and chap 13 will be a battle chap i guess?

If you ask me the rest of this chapter will entail a lot of violence lol. Which is ok Sanchez lol

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I stand proud and dominant in the heat of a battle.

Ya sorry guys the chapter would have been up but i had went to a Music tour which some of u may have heard of, Projekt Revolution. So i didnt finish the chapter but ill start it back up

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Halo: TCW
"As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley

Master Gunnery Sergeant Sanchez:

Ya sorry guys the chapter would have been up but i had went to a Music tour which some of u may have heard of, Projekt Revolution. So i didnt finish the chapter but ill start it back up

I think i have heard of Project revolution. Are they a good band? Anyway dont rush with your chapter Sanchez.

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I stand proud and dominant in the heat of a battle.

Its a tour of a bunch of Bands, Linkin Park, 10 Years, Atreyu and a few others.

i wont. this chapter is very important something happens in this chapter that will b very big.

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Halo: TCW
"As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley

Master Gunnery Sergeant Sanchez:

Its a tour of a bunch of Bands, Linkin Park, 10 Years, Atreyu and a few others.

i wont. this chapter is very important something happens in this chapter that will b very big.

Lincoln Park is a pretty good band. Havent heard of the others though. How many pages is this chapter going to be?

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I stand proud and dominant in the heat of a battle.

All my chapters are 3 pages but this might be more. Some certain things are introduced in this chapter

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Halo: TCW
"As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley