(FF) Halo: The Covenant War

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  •  06-02-2008, 7:41 PM 244440 in reply to 244436

    Re: (FF) Halo: The Covenant War

    heres a name kevin suastegui


    Lethe:


    What if we had a game where 2 different sides of units engaged each other in some form of military conflict?

    That'd be awesome.


    what if Halo Wars had that?
  •  06-02-2008, 7:48 PM 244447 in reply to 244440

    Re: (FF) Halo: The Covenant War

    high tall:
    heres a name kevin suastegui
    Welcome to the forums. I hope you enjoy your stay. May i ask where you got that name from lol.
    I stand proud and dominant in the heat of a battle.



  •  06-02-2008, 7:52 PM 244449 in reply to 244447

    Re: (FF) Halo: The Covenant War

    Spartan15:
    high tall:
    heres a name kevin suastegui
    Welcome to the forums. I hope you enjoy your stay. May i ask where you got that name from lol.

    he's been here for 3 months... 


  •  06-10-2008, 8:02 PM 252830 in reply to 244449

    Re: (FF) Halo: The Covenant War

    friends name.


    Lethe:


    What if we had a game where 2 different sides of units engaged each other in some form of military conflict?

    That'd be awesome.


    what if Halo Wars had that?
  •  06-10-2008, 8:13 PM 252840 in reply to 252830

    Re: (FF) Halo: The Covenant War

    Please don't spam

    For all of you who read this FF I regret to inform you it is being put on hold. I will return to it in about two months. I only have time for one project right now and that is Minutes to Midnight. If you still wish to read my story go to minutestomidnight.sampasite.com to read my work.



    Halo: TCW
    "As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley
  •  06-12-2008, 4:37 PM 255657 in reply to 252840

    Re: (FF) Halo: The Covenant War

    Okay I finnaly got a new chapter up but its short so ..... ya

    Halo: TCW
    "As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley
  •  06-12-2008, 5:27 PM 255685 in reply to 255657

    Re: (FF) Halo: The Covenant War

    liked it


    Lethe:


    What if we had a game where 2 different sides of units engaged each other in some form of military conflict?

    That'd be awesome.


    what if Halo Wars had that?
  •  06-12-2008, 8:20 PM 255802 in reply to 255685

    Re: (FF) Halo: The Covenant War

    I am glad someone read it, I guess I lost most of my readers 

    Halo: TCW
    "As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley
  •  06-12-2008, 8:26 PM 255806 in reply to 255802

    Re: (FF) Halo: The Covenant War

    cool

    xbox Live Gamertag = SBDassassin21
  •  06-12-2008, 8:29 PM 255807 in reply to 255806

    Re: (FF) Halo: The Covenant War

    Zedonius:
    cool

    Cool? No constructive critisicsm? I'm dissapointed. Jk lol



    Halo: TCW
    "As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley
  •  06-12-2008, 8:36 PM 255809 in reply to 255807

    Re: (FF) Halo: The Covenant War

    I was not impressed with your gramar and writing skills

     

    but overall it was pretty good


    :-)-(-=


    i make peoplez
  •  06-12-2008, 8:38 PM 255811 in reply to 255809

    Re: (FF) Halo: The Covenant War

    eliteslayer:

    I was not impressed with your gramar and writing skills

     

    but overall it was pretty good

    Ya I know dude I am writing this in my sparetime, its rushed thats why it sucks.



    Halo: TCW
    "As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley
  •  06-12-2008, 9:21 PM 255838 in reply to 237224

    Re: (FF) Halo: The Covenant War

    Pretty good chapter, Sanchez. Although, I have to say, Sanchez (the character) isn't too good at inspiring speeches...

    I only saw one error, when they are talking about Zeus. Michael complains about the deployment and says,

    "And we don't even no if the Covenant is even gonna show up? Geeze!"

    'no' should be 'know'.

    Other than that, good chapter. I'm not quite sure that the bit about Jonathon was put in well, it didn't quite flow well. If you had continued with more explanation of Sanchez's past it would have worked fine, though.

    Good work, Sanchez. Keep it up. 


    Officialy offline as of April 4 Australian time.
  •  06-12-2008, 9:23 PM 255839 in reply to 255838

    Re: (FF) Halo: The Covenant War

    that pretty much sums up what i said in the post 2 before u
    :-)-(-=


    i make peoplez
  •  06-12-2008, 9:26 PM 255841 in reply to 255839

    Re: (FF) Halo: The Covenant War

    eliteslayer:
    that pretty much sums up what i said in the post 2 above u

    You said something about not being impressed with his grammar and spelling skills. I was rather impressed with his grammar and spelling skills. There was one error in all of the chapter. Not worth saying that you don't think his grammar and spelling is any good.


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