Really great story, can't wait for more of it. I've read a bunch of these fan fics, this one has to be the best I've read so far. And good luck with the training.
KristallNacht:Canonical Innacuracies: MA5B Individual Combat Weapon System is very inaccurate. It definitely has no consistency when it comes to firing accuracy. Please read the following.The most pressing negative aspect of the MA5B is it's inconsistent accuracy. In general, firing the weapon in short bursts will create tighter shot groupings than full-automatic fire. However, the rifle is prone to producing wildly inaccurate shots even when single shots or brief pulses of the trigger are used. The next round fired after this may produce a perfect bulls-eye, but the very next may fly out of the targeting reticule's circle and slam into the dirt a dozen meters from the same target. There is also no way a 19-year old, with no combat experience would ever be allowed in the ODST boot camps.Read the following:ODSTs were operating as early as 2525. They are often referred to as 'super' and seem to have a class of their own, often coming right after the brutes,elites and SPARTANs. Barring the personnel of the SPARTAN programs, ODSTs are one of the most effective forms of troops available to the UNSC, and the expectations placed on ODST units made them all-volunteer outfits, with some outsiders regarding such volunteers as 'crazy'. By 2552 their strength had swelled to a larger number of divisions in an attempt to fill the demands of the Human-Covenant War. Some ODSTs actively participated in training the SPARTAN-IIs, but the efficiency of that program was demonstrated when a single SPARTAN-II killed three ODSTs and left one severely wounded during an exercise. These fatalities resulted in ODSTs having a disdain of the SPARTANS, as they were "Freaks" in Silva's case and not even worthy of being Human. And other than just that, the writing skill involved in his tale are of excruciatingly low standard. It was painful reading it, because every sentence kept leaping out as being the worst way to write that particular idea.
MA5B Individual Combat Weapon System is very inaccurate. It definitely has no consistency when it comes to firing accuracy. Please read the following.
The most pressing negative aspect of the MA5B is it's inconsistent accuracy. In general, firing the weapon in short bursts will create tighter shot groupings than full-automatic fire. However, the rifle is prone to producing wildly inaccurate shots even when single shots or brief pulses of the trigger are used. The next round fired after this may produce a perfect bulls-eye, but the very next may fly out of the targeting reticule's circle and slam into the dirt a dozen meters from the same target.
There is also no way a 19-year old, with no combat experience would ever be allowed in the ODST boot camps.
Read the following:
ODSTs were operating as early as 2525. They are often referred to as 'super' and seem to have a class of their own, often coming right after the brutes,elites and SPARTANs. Barring the personnel of the SPARTAN programs, ODSTs are one of the most effective forms of troops available to the UNSC, and the expectations placed on ODST units made them all-volunteer outfits, with some outsiders regarding such volunteers as 'crazy'. By 2552 their strength had swelled to a larger number of divisions in an attempt to fill the demands of the Human-Covenant War. Some ODSTs actively participated in training the SPARTAN-IIs, but the efficiency of that program was demonstrated when a single SPARTAN-II killed three ODSTs and left one severely wounded during an exercise. These fatalities resulted in ODSTs having a disdain of the SPARTANS, as they were "Freaks" in Silva's case and not even worthy of being Human.
ODSTs were operating as early as 2525. They are often referred to as 'super' and seem to have a class of their own, often coming right after the brutes,elites and SPARTANs.
Barring the personnel of the SPARTAN programs, ODSTs are one of the most effective forms of troops available to the UNSC, and the expectations placed on ODST units made them all-volunteer outfits, with some outsiders regarding such volunteers as 'crazy'. By 2552 their strength had swelled to a larger number of divisions in an attempt to fill the demands of the Human-Covenant War.
Some ODSTs actively participated in training the SPARTAN-IIs, but the efficiency of that program was demonstrated when a single SPARTAN-II killed three ODSTs and left one severely wounded during an exercise. These fatalities resulted in ODSTs having a disdain of the SPARTANS, as they were "Freaks" in Silva's case and not even worthy of being Human.
And other than just that, the writing skill involved in his tale are of excruciatingly low standard. It was painful reading it, because every sentence kept leaping out as being the worst way to write that particular idea.
smirfyxxx:jesus christ bud u like to ruin everything that guy who said lets hope they dont come and ruin it again was wrong this mental case wont stop*pulls out splazer* now run kristallnacht run
please will you stop trying to start a fight this thing was already settled
srry man i only read up to the kristalls first post
smirfyxxx:srry man i only read up to the kristalls first post
its okay...
now back on topic
Mr. Bacon: smirfyxxx: srry man i only read up to the kristalls first postits okay...now back on topic
smirfyxxx: srry man i only read up to the kristalls first post
Sgt. Sanchez:I leave June 2, I would post the chapter its on my desktop im on my laptop at my job
woo, its party time.
thanks for putting me in, and im covered in blue, my favourite color :-D