An Elites Tale: Part 2

Last post 05-20-2008, 7:01 PM by Anguished Proph. 8 replies.
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  •  05-19-2008, 8:35 PM 233042

    An Elites Tale: Part 2

      I'm sorry this took me so long.  This is the summary of the beginning to the second part of my fan fic. Osteros and Vendum’s squads were able to make it near the power plant without any problems. What they didn’t know is that there is three miles of trenches between them and the power plant, and there’s also two fortified bunkers guarding the entrance Osteros planed on breaching. While coming up with a plan to get through the trenches, sirens start blaring in the distance, and UNSC troops start pouring out of the power plant to take up defensive positions. The bodies of Donnie and his companion were found by a patrol which sounded the alarm. Osteros and Vendum must make their way through the trenches before they are surrounded and killed. The firefight begins when Brother Thukus pick off a straggler with his beam riffle, but the shot is a beacon in the darkness. All the marines in the trenches start shooting in the Elite’s direction, giving cover fire to the squads ordered to get in close to engage Osteros’s force.

     

                                                                Chapter 2

                Osteros emptied his needler into the approaching marines. One of them exploded spectacularly, and the men next to him were impaled by the shards. Osteros ducked back into the trench his squad had occupied, and reloaded it. Brother Resman popped up, and began unloading his fuel rod. The beams made impact, and over a dozen men were vaporized. He quickly reloaded, and sent another volley across the trenches. More marines were killed, their bodies turning into a red mist from the impacts. The rest of Osteros’s squad began firing, trying their best to stem the tide of humans.
                “How many is that?” asked Brother Isthan, his plasma riffles sizzling from overuse. 
                “I think we’ve killed around eighty of them.” replied Brother Telos. He slammed another cartridge into his carbine, and fired off a few rounds. His vision, along with the rest of his kind, was superb, and he saw that all of his shots made impact with a human face, some of the marines somersaulting before they hit the ground. “Make that eighty five"
                Brother Isthan laughed, and began firing. Plasma rounds crashed into the marines, causing them to scream as their armor and flesh fused painfully. Osteros’s squad kept shooting, completely unfazed by the screams.
                “Heretics!” roared Brother Grelus as he opened up with his carbine. More humans died from the continuous fire pouring from the Elites, but this didn’t seem to be deterring them. Some began to shoot at Osteros’s squad, shields flaring from the few shots that made impact. Osteros realized a majority of the humans didn’t have any equipment to improve their sight, and he couldn’t suppress the smile that spread across his face. A heretic was only good dead, but a blind one was almost as satisfactory.
                “Major Vendum” said Osteros over the com “most of the humans aren’t equipped to see in the dark, and their only able to see us because of the lights are weapons are giving off. You are to engage them in close combat when I give the word.”
                “As you command friend.” Vendum replied.
                Osteros emptied another clip into a marine that wasn’t fast enough to get out of the way. He died with a scream as he exploded, and his comrades nearby joined him as the needle shards crashed into them. Osteros noticed that more humans were pouring from the power plant, and his men were in danger of being overrun.
               “Do it now Vendum!” Osteros yelled on the com. His answer was the sound of revving chainswords and the ignition of jetpacks. He took a quick glance behind him, and Osteros saw Vendum’s squad ascend from the forest behind them. Within a few seconds, Vendum’s squad had cleared the distance between the tree line and no mans land, and they were about to fall right on top of the enemy.

                                                                                **********

                Vendum was killing before he hit the ground. He had killed at least a dozen men with his Needler, and once it was emptied, he activated his energy sword. He decapitated a man as he landed, blood spurting into the air like a fountain. Vendum stabbed the man next to him, his sword burning right through the armor. A marine charged at him, a shotgun aimed for Vendum’s face. Vendum side stepped the blast, and severed the man’s arm at the elbow. Before the marine could scream, Vendum plunged his sword into its chest, his blade easily passing through flesh. He kicked the marine away, and slashed another across the face. Vendum took a quick glance to see what was going on around him, and he was pleased with what he saw. Brother Aras eviscerated a human with the flick of his wrist, and in a blink, he decapitated another. Brother Tekris and Caros had a pile of dead at their feet, and it grew with each passing second.  Brother Selcos lifted a marine and threw him at his comrades, knocking them down. Selcos took advantage of this, stabbing most of them before they could get back up. Brother Devran’s chainsword punctured a man’s stomach, his insides ruined and spilling on the ground.
                           Satisfied with what he was seeing, Vendum stepped back into the fray, slashing at any human that strayed to close. He roared as he hacked his way through the human throng, leaving a trail of dead in his wake. Vendum became lost in the slaughter, his vision hazing. He let it consume him, and in moments his sword found purchase in flesh. He kept swinging, laughing as warm blood splashed his armor, and he relished the looks of horror and pain on his victim’s faces.
                           “Die heretics, die!” Vendum screamed.
                            He spin kicked a marine in the head, shattering its helmet from the force of the impact. The man’s body crumpled to the ground, and he didn’t even have enough time to realize he was dead. Vendum stabbed the man behind him, and fired his needler into another. The marines began retreating back to the power plant, leaving the dead behind. Vendum’s vision cleared, and his breathing became normal. He looked around him, and saw there were at least two hundred bodies littering the ground, all of them human. A majority of them had plasma burns, but quite a few bore the signs of encountering the wrong end of a chainsword. Some of the bodies were almost unrecognizable, dog tags and bits of armor being the only things to show their identity. Vendum thanked God that it was nightfall. If the sun had been in the sky, the battle would have had a very different outcome. Vendum bent down to read one of the dog tags, and wiped away the grime so he could decipher the name.
                         “Mary Hooper.” Vendum read aloud.
                         Vendum felt his gorge rise when he realized the name belonged to a woman, and he couldn’t believe the humans had sunk so low as to send women to the front lines.
                        “What did you say?” a voice asked behind him. Vendum looked to see who it was coming from. It was Osteros, his armor caked in as much blood his own, and Vendum sighed.
                        “My friend, this name tag belongs to a woman.” Vendum whispered.
                        “Are you serious?” gasped Osteros.
                        “I am. Do you wish to see the name tag?”
                        “I believe you, Vendum, but what I can’t comprehend what would make the humans send their women out to fight. We just started this war, are they that desperate already?”
                        “I don’t know, but this infuriates me Osteros. No race the Covenant has encountered used females in open engagements, at least not in the beginning of a war. I think we’ve found a species that embodies cowardice and depravity at its worst. I’ll make sure to report this when we’re done with the mission.”
                         Osteros nodded and walked back to his squad. He ordered Brother Resman to send a volley into the bunkers guarding the entrance, just to make sure no one was waiting to surprise them. Resman fired off a few bursts, and they lit up the sky as they made their way to the target. The bunkers crumbled as the fuel rod salvos made impact, and Osteros gave the order to advance to the door. Both squads sprinted, and made it through the trenches in a few minutes. They stood in front of the doors, and Vendum produced a plasma mine. He attached it to the door, and set the timer.
                        “Get back!” yelled Vendum, and everyone backed a good distance from the doors. The mine went off, and the doors flew off their hinges. Osteros ordered the charge, and the Elites roared as they plunged into the smoke and fire.


    Originally Anguished Prophet, but they thought it would be best to cut out the end of it.
  •  05-19-2008, 8:42 PM 233045 in reply to 233042

    Re: An Elites Tale: Part 2

     Its good, except for the last part. The Covenant dont care whether a Human is Male, Female, Or child for that matter. Their there to exterminate everybody.
  •  05-19-2008, 8:49 PM 233053 in reply to 233045

    Re: An Elites Tale: Part 2

         The war just started, and this is one of their first combat drops, so their a bit shocked by killing women. Their sentient beings, and they haven't been fighting long enough to have their emotions dulled. I think anyone would be stunned to find out they might have killed someones mother.

    Originally Anguished Prophet, but they thought it would be best to cut out the end of it.
  •  05-19-2008, 8:50 PM 233054 in reply to 233053

    Re: An Elites Tale: Part 2

    Anguished Prophet:
         The war just started, and this is one of their first combat drops, so their a bit shocked by killing women. Their sentient beings, and they haven't been fighting long enough to have their emotions dulled. I think anyone would be stunned to find out they might have killed someones mother.

    What about someones Father? ^^

  •  05-20-2008, 2:44 PM 233431 in reply to 233054

    Re: An Elites Tale: Part 2

        In nearly every culture the men were sent to fight, and its more acceptable since fathers aren't as warm as someones mother would be (in most cases)

    Originally Anguished Prophet, but they thought it would be best to cut out the end of it.
  •  05-20-2008, 6:06 PM 233588 in reply to 233431

    Re: An Elites Tale: Part 2

    I like it, it's like imperial Guard vs. chaos marines, the IG lose alot of men every battle

    But the one thing I don't get is the fact that marines do have Night Vision and many probably have Infrared, which should have made targeting the Elites as easy as hitting water with a rock when you're on an ocean, unless they were poorly equipped.

     


    "The pain of war cannot exceed the woe of aftermath"-Led Zeppelin

  •  05-20-2008, 6:19 PM 233601 in reply to 233588

    Re: An Elites Tale: Part 2

    Seath:

    I like it, it's like imperial Guard vs. chaos marines, the IG lose alot of men every battle

    But the one thing I don't get is the fact that marines do have Night Vision and many probably have Infrared, which should have made targeting the Elites as easy as hitting water with a rock when you're on an ocean, unless they were poorly equipped.

     

    Woot, =D another 40k fan! Everything will be explained in the third chapter, and thank you for liking it.  


    Originally Anguished Prophet, but they thought it would be best to cut out the end of it.
  •  05-20-2008, 6:23 PM 233613 in reply to 233053

    Re: An Elites Tale: Part 2

    Anguished Prophet:
         The war just started, and this is one of their first combat drops, so their a bit shocked by killing women. Their sentient beings, and they haven't been fighting long enough to have their emotions dulled. I think anyone would be stunned to find out they might have killed someones mother.

    Even though Woman are in the Military nowadays. ;)

  •  05-20-2008, 7:01 PM 233662 in reply to 233613

    Re: An Elites Tale: Part 2

    Redlightning:

    Anguished Prophet:
         The war just started, and this is one of their first combat drops, so their a bit shocked by killing women. Their sentient beings, and they haven't been fighting long enough to have their emotions dulled. I think anyone would be stunned to find out they might have killed someones mother.

    Even though Woman are in the Military nowadays. ;)

     For us yes, but the covenant don't use women to fight their wars, except for hunters, but they aren't anywhere near as fragile as a human girl (unless their hit by a rocket launcher =/) 


    Originally Anguished Prophet, but they thought it would be best to cut out the end of it.
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