Wonderful, this is better then the last chapter.

Excellent job!

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CH.20

   Caba woke up that morning with a true feeling of purpose.He was no longer merely floating on the wind but was anchored by a task.He slowly got out of bed and sharpened his knife once more.He had sharpened it for hours last night but had some impulse to sharpen it again.He finished up and put the knife in his pocket and walked out of his house.

   "Caba!"Caba turned around to see HB waving.Caba walked up to him and asked,"So where are they?"HB stared down at Caba."We have found the man who commited this atrocity."Caba was losing his patience."Where?""He lives on 45639 Portomer St."Caba cackled a little laugh."Let's pay them a visit,shall we?"HB's facial expresions changed from nervous to relaxed but Caba payed no  mind to it."Alright,you get your weapon?I don't see it.""No worries,friend.I have it."HB walked off to get his old 2240 Chevy.What a beautiful day to do what Caba wished.Caba barely heard as the truck rumbled up.Even if it was old,HB kept it in great condition.

   Caba jumped in and turned on the radio.Blues,the music of remorse...Caba switched the station to metal.No remorse today.They lerched out the compound gate and onto the highway.Caba thought about what he was to do.Before he could get to far into thought,HB stopped the car."We're here."Caba looked around at what kind of place he was at.A small,ratty neighborhood.The house they were near was the closest thing to attractive around."Wait here."Caba hopped out of the car without a second thought.He walked up to the door and pounded on it."Who is it?"hollered an old voice.Hold on...Yes?"Caba was face to face with a middle aged man,around sixty if Caba was any judge.

   Caba walked in and sat down on a piece of furniture.This took the old man by surprise.He closed the door and stared at Caba."What you want ya little Yapper?"Perfect.Caba raced up to the fool and stabbed him in the thigh.The man fell on his side and screamed.Caba lunged ontop of him and started to beat him with his own hands."This *smack*is what you get *smack* for killing *smack* Suzan!!!!!"His face was beggining to lose form.Caba took out the knife and implanted it into his throat as the man began to say"Who?"Caba got up and cleaned himself of the best he could.

   He walked outside and jumped into the car.HB said not a word as they drove back to the compound.

will be coming soon:)

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YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY I love caba

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the fourms have lost most hope

Ch.20 is up;)

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Congrats on makin it to CH. 20

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Grazie.This all started with a weird idea that came to life:D

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Whens the next Ch. goin to be in?

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xbox Live Gamertag = SBDassassin21

Not for a while.and this is what started it all:

I know this may be a little weird but its from a book i read.What if after the war,a grunt actually lived on Earth as a citizen?

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I dont think he could because they only breathe methane.

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xbox Live Gamertag = SBDassassin21

Ewwww...bad one:D

Read it all?

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CH.21

   Caba hopped out of the car with a jump.That's what the *** got.Caba paid his dues in full.He decided,with it being only twelve,that he'd go visit Hunter.

   Caba had learned that Hunter actually lived in his little gunshop,using a pull down cot in back.Caba walked in to see him cleaning the Lupara.Caba felt a close relation to the gun.It was full of history.Hunter sat down the gun and looked up."What do I owe the honor of your visit?"He mock bowed and laughed.Caba gave a chuckle and walked up to ther man."How ya been,Hunt?""Good...Good."His eyes lit up."Oh,I got ya something,bet you'll love it."He went into the back of the shop and opened up a crate.He quickly slid whatever it was into his coat pocket.He walked back up to Caba."Guess what it is?""A grenade?""Nope."A rifle?""Closer."Caba looked up at Hunter.No way a rifle is that small.I've seen the size of Human rifles.They are at least three feet long."Hunter grinned a mischievous smile."That's where your wrong,buddy boy.This ain't Human."Caba was confused."Then what the hell is it?""Close your eyes and I'll give it to you."Caba liked Hunter but this was getting annoying.He closed his eyes and heard rustleing as Hunter took out the rifle."Open your eyes"He sounded excited.Caba opened his eyes and was awash in awe.

   A Plasma Rifle.He held it in his claw and felt the weight of the rifle.He had never held one before.Brutes never let him near one.He held it gingerly as though it may break at a tap of the claw.He looked up to Hunter,and found he was speechless."Where...Where did you get this?"Hunter looked pleased with himself."Well,lets just say that I had to call in a couple favors for yah."Caba was overjoyed he wanted to shoot it,but he new that if he shot it too much it would empty and be nearly useless."Oh,and I got one more surprise."He took out a small device that looked like a Human banana."It is a recharger for that thing.Technology has come a long way since you seen one of these."Caba was amazed.A recharger.He always saw these strown throughout a battlefield because they were out of juice."All you have to do is,every time you use it,put this charger onto the back and let it charge for two days.It will be full every time."Hunter looked like a mother hen preening over her chick."This is wonderful!"Caba was ecstatic."Soooo...can I shoot it here?"Hunter's grin slipped,but then it returned."No.But I do know a great place to shoot.But not today,it's to late and it takes a while to get out there.

more is coming soon;)

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Anyone?:(

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dude, ya started it so ya finish it

personally i think its great, pretty sure i havnt read anything like this

good job Don!

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Excellent chapter, Don.

20 chapters! And more coming?

You are an excellent writer, easily as good as me. It's remarkable that you've gotten this far.

Excellent work, Don. Keep it up and don't let us down.

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