Lol i think that is the most common problem a writer has, do you have anyone read yours before you post it? i do and it has helped out quite a bit.

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i have Hunter_Killer_12 read it mostly for mistakes though...
 

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Oh good, the person that reads mine knows lots n lots of big words lol its not cheating its just ermmm getting bonus help

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yes okay

lucky... i want bonus help

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This story is reaal good. When is your next chapter.

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Restlessness You will read this fic.
Blood Ties its a sweet fic.

343Mccutcheon_spark:

This story is reaal good. When is your next chapter.

when its finished....

probably by Sunday 

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noooo more competition!

Ah well, at least sunday will be a funner day, yes i know funner is not a word.

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Ah, good, you made the changes I suggested...

Thanks to my help, without which you'd be nothing [jk :)], there are no errors I can point out. But, as someone else pointed out and I now notice, "and went into the woods" could have been worded better. I didn't see that when I read it.

Good work, Bacon. Keep it up.

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hay guys im back what i miss on the story???

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Remember The Fight

Thanks Civ Base
clickhere
and if your a noob click here

The Ranger:

hay guys im back what i miss on the story???

the whole story is in the first post on the first page 

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ok thanks i already read and i say pleaz make a another chapter. that cliffhanger is gonna be the death of me. i love the the story and ill be surprizedif it doesnt get published

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Remember The Fight

Thanks Civ Base
clickhere
and if your a noob click here

The Ranger:

ok thanks i already read and i say pleaz make a another chapter. that cliffhanger is gonna be the death of me. i love the the story and ill be surprizedif it doesnt get published

a little to much praise there

there is a bunch of FF better then mine

you should read Hunted

use the search bar to find it 

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k ya if been offline helping my parents get ready for a yard sale had to work alot and ya before i joined i read some ff pretty good stuff

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Remember The Fight

Thanks Civ Base
clickhere
and if your a noob click here

indeed there is a lot of talent here

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Mr. Bacon:

you should read Hunted

Come on, that wasn't even in the top three fan fics on the site.

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