I stated in my review that the grammar and spelling problems where causing confusion in his story. I never said anything about you have a few, that makes the story suck, fix them ALL. No I said fix it to the point to where it is easier to understand.

I just went over my review. I didn't find anything spelled wrong. Point out a few that you see. I can see grammar as thats a bit harder to find, but I don't think spelling is a problem.

I was over exaggerating a lot of things in that review. When I hear muzzle, I think of something you put on a dogs mouth, when I hear baton, I think of that pole you twirl. I am sure this has went through other peoples minds. I was just saying that he may want to choose better words.

It's his choice to use the information I gave him in that review. If he wants to, great. If not then oh well. He asked for it, if he doesn't want it then I just wasted about 20 minutes of my life. 

If you want me to add a disclaimer at the bottom of the reviews I will. Stating that this may contain sparse grammatical and spelling errors. Not enough to make it illegible, but enough to prove I am human. I will.

EDIT: 

I will re-write that part where I contradicted myself. There is a difference between assuming that the reader knows something, and telling them something, then explaining what you just told them. 

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LeafyOwNu2:

I just went over my review. I didn't find anything spelled wrong. Point out a few that you see. I can see grammar as (thats) a bit harder to find, but I don't think spelling is a problem.

Remember when writing 'that is' together, it's that's, don't forget the apostrophes.

LeafyOwNu2:

If you want me to add a disclaimer at the bottom of the reviews I will. Stating that this may contain sparse grammatical and spelling errors. Not enough to make it illegible, but enough to prove I am human. I will.

Yep, we're all human, can't be up to the perfection standard.

LeafyOwNu2:

It's his choice to use the information I gave him in that review. If he wants to, great. If not then oh well. He asked for it, if he doesn't want it then I just wasted about 20 minutes of my life.

True.

LeafyOwNu2:

I was over exaggerating a lot of things in that review. When I hear muzzle, I think of something you put on a dogs mouth, when I hear baton, I think of that pole you twirl. I am sure this has went through other peoples minds. I was just saying that he may want to choose better words.

Better words make a more vivid context.

I try not to use that's and it's in a professional writing. I use that is and it is. It's just the way I was taught to write anything that is critical.

Word has betrayed me and changed something that was right, and making it wrong. I hardly ever catch it, but could you point out exactly where it forgot the apostrophes?  

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thanks for the review Leafy

i noticed my mistakes

and i will rewrite the story as soon as i get the chance

good chapter, a little on the short side but oh well.

Very few errors, that or i just didnt see them.

There are times where you could change a word or two to make it sound more exciting, like at the end where you said something like 'they went into the woods', it would have sounded better with 'they sped off into the woods' or something like that.

ITs nothing major im just trying to give a few good tips (for once).

i usually have that problem...

(curse you bad vocabulary!)