The warthog, rocket, sniper verse tank and knights battle, was tastefully enveloping.
I want more.......no pressure, lol.
"the pelican and made 'or' way through the woods." Or is supposed to be 'our'. A spelling mistake, but apart from that your spelling was nearly immaculate, excellent grammar and well worded and laid out terminology.
The ambush was very exciting and surprisingly realistic for a story, magnificent job.
You've made this half of chapter six a superb read, congratulations.
Will be ever vigilant for your next addition to the story.
The silver crest of the gleaming point of the tool wishes you freedom from a retched existence.