Sgt. Patterson is certainly an a#shole in training, and if it was that strenuous and harsh in real life, I wouldn't sign up because I would have hit Patterson right in the face if he did that to me. Private Lewis has balls, and he must have had some bad beatings at home to not flinch when getting hit by the batons etc.
Is private Lewis's dad in the civil war against the UNSC...is that why he left his wife?
The civil war surprised me...all that the UNSC went through with the covenant seems to all been for nothing when the citizens reward the UNSC with civil war, is this the futility you are trying to portray.
What about weapons, such as the spartan laser?
It's a very deep story with an exceptionally plot and lots of twists...it makes me despair in silent agony to read it though.
Will the elites make an appearance?
No spelling mistakes, excellent grammar paired with very good terminology.
You've come up with a productive story that is versed with emotion. It's a read worthy of credit, and how you give the main character flashbacks helps the story to make that character seem more real.
To conclude this, this persona is unique and full of unquestionable intrigue.
Fantastic, wondrous job in writing this story and coming up with the ideas.
The silver crest of the gleaming point of the tool wishes you freedom from a retched existence.