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Fanfic: A New Ally

Last post 06-25-2008, 4:09 AM by Casey. 102 replies.
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  •  05-03-2008, 9:30 AM 219978 in reply to 219972

    Re: Fanfic: A New Ally

    Mr. Bacon:
    one way to make the fan fic easier to read is to put all chapters in the first post so no one needs to search through all the pages to find the next chapter.

    actually, i come up with all my chapters right on the spot! srry if it makes tougher for u guys, but i never really made rough drafts. 


    where ever you see shadows, I'll be there...

    thanks Reaper!
    The Trials of Ras'quinn(FF) Faith or truth?
  •  05-03-2008, 9:32 AM 219981 in reply to 219978

    Re: Fanfic: A New Ally

    awsome117:

    Mr. Bacon:
    one way to make the fan fic easier to read is to put all chapters in the first post so no one needs to search through all the pages to find the next chapter.

    actually, i come up with all my chapters right on the spot! srry if it makes tougher for u guys, but i never really made rough drafts. 

    i mean copy and paste all your chapters into the first post so it will be easier to read



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  •  05-03-2008, 2:56 PM 220076 in reply to 219981

    Re: Fanfic: A New Ally

    PM awesome117


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  •  05-03-2008, 3:29 PM 220089 in reply to 220076

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    awesome story!

    just keep all the chapters together so it is easier to read



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  •  05-03-2008, 5:30 PM 220123 in reply to 220089

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    NIce bio on everyone, well done

     








  •  05-03-2008, 11:01 PM 220345 in reply to 220123

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    If any1 cares, or actaully reads this; if I dont get a special character by tomorrow ay noon; ill post chapter 3

    P.S. I dont need more characters, i just thought it would be fun, and for those that dont have fanfics, the chance to be part of one


    where ever you see shadows, I'll be there...

    thanks Reaper!
    The Trials of Ras'quinn(FF) Faith or truth?
  •  05-04-2008, 7:10 PM 220751 in reply to 220345

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    my computer is dying right now; wont be able to post chapter 3 until it is fixed
    where ever you see shadows, I'll be there...

    thanks Reaper!
    The Trials of Ras'quinn(FF) Faith or truth?
  •  05-04-2008, 7:13 PM 220755 in reply to 220751

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    looks like your screwed then!

    good luck with your computer



    Going to Tennessee June of '09!
  •  05-05-2008, 3:20 PM 221299 in reply to 220755

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    Whats this?! Could it be?! IT IS!!!

    Chapter 3: We're all Heritics

    As we exited slipspace; I kept thinking, How could this all have started?  I mean idiots would come up with this stupid religon?  Maybe humans aren't the only stupid ones around here.  After we exited slipspace; I looked out what appaerd to be a window; I can't tell what anything is around here. 

    "Shipmaster; incoming transmision from home base!" an elite shouted

    "Patch it through" Zannabar had said

    Just then, a hologram appaered in front of us.

    "Greetings Captain Zannabar, welcome home.  We were begining to think that you died.  Hey Quen! I owe you 50 quads!"

    The trasmition ended there.

    "Some friends of yours?" Tyler asked

    "That was Zen.  He is my best comrade.  We have our bets now and then about completed missions  and whether will live or not" Zannabar replied

    "If that's your friend, I can't wait to meet your enemies" Tyler answered

    "Don't worry, you will" Zannbar said

    "What do you-" He stopped me mid sentence and pointed outside.  There was over 50 alien ships outship of the base.  We heard a transmition from one of the ships

    "Heritics!  Give up now, and your deaths will be swift!"  an elite had shouted

    "Who was that?" I asked

    "That was my older brother; Hannabar. 

    "WHAT!!" We all shouted in unison

    Maybe it's time I tell you more about my past" Zannabar started

    "I was once the former commander of the ship Shadow of Intent; fighting all those who opposed the prophtes.  Me and my brother fought hand in hand, making sure the Great Journey was unopposed.  Then one day, when I was leading a raiding party on a Heritic base; I meet Zen.  We had a duel, and he bested me.  Instead of killing me, he showed me the truth of the 'Great Journey'.  I tied to tell my brother; but his pride was in the way.

    "Zannabar? you'll still alive? I tought the weight of Heresy would have brought you down to hell by now" Hannabar said

    "Nice to see you again too" Zannabar replied

    "I only give one warning; surrender now; or per-" Zannabar turned off the transmition.

    "Zen, tell the warriors we are leaving" Zannabar said

    "By your word Shipmaster" Zen replied

    "What! You can't! You'll be killed! Mary shouted

    We'll be killed if we stay here" Tom replied

    "So, whats the plan?" I asked

    "All ships that make through slipspace will meet with the rest of the fleet at Ran' runn." Zannabar said

    "Wait! I have a better plan!" John shouted

    "Do you have any thing that can transmit a signal without being detected?" John asked

    "Yes; what are you thinking human?" Zannabar asked

    "Just trust me"

    Zannabar took him to some sort of comupter thingy; and John went to work.  Within a minute he said he was done.

    "What did you do John?" I asked

    "Well, I sent out a fake distress signal saying they need immedintant reinforcements to location A5487-A3267" John said

    "But; that area is a black hole" Tom said

    " I know" John replied, with a little smile.  And that is why he is our hacker

    "Alright; back to business" Zannabar said " The ships will relize that they heading for a black hole in 30 minutes, so we don't have much time"

    Just then I remembered something. 

    "we have to go to Reach" I had said

    "Why Reach? It's so far away from here." Tom said

    "I said we're going to Reach, and thats an order!" I shouted

    "Sir, yes sir!" Everyone shouted.  I normally don't have to do that, but it was necesarry.

    "Zannabar, can you take your fleet and us to this location?" I asked as I typed it into the computer.

    "Of course, may I ask why?" Zannabar asked

    "I'll tell you when we get there" I told him.  This was so importnat right now.  Command had something that might give us an edge to this war.  As we entered slipspace, I kept wondering; is it too late?

    Sorry for long wait; and even worse chapter.  I just wanted chapter 4 to stand out more.  And i also promise that chapter 4 will be awsome, so i hope this chapter doesn't ruin it for you(or me)!


    where ever you see shadows, I'll be there...

    thanks Reaper!
    The Trials of Ras'quinn(FF) Faith or truth?
  •  05-05-2008, 3:56 PM 221321 in reply to 221299

    Re: Fanfic: A New Ally

    well, seeing as how no one reads this, might as well let it die
    where ever you see shadows, I'll be there...

    thanks Reaper!
    The Trials of Ras'quinn(FF) Faith or truth?
  •  05-05-2008, 4:21 PM 221339 in reply to 221321

    Re: Fanfic: A New Ally

    well, i did it. all chapters on first page
    where ever you see shadows, I'll be there...

    thanks Reaper!
    The Trials of Ras'quinn(FF) Faith or truth?
  •  05-05-2008, 6:30 PM 221438 in reply to 221339

    Re: Fanfic: A New Ally

    now that im back, everything is on first page
    where ever you see shadows, I'll be there...

    thanks Reaper!
    The Trials of Ras'quinn(FF) Faith or truth?
  •  05-06-2008, 12:16 AM 221764 in reply to 221438

    Re: Fanfic: A New Ally

    Don't worry, people still read it. Sorry for the wait, I just got back from school.

    Good chapter, actually.

    Keep it up. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.




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  •  05-06-2008, 6:28 PM 222136 in reply to 221764

    Re: Fanfic: A New Ally

    the last; or next to last depending on how it goes; will be up tomorrow
    where ever you see shadows, I'll be there...

    thanks Reaper!
    The Trials of Ras'quinn(FF) Faith or truth?
  •  05-07-2008, 12:19 AM 222336 in reply to 222136

    Re: Fanfic: A New Ally

    awsome117:
    the last; or next to last depending on how it goes; will be up tomorrow

    Looking forward to it.




    If at first you don't succeed, resort to thermalnuclear warheads.
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