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Operation:Flamehawk Discussion

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  •  04-25-2008, 3:41 PM 214058

    Operation:Flamehawk Discussion

    K Guys I have enough character names so look here later I will edit the episodes onto this post

                                                                          Episode 1

                                                                         Artemis nervously clutched his rifle as he looked ahead at the beach and the Hornets raced towards the URF fortress his only comfort being the other members of Fireteam Charlie Anderson, Wayne,Tisma, and Ophi. As they neared the fortress the Pilot Shouted" ETA 5 MINUTES" .Ophi ''said almost showtime'' Artemis said ''yeah ok guys lock and load we need to be ready to go in hot.'' Then the pilot shouted ''ETA 1 MINUTE'' Wayne and Tisma got ready to get out "ETA 10 SECONDS". shouted the pilot."MEN GO GO GO" shouted Artemis as bullets whizzed over his head. Just like he was trained to. He and his fellow marines instantly took heavy fire He saw Ophi Tisma and Anderson ran one way while Artemis and Wayne ran another. Next thing Artemis knew Wayne was on the ground clutching his shoulder He said "I will be OK Just go". Artemis Shouted "MAN DOWN MAN DOWN" as he sprinted along The plain suddenly He was on the ground And an Innie said "bye bye UNSC Scum.

                                                                        Episode 2

                                                                        Artemis prepared for death when the Innie fell. "I got your back" Wayne groaned from behind Artemis. He quickly nodded at Wayne and headed for the emergancy Rally point with Wayne limping behind. "Sir what is our main objective"? Asked Tisma. "To infiltate the enemy base". Said Artemis  Then they all charged the wall that was right in front of him soon Artemis felt alot of pain then everything went black. "Uhhhhh". Groaned Artemis as he got up and he saw the bodies of Wayne and Anderson and picked up their ammo and dogtags. "I will avenge you my friends" said Aretmis.

                                                                       Episode 3

                                                                       Artemis qiuckly dashed for the wall and saw Tisma and Ophi on the wall. Bullets wizzed overhead as what was left of fire team charlie Ran into the fort. Artemis hadn't told the team they're real primary objective. Artemis thought back to the briefing. "Alright Artemis" said Lt Commander Logan "Your primary objective is to hyjack the URF's database". "Yes sir!" Artemis had shouted. As they got to the primary compiter network's housing building. He told Ophi and Tisma to guard the door from the outside. As he walked into the concrete bunker that housed the URF main data base He inserted his fire team's AI into the computer system and she uploaded the data to Artemis's helmet. "Lets go said" Artemis.

                                                                     Episode 4

                                                                   

    When Artemis got outside he could not believe it. "NO" shouted Artemis As he stared at the corpses of Ophi and Tisma with Bullet holes on the head,neck,face,and chest. For the first in years Artemis cryed for his fallen comrades. He saw 3 walk Innies walk up he clutched his MA5B "THIS IS FOR YOU FIRE TEAM CHARLIE" Artemis shouted as bullets tore unto each of the innies as Artemis's finger pushed the trigger hard. "Goodbye old friends".Artemis said as he went to the hornet he had called for. When he got there he saw the Pilot Was dead. He collected her dogtags and took off. He knew where to go he headed for a nearby island and landed. "I need to rendevaus with the rest of the 105th Drop Shock Trooper Regiment" said Artemis as he looked at the lusj jungle island ahead of him.


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  •  04-25-2008, 3:42 PM 214060 in reply to 214058

    Re: Operation:Flamehawk

     Might want to lock one of the topics you made. You have 2 of the same thing.
    Truth is your shield and your sword. Deception is your enemy and your Weakness. Treat both Truth, and Deception with Respect.
  •  04-25-2008, 3:45 PM 214065 in reply to 214060

    Re: Operation:Flamehawk

    Redlightning:
     Might want to lock one of the topics you made. You have 2 of the same thing.

    I am new and do not know how 2 lock a thread


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  •  04-25-2008, 10:38 PM 214674 in reply to 214058

    Re: Operation:Flamehawk

    another good fan fic is Arbiter1000's Alien vs Halo vs Predator vs Marvel
    checkout my fanfic operation flamehawk
  •  05-09-2008, 3:01 PM 223958 in reply to 214674

    Re: Operation:Flamehawk

    ok I do not care if you guys are here or not I will continue my Fan Fic
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  •  05-09-2008, 3:55 PM 223997 in reply to 223958

    Re: Operation:Flamehawk

    um first off try to space things correctly, when you characters talk its kinda hard to follow whose talking

    use quotation marks or press the enter key each time some one is about to speak  



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  •  05-09-2008, 4:13 PM 224006 in reply to 223997

    Re: Operation:Flamehawk

    k I will do that in my next episode
    checkout my fanfic operation flamehawk
  •  05-09-2008, 4:19 PM 224013 in reply to 224006

    Re: Operation:Flamehawk

    well... you can also do it in the current ones too (just click the edit button) so people who start reading won't be deterred by it


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  •  05-09-2008, 4:20 PM 224015 in reply to 224013

    Re: Operation:Flamehawk

    k I will do that now
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  •  05-09-2008, 4:23 PM 224019 in reply to 224015

    Re: Operation:Flamehawk

    done
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  •  05-09-2008, 4:27 PM 224020 in reply to 224019

    Re: Operation:Flamehawk

    much easier to read


    Private Lewis<Ch 12 done
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  •  05-09-2008, 4:32 PM 224026 in reply to 224020

    Re: Operation:Flamehawk

    K
    checkout my fanfic operation flamehawk
  •  05-09-2008, 6:38 PM 224153 in reply to 224026

    Re: Operation:Flamehawk

    any commentary on my first 3 episodes from anyone
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  •  05-09-2008, 6:49 PM 224169 in reply to 224153

    Re: Operation:Flamehawk

    ahhh... its kinda short so just add sumore episodes and we'll see how it goes 



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    the world will speak for him.
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  •  05-09-2008, 6:52 PM 224177 in reply to 224169

    Re: Operation:Flamehawk

    K

     


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