And yet another great FF comes to a close. Good job omega, you truly perfected this.

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"Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."

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Epilogue
One Week Later
Tape Recovered from Base XI area
Alpha IV: Glassed Subject 11934
[Playback]

    “Is… is this thing on?” a thin women looked into the end of the hand held camera and smiled widely. Her hair flayed wildly down her shoulders and her clothing was caked in mud. “My name is Kara Conner, we are all that remains of the Alpha Four mission.” She panned the camera slowly left. A man in tattered fatigues and worn battle plate stood leaned against a stone structure. He waved slightly and continued talking with the women next to him. She wore much the same thing with her hair done back into a rough ponytail.

    “That’s my brother Blake, and Corporal Ellen Hawks,” Kara continued. “They planned most of what’s going to happen. We found this…” She moved the camera to center on the large object that dominated the room they were in. Cylindrical cables extended from the base of the structure and a spherical light floated a bit to the side. Symbols floated aimlessly across the orb. “We still can only assume what it does, but if we’re correct, it just might be a way out of here. Here, take this.” She passed the camera to someone off screen. “You cameraman is now Private Paul Archer, a stray we picked up in the forest on our way here.”

    “Hey, we found you. If it hadn’t been for me and my squad, you’d still be wandering lost in the woods.”

    Kara smiled broadly and gestured for Blake to join her. “Alright, we’re going to try this now.”

    Blake frowned, “Are you sure you want to do this? We have at least five other marines who would be willing to…”

    She shook her head firmly. “It’s my fault we’re all here, I will try it first.” She stepped on to the platform, Archer following close behind. Blake positioned himself next to the orb, it lit up as he neared. “Alright Blake, hit it.”

    Blake pressed his hand against the soft blue light and the platform lit up in brilliant white and gold rings surrounding Kara. She turned to Blake and mouthed something before vanishing. After hours of study, UNSC professionals figure she said, “I will wait for you… on the other side.”

[End Tape]

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

Nothing?

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

Anyone have ideas for Part II, I could use them >.<

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

Love. It.

 

Ideas: They work on getting into the place. 

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Tank > Banshee

Bump

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm267/Omega501/Finished-FF-Ad-1.gif

 

Ad for my Next Part, check it out

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

This sucked, and hardly made sence, but AHTCarrier says hi

Here is a formatted Microsoft Word edition:

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=1YZ4QH7G

If someone could read/edit it and get back to me... that would be great.

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

Nothing?

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

well, i went ahead and read it all over again.

it was okay. at the end i still wasn't use to all the flashbacks, but i understand their use.
some parts seemed very rushed, and i found myself re-reading parts just to make sure i didn't miss something.
I know you're done with this, and probably don't want to do another re-write, but this has great potential for a very large story with great action. not that this didn't have that, but it could be tons better.

i have no doubt your next installment will be stellar. good writing to you...

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New story out! Halo: Below the Brine
(it's the best story you're not reading!)