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FF: Hunted

Last post 05-26-2008, 10:29 AM by paragon. 455 replies.
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  •  05-11-2008, 11:56 PM 226961 in reply to 226895

    Re: FF: Hunted

    You'd better stop spamming. I'd hate to click a certain button at the bottom of a post by a member of the Family. Semi-jk.


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  •  05-12-2008, 3:06 AM 227051 in reply to 226961

    Re: FF: Hunted

    Everyone with characters based on them, please PM me. I need to discuss something with you. Thank you.

    And don't spam this thread telling me you've sent the PM. I'll reply when I get around to checking my inbox.

    The next chapter probably won't be up for another day or so. I'm having a bit of writer's block.




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  •  05-12-2008, 5:01 AM 227095 in reply to 227051

    Re: FF: Hunted

    WTF, where's my character lol... JK.

    Well, to tell you the truth, this couple day wait is going to slowly but inevitably kill me.

    *The suspense and waiting starts to build up pressure in his head, this causes friction between blood vessels of which in turn make his head receed to the colour of a bloody red*

    I can wait, take your time and write like you've never written before. Write like god himself has taken over your body. lol.

    Can't wait.

    Good luck.




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  •  05-12-2008, 5:08 AM 227100 in reply to 227095

    Re: FF: Hunted

    Sparhawk:

    WTF, where's my character lol... JK.

    lol. Be patient. A spot may become available eventually.

    Sparhawk:

    *The suspense and waiting starts to build up pressure in his head, this causes friction between blood vessels of which in turn make his head receed to the colour of a bloody red*

    lol, don't pop a vessel, now.

    Sparhawk:
    Write like god himself has taken over your body

    I will sure do my best.




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  •  05-12-2008, 6:47 AM 227143 in reply to 227100

    Re: FF: Hunted

    Well, hopefully your writers block receeds within a couple days.

    Much luck with your next chapter.

     




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  •  05-12-2008, 6:52 AM 227144 in reply to 227143

    Re: FF: Hunted

    Sparhawk:

    Well, hopefully your writers block receeds within a couple days.

    Much luck with your next chapter.

     

    Hopefully it will. I anticipate the next chapter going up tomorrow if all goes well.


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  •  05-12-2008, 10:01 PM 227986 in reply to 227144

    Re: FF: Hunted

    Great, more for me to read.

    Ah... the aweful dispairing wait, full of suspense and the blind reaching of the almight darkness.




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  •  05-13-2008, 2:54 AM 228106 in reply to 227051

    Re: FF: Hunted

    Chapter 5 is up.

    Enjoy.




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  •  05-13-2008, 3:10 AM 228111 in reply to 228106

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    Edited: Wow... there was a lot of panicky action there, only a few shots went off and this showed how truly desperate they were. Great portrayal in this regard.

    Don, firing heavy cylinder rounds of lead into those 'buggers'...he's certainly the hero who don't take no sh#t.

    No spelling mistakes as far as I could recognise... impeccable grammar. Very good.

    This story nearly brings to light the full dramatization and futility of war, wonderful, entertaining to the point of a 'story with nearly no faults'.

    Nice layout.

    Very good job with this chapter.

     

     

     




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  •  05-13-2008, 3:18 AM 228113 in reply to 228111

    Re: FF: Hunted

    Sparhawk:
    Wow... there was a lot of panicky action there, only a few shots went off and this showed how truly desperate they were. Great portrayal in this regard.

    Thanks. I wish to accurately portray soldiers in combat, so that comment does encourage me more than you know. 

    Sparhawk:
    No spelling mistakes as far as I could recognise

    Thank you. Microsoft Word tends to fix all spelling mistakes before posting.

    Sparhawk:
    This story brings to light the full dramatization and futility of war

    Not yet. Soon, but it hasn't yet.

    Sparhawk:
    story with nearly no faults

    Note nearly. You want a story with no faults, read Harold Coyle and Patrick Robinson. My inspiration.

    Sparhawk:
    Very good job with this chapter

    Thanks. I'm not sure the last paragraph was a good conclusion, though.




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  •  05-13-2008, 6:10 PM 228553 in reply to 228113

    Re: FF: Hunted

    Nice chapter i loved how i sent that round threw the drones skull!

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  •  05-13-2008, 6:12 PM 228561 in reply to 228553

    Re: FF: Hunted

    good job! *pats hunter_killer on the back*


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  •  05-13-2008, 6:15 PM 228565 in reply to 228561

    Re: FF: Hunted

    Very good, keep up all the good chapters!

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  •  05-13-2008, 11:55 PM 228954 in reply to 228565

    Re: FF: Hunted

    Thank you for the responses.

    That round fired at the Drone just shows Sanchez's sniper skills. Hard to get a headshot with them. Or at least, it is for me. Probably because I suck at hitting small targets with a sniper rifle...

    And Bacon, I'll read your new chapter soon.

    And, just so everyone knows, the next chapter will most likely be up sometime this afternoon, hopefully within the next three hours.




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  •  05-14-2008, 2:27 AM 229010 in reply to 228954

    Re: FF: Hunted

    Chapter 6 is up.

    I'm having formatting problems, the spacing won't work properly, so there's a * next to the start of the chapter.

    Enjoy.




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