Sparhawk:Wow... there was a lot of panicky action there, only a few shots went off and this showed how truly desperate they were. Great portrayal in this regard.
Thanks. I wish to accurately portray soldiers in combat, so that comment does encourage me more than you know.
Sparhawk:No spelling mistakes as far as I could recognise
Thank you. Microsoft Word tends to fix all spelling mistakes before posting.
Sparhawk:This story brings to light the full dramatization and futility of war
Not yet. Soon, but it hasn't yet.
Sparhawk:story with nearly no faults
Note nearly. You want a story with no faults, read Harold Coyle and Patrick Robinson. My inspiration.
Sparhawk:Very good job with this chapter
Thanks. I'm not sure the last paragraph was a good conclusion, though.

New fan fic
Frontline Chapter 1 now up