Well, Don, here's the full story review you asked for.
Spelling-4
There were few spelling errors, none major.
Grammar-4
There were a few occasional grammatical errors that I mentioned in earlier posts.
Storyline-9
The story has an excellent story line, the only reason I didn't give it a 10 is because the overall concept of alien invasions during WW2 has, in my opinion, been used way too much. However, you are making this storyline rather engrossing.
Canon-10
Now, obviously I can't rate this bit on its place during the 2552 War, so this is all about the weapons effects and species interaction which, as far as I can tell, all seems perfect canon-wise.
Characters-10
The characters are all well thought out and have their own places in the story. They are not simply used to reinforce the same event occuring multiple times.
Personality-9
Each character has their personal traits and ways of speaking, which is good. What is even better is that you kept each character's ways of speaking consistent throughout all five chapters, which is difficult to do.
Descriptions-7
You did well describing the characters' surroundings, although you could improve in this area. I know it's difficult to do, but it greatly improves the readers' enjoyment.
Overall-53-Incredible
This was an excellent story, Don, and there are few areas that you could improve in, descriptions of the characters' surroundings being the main one.
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