Chapter 7 is halfway done

you guys might like this part 

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Good so far

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Halo: TCW
"As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley

thanks

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Just got finished reading that entire post.

One word... Awesome. *Two thumbs up*

 

All I can really say is that the indentations were a bit annoying at times, I have no other complaints with the fan-fics.

 

Keep up the good work.

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Man my account is rusty from never logging on here. If I had 3 thumbs they'd all be up. Keep up the good work.

By the way nice Altair sig Artemis.

 

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Artemis:

 

All I can really say is that the indentations were a bit annoying at times, I have no other complaints with the fan-fics.

any suggestions to make them less annoying? 

and thanks TimeRecon 

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Wait do you mean the paragraph indentations?

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TimeRecon:

Wait do you mean the paragraph indentations?

yes
 

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Mr. Bacon:

any suggestions to make them less annoying? 

Nada, I would say it makes yours unique, at least to the few fan-fics that I have actually read.

 

Halo-verse is practically just fan-fics now :/

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that's true

well if you have any ideas for the story 

or something to improve it you can just tell me 

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I think they should capture Mary and Lewis and find out Larry was captured too. Then they get together and blow out of there, but aren't very subtle. When they return to base, Sgt. Johnson disgraces them and then the base gets raided and Larry dies, along with some other marines. Then they find out the rebels aren't the only threat, and that there is more to Earth than they had suspected. I'll try to think of more if you don't. Tell if its crap or decent.

This is just a thought.

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TimeRecon:

I think they should capture Mary and Lewis and find out Larry was captured too. Then they get together and blow out of there, but aren't very subtle. When they return to base, Sgt. Johnson disgraces them and then the base gets raided and Larry dies, along with some other marines. Then they find out the rebels aren't the only threat, and that there is more to Earth than they had suspected. I'll try to think of more if you don't. Tell if its crap or decent.

This is just a thought.

whoa thats like a whole other story

but its good i try use some it

thanks for the ideas 

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Yeah I was meaning that all happens after the flashbang.

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TimeRecon:

Yeah I was meaning that all happens after the flashbang.

you got some good ideas

you should make a fan fic 

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I'm definitely creative enough but I don't have the capacity to write something that long. In words I meant to say a second ago, I probably can't. I might try though.

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