Do mine!

Do mine!

 

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Footbutt:

excellent story. there is good depth and plot, along with the descriptions of the fight sequences.

my ONLY complaint is the huge paragraphs. sometimes it seems there's so much going on in one that i'm looking to take a cranial breath.
does that make sense?

i'll try and reply with more with each chapter update.

 'twas good.

Hmm, I have been experimenting with those paragraphs. A lot of excellent books and novels I have been reading lately have been using paragraphs like that. I was seeing what it was like to write them. Thank you Footbutt (LOL!) I'm happy to know that I will be updated as I go. :D

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I agree. But novel books have more narrow pages...

So its more effective!

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I guess that makes sense. I'm keeping them though, it's hard for me to change them and make them shorter, too much to describe.

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Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
Wuv u Chuckles :D
Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?

Good job Kurby :)

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A grenade need not speak, for when he blows up, a blast speaks for him
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Try.

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MrGrenade:Good job Kurby :)

You didn't even read it!

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Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
Wuv u Chuckles :D
Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?

Okay, half of chapter three up. I won't give a description until I can finish it tomorrow, My *** dad and his ganblng, idiot friend are threatining me to hand then over the Laptop, apparetly they have no concept of what writing a novel takes. A LOT OF DAMNED TIME!

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Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
Wuv u Chuckles :D
Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?

Kuribayashi:

MrGrenade:Good job Kurby :)

You didn't even read it!

Total lol, it took me like 10 mins to read theough this morning and i quoted it....

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Kuribayashi:

MrGrenade:Good job Kurby :)

You didn't even read it!

Yes I did! I'm a fast reader. I read at 400 words per minute

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A grenade need not speak, for when he blows up, a blast speaks for him
The assassin returns in Klone 666 2.0

Dude, since when did you add a chapter 3?

And what your fav line Grenade?

Mines: "But sir, he called me fat"

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Sa’Kagé - JumpingJet:

Dude, since when did you add a chapter 3?

And what your fav line Grenade?

Mines: "But sir, he called me fat"

That's probably mine too

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A grenade need not speak, for when he blows up, a blast speaks for him
The assassin returns in Klone 666 2.0

Or:

A window smashed as a Privates body flew out of it. Wrex looked down at the Private. “How you doing Seeth?”

“Can’t complain Sir. You haven’t seen a tooth around here have you Sir?”

“No I have not Seeth.” Wrex left him alone, and went out to the camp

Loled so hard.

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Anyway, im going off for the night cya dude!

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Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

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Kuribayashi:Okay, half of chapter three up. I won't give a description until I can finish it tomorrow, My *** dad and his ganblng, idiot friend are threatining me to hand then over the Laptop, apparetly they have no concept of what writing a novel takes. A LOT OF DAMNED TIME!

I added it around the time I posted this...

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Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
Wuv u Chuckles :D
Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?