Halo: Relevance, Part I(Finished)

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  •  06-03-2009, 6:19 PM 612700 in reply to 612661

    Re: Relevance: Redux A rewrite by Omega

    Little extra to end the chapter:

    ______________________________

    Three Month Later

        “You did a great job, I admit that even I couldn’t have gotten all those people together in one place.” Kara sat idly back in and old office chair. Her apartment hadn’t changed much in the last year, but it was cluttered beyond belief. She stretched and waved here hand over a holographic display. A small figure appeared on top, with a simple face, and welcoming smile.

        “You couldn’t do much right now Salina,” Kara leaned back, pushing her hair out of her eyes. “You can barely tie your holographic shoelaces let alone run a warship. It’s going to take months to get you up to…” Her computer chirped as a camera feed demanded attention. A face appeared in a window on the screen. Captain Cane smiled broadly at attention. “Captain, what do you want at this hour?”

        “Sorry to disturb you Ma’am, but there’s a man here who claims to know you. He insists that you come down right away.”

        “Down to the docks Captain?” Cane nodded. Kara frowned slightly, sighing. “Who is he, I shouldn’t have to go down there until the final month of construction.”

        Another man walked into view of the camera, his plain face stood out next to the Captain’s wizened setting. He smiled at the sight of her, “Hi Kara, I thought I’d find you here.”

        She gasped, “Blake?”


    End of Chapter 2
     


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  06-04-2009, 6:34 AM 613279 in reply to 612700

    Re: Relevance: Redux A rewrite by Omega

    This is a brilliant ff. Can't wait for the next part to come.
    56/58 achievements
  •  06-06-2009, 4:36 PM 615506 in reply to 613279

    Re: Relevance: Redux A rewrite by Omega

    Bumped for the sake of bumping

    I NEED FEEDBACK!


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  06-10-2009, 4:23 PM 619237 in reply to 615506

    Re: Relevance: Redux A rewrite by Omega

    !@#$ing bumped

    ...

    anyone?


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  06-11-2009, 12:25 PM 620265 in reply to 619237

    Re: Relevance: Redux A rewrite by Omega

    Im still here, looking forward to another chapter.

     


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  •  06-11-2009, 12:44 PM 620285 in reply to 620265

    Re: Relevance: Redux A rewrite by Omega

    wow, i have not read this in a while. great as always, i think i should start reading this again.

    just call me R!zZle BiZzl£, it was my '08 account... i joined on 09-19-2008.
    WHAT? WHAT? WHAT?.....YEEAAH!

    I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass,
    faster than a fat ***, who sat down too fast.

    GLORY GLORY MAN UTD!
  •  07-05-2009, 10:18 AM 645012 in reply to 620285

    Re: Relevance: Redux A rewrite by Omega

    Bump

    I figure I'll get going on this again XD 

    Kinda fell behind when summer started.

    Chapter three will be up within the next week, so look forward to it


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  07-05-2009, 10:34 AM 645019 in reply to 645012

    Re: Relevance: Redux A rewrite by Omega

    We will
    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
  •  07-14-2009, 10:08 AM 653801 in reply to 645019

    Re: Relevance: Redux A rewrite by Omega

    Chapter 3: At the Edge of Night
    Surface of Alpha IV
    10 miles from Base XI
    Present Day
    17 Hours in

        Fire, that’s all there was, Fire and glass. Light from the sky fell steadily down on the planet, blanketing the once green landscape. The planet burned, and there was nothing anyone could do about it. Soldiers desperately cried out in the darkness as they were engulfed. A moon hung in the sky defiantly, eclipsed by fields of destruction. They were all doomed, there would be nothing left to tell the story, to warn Earth. Nothing but glass and ashes. Suddenly a voice cut through the bleak image, different then the cries of pain. It called, loud, clear, and beautiful in the dark. Two figures stood eclipsed on a hillside, one in the arms of the other. The voice sounded again, clearer. A phrase that would haunt the listener for the rest of his life, “I forgive you…”

        “Hey… are you going to get up or not? I’ve had to drag your ass this far already.”

        Private Paul Archer slowly came back from the foreboding images. He shook his head slowly, trying to wipe his mind of the memory. He looked up and stared at the familiar grin. “Uhg, what happened?”

        Linon’s grin widened, “You passed out again. I swear they taught us something in boot about ‘how to not pass out when crashing,’ but I could be wrong.”

        “I meant what happened after the crash, and I’ll remember that.” Archer stretched and stood up. “Where’s sarge?”

        Linon but a finger to his chin and tried to look thoughtful. “You know, I’m not sure. I fell behind dragging your lifeless body for the last ten miles.” He smiled quickly as Archer began to move towards him. “But if I had to guess, he would be just ahead in the clearing where the rendezvous is supposed to be.”

        Archer shook his head again, and then headed toward the clearing. He had some things to think about.


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  07-14-2009, 1:44 PM 653979 in reply to 653801

    Re: Relevance: Redux A rewrite by Omega

    Very nice imagery, I could practically see the plasma connecting with the ground, would've appreciated if it was longer though.
    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
  •  07-14-2009, 8:03 PM 654352 in reply to 653979

    Re: Relevance: Redux A rewrite by Omega

    It will be, I just post what I have done when I have it done. I'm different then most writers ^_^

     


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  07-16-2009, 11:32 AM 655883 in reply to 654352

    Re: Relevance: Redux A rewrite by Omega

    Bump

     


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  07-18-2009, 3:01 PM 658198 in reply to 655883

    Re: Relevance: Redux A rewrite by Omega

    just thought id do this so people can see the awsomeness of this ff.
    just call me R!zZle BiZzl£, it was my '08 account... i joined on 09-19-2008.
    WHAT? WHAT? WHAT?.....YEEAAH!

    I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass,
    faster than a fat ***, who sat down too fast.

    GLORY GLORY MAN UTD!
  •  07-23-2009, 1:04 AM 664792 in reply to 658198

    Re: Relevance: Redux A rewrite by Omega

    _____________________________________

    3 years earlier
    Reach
    Epsilon Training Facility

        Corporal Ellen Hawks braced herself in the drop pod. Ten seconds ago she was comfortably stretched out across a bunk on the UNSC Half Way There before a drill was called. Two hundred ODST’s were hot dropped from the ship into unknown territory. They weren’t even told what they were going to do, but that was part of the job.


        “Alright marines,” The screen inside her pod flickered and a helmet centered it’s self in the picture. “Welcome to Epsilon, this will be your final test. Beta Platoon is down there, and they’ve been waiting for a rematch after Bravo beat their arses all the way back to Earth. In your pod should be a rife of your usual preference, when you hit planet side, regroup with you squads and move to the marked location on your Heads Up Display. There will be a marker there, pick it up and return it to the rendezvous point. This should be a cake walk for you hell jumpers, good luck, command out.”

        Hawks switched on her own comm. “Alright Gamma, use the usual pattern. Patterson, you’re up front, James take rear. I don’t know what Beta has in store for us, but I don’t want you all running in there half cocked. Thirty seconds to impact, prepare to defend your position until the rest of the squad can get to you. Good Luck.” Acknowledgment lights blinked across her display, four in all.

        Patterson, James, Kinsley, and Pork made up Gamma squad under Hawks. They were the top ranked ODST squad on the ship, and all expectations were turned to them. This mission had to go off without a hitch.

        A timer in the corner of Hawks display ticked down to the second of impact. The pod slammed into the ground, creating a small crater around it. Hawks blew the hatch of and immediately darted for the nearest cover. She watched as Patterson, James, and Kinsley all made their way to her position. So far there was no enemy fire. Suddenly Pork’s indicator flashed red. The squad instantly changed direction and moved toward their comrade.

        It didn’t take long to find him. Pork lay clumsily hanging out of his pod. Bright florescent green was splattered across his chest. He’d been hit. Hawks flicked on her comm. “Pork, are you alright?” He didn’t answer, but moved his arm slightly to gesture toward the marker. He’d been shot, his armor had locked up to simulate the numbing effect of being hit by a bullet. Pork wasn’t going anywhere. Hawks shook her head and gestured into the trees. Gamma followed her orders and moved out.

        The clearing was blank. The entire forest shook with gunfire, but the clearing was blank. Planted in the center was a plain steel pole with a red flag hanging from the top. It was too easy. “Hey Kinsley, you see anything?”

        “Negative Corporal, nothing. You think they all ran after the other squads?”

        “Nah, they know us too well to leave it completely unguarded.” James shifted to get a better view. “Theirs something we’re missing.”

        “Well, no harm no foal,” Patterson said, moving to stand. “I’m going for it.” Before Hawks could say anything, Patterson was off and sprinting into the clearing. The air buzzed as two forms shot from above the trees.

        “***,” Kinsley said, raising his sniper rifle to get a better view. “MAKO drones, two of them. Nasty things, Patterson doesn’t stand a chance.”

        “Can you get a shot?” Hawks said quickly, trying to think of a way to save Patterson from humiliation.

        “I can get one…”
        
        “Well do it!” Kinsley sighted one of the drones and fired. The pellet struck the shell and the drone veered off, now ‘destroyed’. The second drone swooped in on Patterson, firing at the defenseless marine. Then it too swerved off and flew away. “Nice shot Kinsley.”

        “But I didn’t shoot Corporal, Ma’am. I couldn’t even sight it.”

        “Then who…” Pork’s status light flickered amber and green. “Well I’ll be, down but not out aye Pork?” The light continued to blink. “Grab the flag Patterson, lets get the hell out of here.”

    Two days later

        “I’d like to congratulate you again for you victory corporal. You and you team did a stunning job.”

        “Thank you commander.” Hawks stood on board the Ares IV station above Reach. Commander John Collins stood next to her. “I couldn’t have done it without my team sir.”

        “Of course, and that’s why I’d like to reassign your squad Corporal. I want you on the Pearl Harbor.”

        “The Pearl Harbor sir? I thought she was decommissioned ages ago.”

        “Oh, she was. But we reactivated her, retrofitted with the latest gear and equipment. She needs a good squad on board to keep the place in one piece. Are you up for it?”

        “Of course sir. We’re ready to go anywhere you need us sir.” She turned and stared out into space through a large window. Just beyond it a large ship floated by, obviously old and repaired many times. Painted across the side in large black lettering was the words UNSC Pearl Harbor. She muttered, “I just don’t know if she’s up to the task…”


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  07-26-2009, 9:39 PM 669907 in reply to 664792

    Re: Relevance: Redux A rewrite by Omega

    ...

     *sigh*

    Bump


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
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