Hello? Who brought this back from the dead?

Ah well It's one of the best stories on the site, nice to see it again.

ty500600:Unacceptable you will all read this amazing story now! it is by far the best on the site

Damm right your going to read it.

This deserves more recognition. And all five of you on the library will read it again!

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well, it was okay. certainly not the BEST i've read in this Library.

but it was good. it read more like a comic book than a short story. i felt it probably should have stopped at chapter 4; all the spartan stuff just seemed so forced and not "believeable."

i know, i'll probably get hammered for criticizing an 'old work', but i'm being honest.

Footbutt:

well, it was okay. certainly not the BEST i've read in this Library.

but it was good. it read more like a comic book than a short story. i felt it probably should have stopped at chapter 4; all the spartan stuff just seemed so forced and not "believeable."

i know, i'll probably get hammered for criticizing an 'old work', but i'm being honest.

And what pray-tell is the best? Anders and the Arbiter?

I think he did a good job with the premise he had, even if it was a bit generic.

I still think it's one of the best on the site, there only a few better than this.