The Offensive Bias advertisement, review and reader request thread!

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  •  08-29-2009, 8:22 PM 710750 in reply to 710705

    Re: The Offensive Bias advertisement, review and reader request thread!

    Update!: Tier 0 review up, please take a look at both the review and the excellent FF.
    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  08-29-2009, 8:30 PM 710766 in reply to 710750

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    Thanks for the review. And for the last part of it I see the confusion, and I see I should have explained this more in detail.

    When I said Harvest was deemed the most suitable it was because it was the first planet glassed. And because of this the ion concentration had died down allowing ships and such to enter the atmosphere without fear of storms or other weather conditions. I suppose it is somewhat unrealistic with the war going on but with the majority of the Covenant fleet elsewhere this gives ONI all the time it needs to test this out. And the un-glassing of Harvest is essentially their test.


    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
  •  08-29-2009, 10:50 PM 710937 in reply to 710766

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    Holy crap! A 10/10?

    Thanks for the review! You were overly generous, but thanks.

    It was a very well written review, TM. Thanks again!

    The Tier 0 review was also a good read, I'm seriously thinking of checking it out.


    Chuckles

    Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

  •  08-29-2009, 11:05 PM 710946 in reply to 710937

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    Chuckles:

    Holy crap! A 10/10?

    Thanks for the review! You were overly generous, but thanks.

    I meant every word I said, it was a very good read and I enjoyed each chapter, you should finish it.

    The Tier 0 review was also a good read, I'm seriously thinking of checking it out.

     You should ;)

     

     


    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
  •  08-29-2009, 11:17 PM 710953 in reply to 710946

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    You know what? The heck with it. I was just wanting advice on direction, but I've started making headway on my plot.

    Could I get a serious review too?  http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/672638.aspx


    Current Fan Fictions in the Library:

    ODST: Hellbound

    The Interrogation of Ellen Anders

    Halo: Archangel
  •  08-29-2009, 11:29 PM 710956 in reply to 710953

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    I'm writing a new chapter right now, TM =)

    But, I need a break, time to wander through the library...


    Chuckles

    Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

  •  08-30-2009, 9:33 AM 711133 in reply to 710953

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    Spartan R41:

    You know what? The heck with it. I was just wanting advice on direction, but I've started making headway on my plot.

    Could I get a serious review too?  http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/672638.aspx

    No problem. I'm glad you are making progress on your plot. Writers block is hard for me to overcome. Especially the most recent case. I'll update you on there now.


    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  08-30-2009, 9:36 AM 711137 in reply to 711133

    Re: The Offensive Bias advertisement, review and reader request thread!

    Oh and TM, why don't you pick your next review, so we can clear these things up faster. They're starting to pile up :) I seriously wasn't expecting this much publicity and positive outlook on this Thread. Good to see it's working out. And remember, if anyone would like to apply for a job as one of my readers or reviewers, please be sure to contact me either here, or through the PM system. Thank you for your time.
    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  08-30-2009, 9:45 AM 711147 in reply to 711137

    Re: The Offensive Bias advertisement, review and reader request thread!

    How about me?

    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  08-30-2009, 9:48 AM 711148 in reply to 711147

    Re: The Offensive Bias advertisement, review and reader request thread!

    I can already tell without even reading your FF's, that they are going to be 10/10's. You're an extremely talented author.
    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  08-30-2009, 9:49 AM 711151 in reply to 711148

    Re: The Offensive Bias advertisement, review and reader request thread!

    I'd still like a review anyway, there are weak parts, I can tell. And 10/10? I doubt it, there's always room to improve.

    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  08-30-2009, 9:51 AM 711153 in reply to 711151

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    You're going to get a review, I'm just saying, you are an astoundingly amazing writer. There is always room to improve yes, but for some, it's harder to spot what needs to be improved. But, all in due time.
    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  08-30-2009, 10:11 AM 711181 in reply to 711153

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    OB are you working on any one at the moment?
    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
  •  08-30-2009, 10:13 AM 711184 in reply to 711181

    Re: The Offensive Bias advertisement, review and reader request thread!

    Hey you mind reading this, and give me some hints on how I could improve the story

    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/708646.aspx



    kiunk:
    go drown in a fire

  •  08-30-2009, 10:25 AM 711203 in reply to 711184

    Re: The Offensive Bias advertisement, review and reader request thread!

    Can I please... have a review? For Klone 666 2.0? 

    EDIT: Oops sorry I didn't realize I was on the list. But make sure not to review the first, just the second 


    A grenade need not speak, for when he blows up, a blast speaks for him
    The assassin returns in Klone 666 2.0
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