The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

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  •  08-21-2009, 1:43 PM 702346 in reply to 702341

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Small, but important. He was shown as being smug, being fanatical and possibly dangerous. I can't wait to see your reaction to what I make you do, and what happens to you...
    Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
    Wuv u Chuckles :D
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  •  08-21-2009, 1:43 PM 702347 in reply to 702346

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    *Smiles realy hard*

    Dude! Like dont tell me ever until you do the chapter!!!


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  •  08-21-2009, 1:50 PM 702353 in reply to 702347

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Your part is in chapter six. I'm currently writing chapter three.


    Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
    Wuv u Chuckles :D
    Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?
  •  08-21-2009, 1:52 PM 702357 in reply to 702353

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Oooooooooooooooooooooo.......

    I am going to make a character called Logan baised around you dude!


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  •  08-21-2009, 1:54 PM 702360 in reply to 702357

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Am I evil, and do I die? Am I even a main character or a side character?
    Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
    Wuv u Chuckles :D
    Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?
  •  08-21-2009, 1:55 PM 702362 in reply to 702360

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Well, he isnt like Durzo Blint and Kylar.

    He will be in line evey 1/3 or 1/4 chapters.


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  •  08-21-2009, 1:56 PM 702365 in reply to 702362

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Evil? Or good?

    Die? Or live?


    Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
    Wuv u Chuckles :D
    Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?
  •  08-21-2009, 1:57 PM 702367 in reply to 702365

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Good.

    And i leave the rest your you to work out as the story develops!


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    December the 15'th, go here! ^^

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  •  08-21-2009, 1:58 PM 702370 in reply to 702367

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    I've already said what happens to you, least you can do is repay the favour!
    Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
    Wuv u Chuckles :D
    Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?
  •  08-21-2009, 2:04 PM 702378 in reply to 702370

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    You havnt told me if i die or not!

    Anyway: You age ranges from 12-22 throughout the novel. You are the son of a Duke, your father was supposed to take the throne, but he didnt want to start a civil war with the Sa'Kage. Instead he decided to help the king by stopping an invasion from the north by another nation. Leaving you to become Duke in his absence. You Become Good friends with Kylar since he changed his identity, but you will never know Kylar is a killer.

    Thats all ill tell you for now as the story will tell the rest.


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    December the 15'th, go here! ^^

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  •  08-21-2009, 2:31 PM 702423 in reply to 702378

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Yes, you die. Evil never prevails.
    Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
    Wuv u Chuckles :D
    Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?
  •  08-21-2009, 2:35 PM 702427 in reply to 702423

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    NOOOOOOOOO!

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WWaLxFIVX1s

    I dont belive it!


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    December the 15'th, go here! ^^

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  •  08-21-2009, 2:36 PM 702431 in reply to 702427

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    What did you expect? You're an evil character for God sake!
    Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
    Wuv u Chuckles :D
    Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?
  •  08-21-2009, 2:38 PM 702434 in reply to 702431

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Well good people can die too!
    Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

    December the 15'th, go here! ^^

    JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder
  •  08-21-2009, 2:42 PM 702442 in reply to 702434

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    excellent story. there is good depth and plot, along with the descriptions of the fight sequences.

    my ONLY complaint is the huge paragraphs. sometimes it seems there's so much going on in one that i'm looking to take a cranial breath.
    does that make sense?

    i'll try and reply with more with each chapter update.

     'twas good.


    New story out! Halo: Below the Brine
    (it's the best story you're not reading!)
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