[FF] Halo 3: Insurrection (COMPLETE)

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  •  05-04-2009, 6:52 PM 577329 in reply to 572018

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    glad to see ur still doing it!


    FFTS

  •  05-05-2009, 10:17 AM 578104 in reply to 577329

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    Socom427:glad to see ur still doing it!
    Socom! You're alive!

     :D


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  05-08-2009, 7:34 PM 581678 in reply to 578104

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    When is the next chapter gonna come up.

    I just read thought it. Very internesting thoreys and i love the plot line.


    " I stay here until all others have gone. I will make sure I am the last one to be here. And when I am, I shall make a thread. A memorial thread. And I shall leave these forums behind. " - Offensive Bias
  •  05-09-2009, 11:25 AM 582070 in reply to 581678

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    Part 14: A long talk

    John opened the mechanised door to the ships cockpit, and saw the Arbiter stood, looking out of the Spirit's window. A melancholy look was upon his face.

    "What's up?" John asked tentatively, in the same kind tone he would speak to fellow Spartans in.

    The Arbiter didn't answer immediately, instead giving a long, drawn out sigh. The Elite stared one last time at the asteroid cluster outside, then looked down at his feet.

    "Everything I have ever known has been a lie." He said bitterly. "The Prophet's lied to me, lied to everyone in the Covenant. They knew the truth about the Forerunners, and possibly the Precursors, and they kept it from us. My education, friendships, tactics; all these are based around a false religion. I myself am nothing but a lie. I don't even have a name any more, that was seen to by Truth. And he wrongly gave me this mark, nothing will ever hide it."

    There was silence for a few moments, then John spoke, placing an armoured hand upon his friend's shoulder.

    "Well Arbiter, what is your name? You've never told me."

    "...You really want to know?" The Arbiter asked in a puzzled voice. "Very well, once, I was known as Thel Vadamee', ruler of the state of Vadam; the state you were imprisoned in incidentaly. Then everything changed when I left for the Covenant. I was appointed Ship master, one of the highest ranks a Sangheili could be blessed with, and I, in my stupor, was blind to the blanket of lies the Prophet's were weaving around us. I gave countless orders to kill, sometimes I even pressed the red button myself. All in the name of the false Covenant."

    Thel then gave a sobbed laugh, and looked up, facing John.

    "I must look pretty pathetic now mustn't I? But it's hard, carrying on when you don't know anything about yourself any more. And now, I'm at war with my brothers, killing them....It's just too much for me Spartan, I don't know if I can do this any more."

    John looked at him in the eyes, and spoke.

    "Listen Thel, we will get through this. It's all a horrible mistake. Our races will form an alliance again soon, and everything will be fine."

    There was a pause, and the two battle hardened warriors appraised each other. Then Thel spoke.

    "I know you're right Spartan, but I can't shake the feeling that I'm a traitor. Alas, that is my fate. Moving along Spartan, did the Oracle perchance say where this ship was headed?"

    John was confused, Thel was the one piloting the ship.

    "Well don't you know?" He asked of the Elite, and received a short shake of the head.

    "Nay Spartan, the Oracle input a set of co-ordinates into the Spirit when he came on board. I have no idea where we are heading. A slip space jump seems to be planned in an hour, but I'm not sure why we aren't using the drive now."

    "How strange. Anyway, I'm going to go talk to Johnson for a bit. Will you be okay?" John received a nod of the head in confirmation.

    And the Spartan walked back through the door he had entered. Thel gave another sigh, how had things become this bad? Perhaps if he had stayed with his brother's, he would have been able to stop the fighting. But it was too late now, and even his dear colleague R'tas Vadum was against him.

    To take his mind off of dreary thoughts, Thel began cross referencing the co-ordinates with the ship's navcom. Hopefully it would turn up some results.

    *********************

    Sirens began wailing across the UNSC Soul of ice, and Marines rushed to the Longsword and Short sword fighter jets in the hanger bay. From his comfy seat in the Destroyer's observation deck, the recently appointed Lord Eden observed calmly the incoming Elite ships. Ten of them, fully armed to the brim.

    Eden allowed himself a slight laugh, and brought up to his eye level the Champagne he was drinking. He admired the way the raging sunlight reflected off the glass' surface, and took a sip. The alcohol was nearly 2000 years old, dating back to medieval times. It tasted good.

    Suddenly, the large intercom in the corner of the room squawked, and the voice of a nervous man came out of it, the quality was supreme, nothing but the best for him. It sounded as if the man was in the same room as him, which of course was impossible. No on entered Eden's observatory deck unless they had a *** good reason to. Video calls from his wife that his aide held were not classed as a good reason.

    "Lord Eden sir, we've got ten ships heading down to Earth, your orders?" The man spoke.

    Eden took another sip of his Martini, and reclined further back into his chair.

    "What's your name son?" He asked in a laid back tone, holding down the button which turned on the microphone next to him on the old Georgian mantelpiece, which was complete with a glossy sheen.

    "Em....Lieutenant Daniels sir, first class. I'm on board the London sir. Should I give the order to the rest of the Orbital Defence Platforms to fire?"

    When Daniels said London, he had meant the Orbital Defence Platform that was gridlocked into it's respective city. Eden felt a twinge of homesickness, he'd been born in London.

    "Fire at will Leftenant", Eden said, doing away with the American way of saying the rank. "No one is to be left alive, I want everyone on board those ships killed."

    There was silence as the young officer contemplated upon those orders, then spoke.

    "Aye sir." The line went dead.

    Lord Eden put his feet up on the jewel encrusted footrest near him, and waited for the fireworks. He didn't have to wait long. Soon, the stars outside were blocked by metal rounds as every gridlocked Platform in the Northmen equator fired their Mark V MAC guns at the threat. They knocked clean through the shimmering energy shields of the Elite ships, and tore through all ten. A few moments later, they all exploded in a flash of blue thunder.

    Eden clapped his hands in delight, finishing of the Martini in a single go, and popping the olive in his mouth. He loved the sight of a good explosion.

    "Excellent work Leftenant." He shouted boisterously down the microphone. "I think I'll write you up a promotion to Captain. Yes, Captain Daniels, sounds rather good doesn't it? Now, carry on with the good work. Oh, and order our Zero-G troops to finish off any stranglers who may ave survived. Eden out."

    Before the Lieutenant could get in a word of thanks, Eden terminated the line once again.

    He sighed in contentment, only 35 years old and already head of the UNSC forces. Life was good.

    **********************

    "So, how exactly did you survive? That laser blast hit you full on." The Master Chief asked Sergeant Johnson, as they both sat down together in the corner of the ship.

    Avery paused, and slowly stuck yet another cigar in his mouth. He began chewing in thought.

    "Well Chief, let's just say I'm not just another marine." He replied wryly.

    "I'll say." John replied, referring to all of the times Johnson had saved his ass since they first landed on Alpha Halo, all those months ago.

    "No no no, I don't mean skill wise. I mean physically." Came a frustrated reply, and John smiled within his helmet. He'd managed to bait Johnson into further conversation.

    "Oh?" He said, innocently.

    "Yeah, well, there's no easy way to put this Chief, but you won't believe me unless I tell you the story first."

    The Spartan patiently awaited the story, and leaned forward, interested.

    "Well, back when I was young, I joined the corps. You yourself would have been just a bit younger than me Chief. Anyway, when I signed up,, rather than being shipped off to basic, I got assigned to a Project, named Project ORION. I hadn't been told a great deal about it, but the pay was good, and apparently I was an ideal candidate, whatever the hell that meant."

    "Anyway, I had to sign a whole bunch of non-disclosure agreements, all of which I'm breaking right now. At first, I and the other three hundred or so newly signed up soldiers were just doing training, which for some reason was a lot harder and more taxing than the training I've overseen since then. Also, we'd have to study as well; we were taught by some smart A.I."

    This sounded very familiar to John, and he got a strange feeling in his gut.

    "Anyway, a bit later on, they said they'd make us stronger, faster, and smarter than the other Marines. But we'd have to volunteer for it, and not sue if anything, and I quote "Was to occur during the safe procedure."

    "I accepted, as did most of the others. Anyway, they injected us with a whole bunch of chemicals, and left us to stew for a little bit. But apparently, something went wrong. Many of my friends were killed or deformed, and I was one the few to make it out okay. Sure, like they said I was stronger, faster, and smarter than the other marines, but out of three hundred, only ten of us were left, 5 of whom were deformed. Naturally, the Spooks overseeing the project were horrified with the results. The project had been an utter and total failure."

    "Anyway, they pulled some strings with the UNSC, and got us reassigned to nice, cosy positions in the corps. We were good, but we weren't the super soldiers they'd hoped we would be. So they covered us up, and I became Sergeant."

    "As for Project Orion, it was put on hold. That is until it was started up again by one Catherine Halsey. This time, she said it would work. I was one of the few to know about it, still being linked to the Project, and naturally I opposed it. No one listened. But I guess the Doctor was right, it did work. After all, living prove of that sits before me."

    "Me?" John asked in confusion.

    "Of course. Ever wonder why I strived so hard to get along with you Chief, despite the fact that behind your back, other Marines shunned you and called you, no offence, a freak of nature? It's because I was glad to see another like me. A newer model, admittedly, but still, I felt a connection."

    "You mean to say you're a Spartan?" John asked in disbelief.

    Before Johnson could reply however, the Arbiter strode into the room, a satisfied look on his face.

    "Spartan, Sergeant, I ran the co-ordinates for the scheduled slip space jump through the Spirit's Battle net, and I turned up some results. Apparently, the destination is a human world, one which the Covenant expressed a great deal of interest in."

    "Well Arby, what's it called?" Avery said, standing up.

    "According to the battle net, you humans call it Onyx."
    .



    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  05-09-2009, 1:34 PM 582149 in reply to 582070

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     But I guess the Doctor was right, it did work. After all, living prove of that sits before me."

    "Me?" John asked in confusion.

    Best line yet.


    " I stay here until all others have gone. I will make sure I am the last one to be here. And when I am, I shall make a thread. A memorial thread. And I shall leave these forums behind. " - Offensive Bias
  •  05-10-2009, 4:57 AM 582964 in reply to 582149

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    This just put me in a bad mood. I just hit the last page with nothing else to read right now >.<
    Silver Zealot:
    And even if there was other units to help the vampires they would have got turned into ice cubes and then blasted into ity bity tiny little bits and shipped back to thier base in very very tiny boxes.

  •  05-11-2009, 1:16 AM 583783 in reply to 582964

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    I Lost My Name1:This just put me in a bad mood. I just hit the last page with nothing else to read right now >.<

    Then my work here is done :)


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  05-12-2009, 4:54 PM 585732 in reply to 583783

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    Hahaha at 'Life was good.'

    *INSERT EGO INFLATING STATISTICS*
  •  05-13-2009, 12:34 AM 586302 in reply to 585732

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    Saximo7:Hahaha at 'Life was good.'
    Oops, copy and pasting error.

    :)


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  05-13-2009, 4:55 AM 586409 in reply to 583783

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    Wolverfrog49:

    I Lost My Name1:This just put me in a bad mood. I just hit the last page with nothing else to read right now >.<

    Then my work here is done :)

    Ummm, I don't know how you took it. I don't understand it yet. But the stories great. It was as a complement rather then an insult. I meant as in, I regret that I had nothing else to read. The stories great though. That's why I was disappointed that I read it so fast and got to the last page. If you thought I was insulting it, not at all.


    Silver Zealot:
    And even if there was other units to help the vampires they would have got turned into ice cubes and then blasted into ity bity tiny little bits and shipped back to thier base in very very tiny boxes.

  •  05-13-2009, 3:18 PM 587102 in reply to 586409

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    I Lost My Name1:
    Wolverfrog49:

    I Lost My Name1:This just put me in a bad mood. I just hit the last page with nothing else to read right now >.<

    Then my work here is done :)

    Ummm, I don't know how you took it. I don't understand it yet. But the stories great. It was as a complement rather then an insult. I meant as in, I regret that I had nothing else to read. The stories great though. That's why I was disappointed that I read it so fast and got to the last page. If you thought I was insulting it, not at all.

    lol He meant the " my work is done " part as a good thing. hopefull { he does } now you meant well.


    " I stay here until all others have gone. I will make sure I am the last one to be here. And when I am, I shall make a thread. A memorial thread. And I shall leave these forums behind. " - Offensive Bias
  •  05-14-2009, 10:59 PM 589063 in reply to 587102

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    wolver! dude! i know why bunige and esemble dont look at our Fan Fictions!

    VOCAB! KEY WORDING! it lacks in all FF's including mine and your!

    ive been doing ALOT of reading and it came to me!

    SO IM NOT HATING ON U! OR ANYONE! BUT THATS THE PROBLEM!!!

    idk randomness... 



    FFTS

  •  05-15-2009, 12:56 AM 589112 in reply to 589063

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    Yeah, I've been reading Contact Harvest at the moment and I've been thinking that too. Good to see you're still alive Socom.

    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  05-15-2009, 1:20 AM 589119 in reply to 589112

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    im always alive..anyways ive destroyed finding family

    im currently creating an instalment in the halo series set way befroe any dates

    so in tunr its off the charts

    im throwing in some tom clancy, with some bourn identity

    with some HALO ACTION! 



    FFTS

  •  05-15-2009, 1:49 AM 589129 in reply to 589119

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    Yeah, sounds good. Shame about Finding Family though.

    I'm just writing the next part of this, hopefully it'll be good.


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
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