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(FF) The Great War 2.0

Last post 01-16-2009, 11:45 PM by blazingsage2. 158 replies.
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  •  06-15-2008, 4:21 PM 257886 in reply to 257879

    Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

    hmmm sounds interesting
    VIVA LA FAMILIA

    wanna see somthing funny read through the first two pages of this thread http://halowars.com/forums/thread/318933.aspx

  •  06-16-2008, 4:07 PM 258729 in reply to 257886

    Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

    Wait, COD 5?

    my god...well we had better get to drive vehicles in that game, or else it'll just be COD 4 with a fresh coat of shiny paint...

     

    and i'm reading chapter 3 now don...

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  •  06-17-2008, 12:56 PM 260279 in reply to 255446

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    Ch.3 is up :D
    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/255446.aspx]The Great War[/url]Ch.5 is up
    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/224551/ShowThread.aspx#224551]Caba's Journey[/url]Done
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  •  06-17-2008, 1:00 PM 260288 in reply to 260279

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    already read it, and again great work don...
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  •  06-17-2008, 1:02 PM 260294 in reply to 260288

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    Great chapter lol grunty dog food.

    The first couple of sentences were repeated was that intentional?

    Im back! Now with 72% more unseriousness!

  •  06-17-2008, 1:03 PM 260298 in reply to 260294

    Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

    Good Job Don!

  •  06-17-2008, 1:09 PM 260319 in reply to 260294

    Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

    killer! Grunt!:

    Great chapter lol grunty dog food.

    The first couple of sentences were repeated was that intentional?

    Sorry...i didn't notice...

    Fixed.

    Thanks yall.

    *waits for more reply*:D

    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/255446.aspx]The Great War[/url]Ch.5 is up
    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/224551/ShowThread.aspx#224551]Caba's Journey[/url]Done
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  •  06-17-2008, 1:28 PM 260396 in reply to 260319

    Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

    that grunt got owned

    very good

  •  06-17-2008, 2:38 PM 260703 in reply to 260396

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    hahahaha stupid grunt...

    good story don im loving it

    VIVA LA FAMILIA

    wanna see somthing funny read through the first two pages of this thread http://halowars.com/forums/thread/318933.aspx

  •  06-17-2008, 4:35 PM 261018 in reply to 260703

    Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

    so what'd i miss?
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  •  06-17-2008, 4:50 PM 261062 in reply to 261018

    Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

    not much
    VIVA LA FAMILIA

    wanna see somthing funny read through the first two pages of this thread http://halowars.com/forums/thread/318933.aspx

  •  06-17-2008, 8:31 PM 261264 in reply to 261062

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    haha! The Kar 98 very nice:D

    Great work so far Don. Im waiting in suspense for chapter 4.

    "Feel Feel My Hatred, It bleeds down, On your faith, Feel Feel your ending, It's so grim and cold here!
    How can this be for real? I thought I already killed you"
    My Hatred, Trivium

  •  06-17-2008, 10:33 PM 261501 in reply to 255446

    Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

    I take back what I said earlier, Don. These new chapters are better than the originals.

    This new chapter certainly gave more background on Nigel than the original did.

     

    beginning of chapter:
    he knew nothing could he more dangerous

    "he" should be "be".

    Otherwise, I didn't see anything else that was wrong. Pretty good chapter, Don. Keep it up.

    Officialy offline as of April 4 Australian time.

  •  06-17-2008, 10:37 PM 261515 in reply to 261501

    Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

    Don, you are going above and beyond with this story, you have successfully implemented much more depth then your previous version.

    I'm only going to say one thing, your story has an instantaneous enjoyment factor.

    Wonder what your next chapter will be...

    P.S. Hunter/Cazador pointed out the somewhat rare mistake/s.

     



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  •  06-17-2008, 10:37 PM 261516 in reply to 261501

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    Captain Cazador- Soldato:

    I take back what I said earlier, Don. These new chapters are better than the originals.

    This new chapter certainly gave more background on Nigel than the original did.

     

    beginning of chapter:
    he knew nothing could he more dangerous

    "he" should be "be".

    Otherwise, I didn't see anything else that was wrong. Pretty good chapter, Don. Keep it up.

    Woot! Thats 1 more!
    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/255446.aspx]The Great War[/url]Ch.5 is up
    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/224551/ShowThread.aspx#224551]Caba's Journey[/url]Done
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