Offensive Bias:I am almost ashamed at how happy I am to have fans again, it brings tears to these old eyes :')

Haha, no problem :P

And that chapter was brilliant!

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Aloysius:
-Less than half a of percent of players have the General rank on Xbox Live.

How is the General rank fair again?

Halo Fanboys. The next most annoying thing next to Jonas Brothers fanboys.

Cheers Korther :) You're doing good with your Brute assimilation story, so... How much is your story going to cover? Everything that spans the Brute's stay in the Covenant?

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

Offensive Bias:Cheers Korther :) You're doing good with your Brute assimilation story, so... How much is your story going to cover? Everything that spans the Brute's stay in the Covenant?

I kind of plan on doing one more chapter of the Brutes regaining Tier 2 technology and all that jazz in first entering the Covenant.  I'll probably jump ahead a dozen or so years for the times of Harvest and do another 5 chapters in Part 2 there.  Then I'll jump 20 years to the time of Halo 2 or so and do a Part 3 for 5 chapters, and then 5 chapters for something with ODST game city, and then for 5 more chapters for a final part on Halo 3 events.

Might have spoiled a bit too much but meh :3

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Aloysius:
-Less than half a of percent of players have the General rank on Xbox Live.

How is the General rank fair again?

Halo Fanboys. The next most annoying thing next to Jonas Brothers fanboys.

Oh well, I just wanted to know the direction you were going with it.

New chapter out tomorrow :) This one from the viewpoint of Joseph as he is dragged into an assault on a rebel outpost a mile from where Hans was captured.

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

Offensive Bias:

Oh well, I just wanted to know the direction you were going with it.

New chapter out tomorrow :) This one from the viewpoint of Joseph as he is dragged into an assault on a rebel outpost a mile from where Hans was captured.

I look forward to it.  I'll be jumping into a full on first person perspective on the 2nd part on my thing, and last chapter of Part 1 is out!

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Aloysius:
-Less than half a of percent of players have the General rank on Xbox Live.

How is the General rank fair again?

Halo Fanboys. The next most annoying thing next to Jonas Brothers fanboys.

Read and commented :)

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

Haha! yes! he was captured! ... I mean..oh no! i hope he escapes! =p  good chapter OB, keep it up.

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Read my first FF: A light in the dark (chapter 11 now up!)

http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/606023.aspx

nice chapter OB :)

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just call me R!zZle BiZzl£, it was my '08 account... i joined on 09-19-2008.
WHAT? WHAT? WHAT?.....YEEAAH!

I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass, faster than a fat ***, who sat down too fast.

Thanks guys :) More soon!

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.