Reaper:Hey Arty, heres my attempt. :P

Comments?
Sexy, but you need to learn how to use other styles.
But don't feel bad, its a new style to me too.
Edit: Try erasing any extra stuff over the girl, duplicate the entire thing, and smudge everything in the duplication towards the girl. Set the copy at 5-20%.
It will help keep the focus on the girl, instead of on the crystal-like objects you have around her.
Click ma sig!

Oh, into the City of Woe...