As the Admin/Creator of the Series of Live Action Fan Fictions, before this one.... I don't mind people elaborating on the template I set down. I don't plan on making more, so it's not like I should care if someone uses parts of it or not.
Also, it can't be a rip-off of the Fan Fictions I made, because for various reasons, they have all be locked via Paragon. I don't mind. Some things just don't work out.
My advice is this. The Halo Wars Forums are going to be somewhat hostile to Fan Fics of this Genre. That's been proven.
My advice to someone who want's to come on to these fan-fics and complain about it and flame the people on them. Don't. You wouldn't like it if they came onto your Stories and spammed, insulted and flamed on those, now would you?
Oh... and the last Live Action I made, it was transferred to a site that has a section for Fan Fic RolePlays. If you want the link ask Baconsen. He has it.
Finally; I think this picture can sum up my feelings right now,

The Journey of a Thousand Miles sometimes ends very, very Badly. Indeed they can.
Dystopian... Life in a Dystopian Civilization. Check it out. Chapter 2 is up!