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  •  10-16-2008, 9:12 PM 388209 in reply to 388193

    Re: Cybernetic-134

    Good, really good...
    Dystopian... Life in a Dystopian Civilization. Check it out. Chapter 2 is up!
  •  10-16-2008, 9:21 PM 388222 in reply to 388209

    Re: Cybernetic-134

    yeah i got it to 4 and a half stars
    Dont tempt me
    p.s wolver is the best fan fic writer...ever
  •  10-16-2008, 9:30 PM 388248 in reply to 388209

    Re: Cybernetic-134

    @ Boot: Thanks, Yours is good also, *Eager to see what happens!*

    Okay I got to go to bed, I'll add more tommorrow,


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  •  10-16-2008, 9:32 PM 388255 in reply to 388248

    Re: Cybernetic-134

    Oh yeah, second chapter of mine is up.

    G'night to you Fyrhawk.


    Dystopian... Life in a Dystopian Civilization. Check it out. Chapter 2 is up!
  •  10-16-2008, 9:34 PM 388261 in reply to 388255

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    THis is freaking great its the reason im running around the forums!!!
    Dont tempt me
    p.s wolver is the best fan fic writer...ever
  •  10-16-2008, 9:38 PM 388274 in reply to 388255

    Re: Cybernetic-134

    Boot To The Head:

    Oh yeah, second chapter of mine is up.

    G'night to you Fyrhawk.

    Kk, I'll use it as a bed time story, ;D


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  •  10-16-2008, 9:56 PM 388313 in reply to 388261

    Re: Cybernetic-134

    seargentjhonson:
    THis is freaking great its the reason im running around the forums!!!

    this story? or just all of the stories, casue that's one reason why I'm here.......

    *SPOILER*

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    BFG(something from a Halo 3 level.)

    please if you know, or think you know, please don't ruin it. ;) thanks.


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  •  10-16-2008, 9:59 PM 388318 in reply to 388313

    Re: Cybernetic-134

    wait this story is great its the best one SO FAR
    Dont tempt me
    p.s wolver is the best fan fic writer...ever
  •  10-16-2008, 10:00 PM 388322 in reply to 388318

    Re: Cybernetic-134

    besides im not the spoiling type
    Dont tempt me
    p.s wolver is the best fan fic writer...ever
  •  10-16-2008, 10:11 PM 388343 in reply to 376462

    Re: \\:Cybernetic-134://

    This page is a must STAY ON LAtest posts...

    i might make the story all on 1 post if you guys get confused


    Dont tempt me
    p.s wolver is the best fan fic writer...ever
  •  10-16-2008, 10:49 PM 388385 in reply to 388343

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    sweet, epic story man good job.
    "Spartans never die they only go to hell to regroup." unknown
  •  10-17-2008, 2:42 PM 388620 in reply to 388193

    Re: Cybernetic-134

    We just chatted about the covenant resistance on Diablo, the covenat base, and the flood. When we entered upon the bridge we had to snake our way through a jumble of marines, officers, and techinicians. It wasn't easy, but we did get to the captian.

    "Corporal Conan....Corporal Hanson. Nice to see both of you. Corporal Conan, you may call me Captian Redson." -The captian shook our hands and greeted us. He nodded his head towards 'Hanson', the ODST with me, to the back. So Hanson left to do something else.

    "As you know...there are Covenant resistance on Diablo. You have been given a special priority on this mission. Codenamed 'Cybernetic-134'." -The captian turned towards a large holo panel in the bridge.

    "Cybernetic-134?" -I seemed confused.

    "Yes. It's a codename for all of your files. But I'm ordered, by ONI, and same goes for other Officers, so we must all tell you the codename." -The captian told me.

    "So, what special mission I'm I ordered to do?" -I wanted to be amused, but no more flood.

    "We need you to help take a heavily fortified city." -He tapped something into a command board, which brought up a large screen shot of a city.

    The city was burning in a lot of places, but it was still enormous.

    "Our infrantry gets shot up in this field, before they even get close to the city. Tanks are immediatly hit by wraiths over these large walls." -The captian hit another command, show another pic.

    This pic. showed a large wall surrounding the city, which was a far way off from the wall itself. I could see some AA guns in between the city and the wall.

    "Those AA guns don't let anyone near this city, so that only allows us to drop troops by a far distance." -The captian shook his head.

    "So, I'm gonna have to sneak over there without being noticed. How?" -I was really curious.

    "We'll fire smoke screens in the field," -The captian seemed very confident.

    "If you can get artillery to hit there, then why don't you just pummle the city?"

    "Shields, the city has a large shield around it, there's no way we can get rounds through it."

    "So, I'm gonna be sent in, destroy the nearest AA guns, then go into the city and wipe out the shields?"

    "Pretty much, but the shields are located in sections. Each at an end of the city. If you can take out one, our armor and infrantry would come in and help out." -He was indeed confident.

    Well here we go again with some life dangering mission...


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  •  10-17-2008, 3:16 PM 388651 in reply to 388620

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    "Corporol. If you are capable, or you think you are capable, there is a main power supply at the city's center, if you can take that out the day is ours. All AA, radio communications, and shields will be off-line." -The captian turned to me again.

    "Sir, yes, sir. When exactly are we going to arrive to the planet?" -I didn't really want to go to the center and finish the whole thing in a short time, while risking my life extremely with little to no help. I reallly just wanted the UNSC forces there to fight the covenant on their own, but that would take even more lives....I can't decide right now.

    "When will we arrive? About in three...two...one." -The captian looked back out the front of the bridge.

    There was a fairly large planet. There were around fourty ships around it, both UNSC and Elite forces. The planet had dozens of firie patches, must've been from orbital bombardments and glassings.

    "So now I must go to the armory for weapons?" -I asked as I slowly stepped away, bumping into some officers scurrying by.

    "Yes." -The captian turned back to me and saluted. "After that go to hanger A3."

    "Yes, sir." -I returned the salute and left, pushing through dozens of men.

    As I walked through the halls to the armory, following the signs, I talked to Jonie.

    "So how do you plan to go in today?" -Jonie asked.

    "Heavy, there's no way I'm going in covert. I'm gonna let the Covenant know that I'm here." -I was being serious.

    "Well know we may know what you're capable of in full out combat." -He little image appeared showing her do some martial arts combat.

    I just smirked when I saw that. It took a couple of minutes to find the armory, but I found it.

    I went about the armory grabbing multiple weapons: an assault rifle with a scope, a battle rifle, two magnums, a rocket launcher.

    "You guys got anything special?" -I really wanted to know.

    "Like what? Something with full out fire power?" -The armorer looked from behind his counter.

    "Yea. Something that can wipe out a wraith in one shot." -The armorer could tell that I was serious.

    He looked at the weapons that I carried. Then he asked. "You're that cyborg guy aren't you. Yea, we've got something heavy."

    The man went to the back, so I walked up to the counter and placed my weapons down.

    He came back with the largest gun that I've ever seen. I could tell that he was haveing trouble to carry it, and he looked strong too.

    "What is that..." -Jonie's little image came back, she seemed to have been looking at the weapon with interest.

    "This my friend is a proto-type. We had three of them shipped here, cause of you. It's known as the Spartan Laser." -The armorer patted the side of the large weapon.

    The weapon, I could tell could really do some damage. And the word 'Spartan' really wanted me to get it.

    "I could use that...." -I smiled at the man. "I'll take it."


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  •  10-17-2008, 3:32 PM 388667 in reply to 388651

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    The armorer handed my the large laser cannon. I heaved as I got full grasp to it. I looked at the weapon in a daze. I've never seen a gun this big before, that a soldier can carry around.

    Jonie's image was looking at the weapon with interest.

    "Proto-type? It seems like one, I wonder how it fires?" -She looked up at me.

    "I don't know, but I don't care either. Just as long as it does it's job I'm good.

    She just nodded.

    *sorry guys, I've got to go, I'll add more later. What's your favorite parts so far?*


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  •  10-17-2008, 3:34 PM 388673 in reply to 388667

    Re: Cybernetic-134

    its good but its kinda unorganized by the way you post the chapters/scenes.
    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
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