What's this awesome website? Hint? lol.

Two different parallel roads is a very nice idea...it will be enjoyable to read.

Good luck with the canon lol.

Have fun my good sir.

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Sparhawk:

What's this awesome website? Hint? lol.

Two different parallel roads is a very nice idea...it will be enjoyable to read.

Good luck with the canon lol.

Have fun my good sir.

As soon as you ask, I've forgotten. Hang on, I'll find it...

*Searching*

http://blog.ascendantjustice.com/halo-3/the-terminals/

I'll be incorporating some things from that into the finished copy.

Ah... thanks.

I'll wait with all fervor and patience for this upcoming work of art.

 

 

 

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Sparhawk:

Ah... thanks.

I'll wait with all fervor and patience for this upcoming work of art.

 

 

 

You really want to see something don't you? Ok, I'll try and get some work done this weekend.

great fan fic

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Lethe:

What if we had a game where 2 different sides of units engaged each other in some form of military conflict?

That'd be awesome.

what if Halo Wars had that?

high tall:

great fan fic

Thanks. I put it up on Bungie forums but they didn't seem to care for it much their. Oh well, their loss...

it seems to me that the guys on bungie dont like anything unless its like thsi:

A million billion rockets flew into the hunter and exploded it, the blast also shreddeb a thousand elites as a million pelicans dropped off their troops and fire tons of rockets at the enemy.

 Ok got a bit carried away but yeah i think your fic is pretty dam good

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Im back! Now with 72% more unseriousness!

killer! Grunt!:

it seems to me that the guys on bungie dont like anything unless its like thsi:

A million billion rockets flew into the hunter and exploded it, the blast also shreddeb a thousand elites as a million pelicans dropped off their troops and fire tons of rockets at the enemy.

 Ok got a bit carried away but yeah i think your fic is pretty dam good

Thanks. I guess my writing is a little to 'high-brow' for them. I was hoping to..you know..haZ ReConZ...for writing it, but hey, what are ya gonna do?

A few more days until school lets out and I can get started on the next parts of the novel.

Like i have said before, this story is amazing, i try to be a good writer, but these stories dominate mine.  A suggestion, if i may, i would like to learn more about the moniter watching the humans get off the ship...and why there is only ONE reclaimer

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ty500600:

Like i have said before, this story is amazing, i try to be a good writer, but these stories dominate mine.  A suggestion, if i may, i would like to learn more about the moniter watching the humans get off the ship...and why there is only ONE reclaimer

Remember how 343 Guilty Spark refers to the Master Chief as 'reclaimer'. Even though Spark does initially find a Marine he thinks is a relcaimer, the marine dies and Spark goes to the chief. Spartans are more suitable for retrieval of the Index and for tasks un-operatable by Monitors. you'll see more in a few weeks.

but all the humans are the reclaimers.

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Lethe:

What if we had a game where 2 different sides of units engaged each other in some form of military conflict?

That'd be awesome.

what if Halo Wars had that?

all the humans are forerunners, but the spartans are the only suitable candidates for a reclaimer

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SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.

offensive bias:

all the humans are forerunners, but the spartans are the only suitable candidates for a reclaimer

Bingo.

|TLSDS|: Alert. Motion detected. Atmospheric Sensor 15 indicates Parasite [Significant threat to array]. Scanning database.......

|TLSDS|: Local records incidate applied protocol for situation-8F754R Removal of all possible host targets affiliated with Sector 17J.

|TLSM| Overwrite protocol. Situation deemed moderate.

|TLSDS|: Protocol 8F754R indicates-

|TLSM| Sensor 15 inidcates only .010% of contaminated air contains parasitic spores.

|TLSDS|: 8F754R dertermines our actions. Protocols were established to maintain the security of the array and its affiliated structures.

|TLSM| Such a low risk is hardly cause to warrant such a high degree of death.

|TLSDS|: Cross checking records from |Triton| |Io|. Qualatative analysis pending. LSs recalled. 8F754R overwritten.

A truly inspiring story to any who wanted to create their own story.....

i thought the first chapters were amazing... when Sheppard became a spartan i thought the storyy became to impersonal.... but this is just my personal view and i believe you should be truly proud of this novel.

congratualtions.

 

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True Gamers Never Cry.