Wow. This FF is better than most that I read. I love how you managed to put a fully developed character (Archer) into a new enviroment, making him have to develop all over again. When most books try to do that, they fail miserably, and although it does seems a little rocky, chapter 4's ending leaves me wanting MOAR.
Also, you didn't happen to get the name "Archer" from the sniper in MW2, did you? Then again, I guess there have been many snipers codenamed "Archer" throughout the years ;)
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