The chapters are rather short but very good.

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Angatar, Iron-Power

sorry, I am not very good at stretching things out.

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carefull... it^ will steal your soul...

I'm great at that! once I made a job of picking up my backyards leaves and it took 3 and a half weeks lol!

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Angatar, Iron-Power

lol, took me about a hour for my uncles yard. i helped him, and its an acre big, but only took about 1 or so hours

RougeSpartan414:

I'm great at that! once I made a job of picking up my backyards leaves and it took 3 and a half weeks lol!

not what I meant.  when  I said that, I meant that I am not very good at stretching out the thing happening in the story so that they take up more space.  being able to do that lets you describe things better, and that means that although the story progresses slower your readers will be able to understand it much better.

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carefull... it^ will steal your soul...

But its still funny right? RIGHT?

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Angatar, Iron-Power

Yes, it was funny.  ("

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carefull... it^ will steal your soul...

haha that was so absurdly stupid rogue but it was funny :P... and yes i find it very hard to stretch out my writing... but i have never found myself to write short chapters... only prologues are short...my smallest being 5 maybe 6 pages... size 12 font.. no spaces ( the HTA prologue doesnt count :P).... i also wonder how avid does it.. i mean his are uber long... hehe... well anyways... :P

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Prophet of Regret26:

haha that was so absurdly stupid rogue but it was funny :P... and yes i find it very hard to stretch out my writing... but i have never found myself to write short chapters... only prologues are short...my smallest being 5 maybe 6 pages... size 12 font.. no spaces ( the HTA prologue doesnt count :P).... i also wonder how avid does it.. i mean his are uber long... hehe... well anyways... :P

P.S. then again my longest chapters arent that long.. maybe 10-15 pages... :P... hehe w.e

you calling me stupid or my actions of makeing it take 3 and a half weeks?

p.s. did I mention I had to do part of the woods behing my house?

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Angatar, Iron-Power

i love this story

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RougeSpartan414:

Prophet of Regret26:

haha that was so absurdly stupid rogue but it was funny :P... and yes i find it very hard to stretch out my writing... but i have never found myself to write short chapters... only prologues are short...my smallest being 5 maybe 6 pages... size 12 font.. no spaces ( the HTA prologue doesnt count :P).... i also wonder how avid does it.. i mean his are uber long... hehe... well anyways... :P

P.S. then again my longest chapters arent that long.. maybe 10-15 pages... :P... hehe w.e

you calling me stupid or my actions of makeing it take 3 and a half weeks?

p.s. did I mention I had to do part of the woods behing my house?

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TELL ME!!!!!!

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Angatar, Iron-Power

This is better than my hover tree offensive, or maybe just as good.

BUMP! because I am going to post the next chapter really soon.

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pretty good story, the only thing i didnt like is how they got the armor. i mean who puts a door in the back of a cave. and how the a.i. know their names. and how the armor has a blast thingy. but its good.