JumpingJet's Novel: Shadows Call.

Last post 12-17-2009, 2:40 PM by Offensive Bias. 131 replies.
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  •  08-20-2009, 2:28 PM 701443 in reply to 701442

    Re: Novel: Shadows Call. By JumpingJet

    Helpfull.....
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  •  08-20-2009, 2:29 PM 701447 in reply to 701443

    Re: Novel: Shadows Call. By JumpingJet

    A few mistakes I noticed... Overall, pretty average. *Looks around nervously*
    Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
    Wuv u Chuckles :D
    Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?
  •  08-20-2009, 2:31 PM 701454 in reply to 701447

    Re: Novel: Shadows Call. By JumpingJet

    Average?

    Really?

    Or are you kidding becuase you put "Look around nervously"?

    Soooo confused!


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  •  08-20-2009, 2:33 PM 701460 in reply to 701454

    Re: Novel: Shadows Call. By JumpingJet

    It was good. I have nothing more to say...

    Your character in mine is going to be soooooo evil.


    Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
    Wuv u Chuckles :D
    Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?
  •  08-20-2009, 2:34 PM 701463 in reply to 701460

    Re: Novel: Shadows Call. By JumpingJet

    Wait? What?

    I am soooo confused....


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  •  08-20-2009, 2:35 PM 701465 in reply to 701463

    Re: Novel: Shadows Call. By JumpingJet

    What's to be confused about?
    Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
    Wuv u Chuckles :D
    Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?
  •  08-20-2009, 2:36 PM 701469 in reply to 701465

    Re: Novel: Shadows Call. By JumpingJet

    So you think its pretty avarage and good?


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    December the 15'th, go here! ^^

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  •  08-20-2009, 2:38 PM 701472 in reply to 701469

    Re: Novel: Shadows Call. By JumpingJet

    No, it's good...


    Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
    Wuv u Chuckles :D
    Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?
  •  08-20-2009, 2:40 PM 701475 in reply to 701472

    Re: Novel: Shadows Call. By JumpingJet

    Thanks, all we need now if chuckles to make the thread tonight or tommorrow!
    Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

    December the 15'th, go here! ^^

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  •  08-20-2009, 2:45 PM 701484 in reply to 701475

    Re: Novel: Shadows Call. By JumpingJet

    Yay... I can't wait to win.
    Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
    Wuv u Chuckles :D
    Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?
  •  08-20-2009, 2:51 PM 701495 in reply to 701484

    Re: Novel: Shadows Call. By JumpingJet

    You tell me that i am over confident...

    Wow, our threads have been on the front page for a while now and still no new readers...


    Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

    December the 15'th, go here! ^^

    JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder
  •  08-20-2009, 2:54 PM 701500 in reply to 701495

    Re: Novel: Shadows Call. By JumpingJet

    Hopefully, the contest shall draw in a few.
    Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
    Wuv u Chuckles :D
    Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?
  •  08-20-2009, 2:56 PM 701505 in reply to 701500

    Re: Novel: Shadows Call. By JumpingJet

    Hopefully.

    Anyway, my last post, im going off for the night dude! Glad i could get the chapter up for you!


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    December the 15'th, go here! ^^

    JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder
  •  08-21-2009, 10:20 AM 702196 in reply to 701505

    Re: Novel: Shadows Call. By JumpingJet

    I don't know OB I think this story is really good, he might have a shot at winning.

    "Devon turned and yelped as if more suppressed by Kylar’s sudden appearance rather than the sting in his neck."

    I think you meant suprised and not suppressed.

    An assassin, oh wait "Wetboy", story is interesting.


    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
  •  08-21-2009, 12:24 PM 702257 in reply to 702196

    Re: Novel: Shadows Call. By JumpingJet

    Yeh, an assassin is a simple hitman.

    But a wetboy has the ability to use his talent.


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    December the 15'th, go here! ^^

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