Offensive Bias: I think I might personally speak to him about that...
TM, you outdo yourself my friend! I was awed at the way you have improved since way back when, you leave me thirsty for more even now! I commend you on this one TM, however, one thing didn't ring clear with me. How did the Spartan kill a Brute with a punch. Remember that Brutes can survive bullets to the head and being crushed by tons of debris. I don't care how strong the Spartan in question is, it shouldn't die in a punch. I think you could have made that little scene into an epic battle between the Brute and the Spartan, that I would have liked to see, with a little lack of action in that chapter, it would have filled my bloodlust.
Let us get this out of the way, thank you, I find it so much easier to write then when I first began, but still I have a while to go before my stories are at the level I want them to be.
Secondly, that was not a Spartan, that was Derek, and if you remember the conversation between Hughes and the ONI agents, I stated that the SIGMA Soldiers were stronger than Spartans, but the punch didn't kill him, it thrust his head back so fast that his neck snapped, I would've added it but I thought people would've caught what I meant.
And finally, I left out action to show how efficient Alpha team was. To show they could destroy a Covenant ground base and fleet without being detected, but do not worry, blood will fall soon enough.
"Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
People say Halo fanboys are annoying. They obviously haven't met a CoD fanboy.