make that 2

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LFF!!

^this will be on my first post of every page

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

o...k...

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Click me!
LFF!!

JaxTheAx117:

o...k...

It's a directory...

So people can find the chapters

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o

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Click me!
LFF!!

Alright, the next update is almost done...

You get to find out what the incedent that drove Gamma squad away from Lucas

Gravemind will also come into play later in the chapter (*evil laugh*)

But I need a planet name...

I've narrowed it down to these few:

1. Egori

2. Oiruo

3. Tzoc

4. Pyiteo

Post your votes/comments on the name or on the way I'm taking the story...

I'll check back in a few

-Omega-

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

Update...

Still need that planet name, so get out there and post

 

Anywho, sorry for the update being so small, I'm still not sure where I want the "Present Day" plot line to go.

I'll update it more as soon as I can.

Signing Off

-Omega-

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

Three days since the last post...there goes the theory that you'd get publicity with the contest.

This is an excellent story so far, definitely up there with Vigil and Jeteye. How's the next update coming?

The only errors I saw were in the use of your and to. Don't forget the difference between your and you're; there were a couple times that you used them wrong. Also, you sometimes used to instead of too; make sure you use them properly.

Excellent work, keep it up.

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Captain Cazador- Soldato:

Three days since the last post...there goes the theory that you'd get publicity with the contest.

This is an excellent story so far, definitely up there with Vigil and Jeteye. How's the next update coming?

The only errors I saw were in the use of your and to. Don't forget the difference between your and you're; there were a couple times that you used them wrong. Also, you sometimes used to instead of too; make sure you use them properly.

Excellent work, keep it up.

Next update is shaky,  not too sure where I want it to go.

If you could, please PM me where the mistakes were, it would be much obliged.

Thanks for reading

 

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

Oiruo, because it reminds me of oreo. lol

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"I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass faster than a fat *** who sat down to fast"

If you don't like R!zZle BiZzl£ then you can shnizzle my nizzle

R!zZle BiZzl£:

Oiruo, because it reminds me of oreo. lol

agreed

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"Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
"Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
"Better dead then Red!"
"Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"

I'm taking a break from Echos to clear my mind.

This FF will be continued, I just need some time to clear out possible outcomes of different plot branches.

You may see some other misselanious work come up now and then, but nothing serious. 

See you all here again soon...

-Omega-

PS: Vote this as FF of the Month! PM Vigil and tell him who writes better

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

Still have mixed emotions about where I want my plot to go...

If you have suggestions, post them, otherwise, it may be a while before another update.

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

idk...

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"I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass faster than a fat *** who sat down to fast"

If you don't like R!zZle BiZzl£ then you can shnizzle my nizzle

yay, an update.

My streak of writers block is gone. There may even be another update tonight...

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.