Pheonix War

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  •  12-03-2008, 5:53 PM 416672 in reply to 416179

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    Great guess, Ablot, and you're right, they do act a lot more "human."  You will see an explanation for that, but I will not say if it is in this piece or the sequel.  That is all I will say.


    "Whoever said the pen is mightier than the sword never encountered automatic weapons."
    -General Douglas MacArthur

    The Pheonix War: Pheonix Rising:
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/378844.aspx
  •  12-04-2008, 7:11 PM 417385 in reply to 416672

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    hehe, looking forward to it.

    "When I give food to the poor they call me a Saint, when I ask why the poor have no food, they call me a Communist."
    -Dom Hélder Câmara

    Smexy fanfics that I've read on this site so far
    -Phoenix War
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  •  12-09-2008, 5:22 PM 421484 in reply to 416672

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    Chapter Eleven

    10 December 2583; Military Calendar

    Jorgenson Air Force Base, New Cyprus

     

                The 14.5 millimeter round was originally conceived by the Soviet Union in the twentieth century as a light anti-armor round for use against tanks and other vehicles.  Since then, it has been adopted as a machinegun and now as a sniper’s cartridge.  Even now, after six hundred years of existence, the projectile maintained its power and could still be used quite effectively for its original purpose.  A particular Brute piloting a Banshee flyer was about to learned that one the hard way.

                Sergeant Olson depressed the trigger on his SRS99D rifle and let a pair of the massive rounds roar out into the night.  The first struck the forward area of the craft’s canopy and punched clean through, shredding the internal display system and other electronics.  This was not a mortal wound to the Banshee, but the same would not be said for the next impact which tore into one of the side plates on the cockpit and continued on, imbedding itself in the pilot.  With a dull flash, the right flight stabilized blew out, and the gravity-propulsion engine on the end of the attached wireframe “wing” stopped the soft blue glow that denoted its operation.  The result of all of this was the surviving left engine sending the wounded craft into an uncontrollable tailspin with the alien pilot vainly trying to right his flyer through his own shock induced by the second bullet’s impact.

                Onward, this process carried for the three seconds it took for the Banshee to slam into the ground at over one hundred forty kilometers per hour.  A single blue fireball erupted up with a boom from the fiery grave of flesh and machine. 

                “Nice shot,” observed the Spartan, Charlie.  “I didn’t think you Army boys could actually hit a target that wasn’t standing still.”

                The sniper rolled his eyes and chose not to respond to the jibe, “Whatever.  Now sir, do we have permission to continue firing?  Looks like the mike-foxtrots fell for it.”

                “Group One, commence firing,” ordered Jack in his response, referring to all of the humans with flash-suppressed weapons.  He pulled the trigger on his MA5K-S within half a second of his command and let a flurry of hot steel slam into the nearest Covenant ranks.  Only one of the diminutive Grunts was hit, but the stocky alien’s screams were enough to cause all hell to break loose. 

                The Covenant forces had no idea what had happened when one of the Banshees had died, but the rapid roar of the Spartan’s rifle gave combined with the shriek of the Grunt gave away the action.  Several panicking Grunt and a few of the shield-carrying Jackals discharged their plasma pistols off in random directions, shooting at anything they thought could be an enemy.  As fate would have it, two of those plasma blasts struck the ground in front of the hangar, and Nguyen immediately fired in return, his rifle’s muzzle flash pinpointing the human squad.  A Brute Captain roared at the action and managed to direct the alien fire at the hangar.

                “Nguyen, I thought I told to hold your fire!” shouted Jack over the cacophony of weapons fire.  The Spartan triggered off another burst, emptying his rifle’s magazine, and while scrambling to reload, he noticed one of the Phantoms was lifting off and preparing to bring its heavy plasma cannon to bear on their position.  “Charlie, KILL THAT DROPSHIP NOW!”

                Charlie’s reply came in five successive thuds from the Covenant weapon resting on his shoulder.  His first two rounds fell short, one catching a Brute in unusual armor dead center in the chest, sending bits of the bear-like creature’s body flying off in a dozen directions.  The other three walked their way up the targeted Phantom’s nose causing a secondary explosion forcing the craft to yaw off to its left and crash down into a formation of Grunts and Jackals forming up for a charge.

                No time was given to revel in the victory.  Olson was putting as many rounds as he could downrange, but his sniper rifle was built to kill light vehicles and infantry, not to serve in an anti-aircraft roll as he was using it.  The three remaining Banshees were rolling and diving enough that he was only able to score one more grazing hit on the fighters, and it was not enough as the SRS99D’s slide locked back after ejecting the spent casing of his last round.  “I’m out!” he cried, ripping an M7 submachine gun off his hip, the weapon useless at the remaining three hundred meters separating the forces.

                The Brute pilots, realizing that the lethal fire had stopped, began strafing the assortment of human soldiers.  One of the dozens of bolts of azure energy caught the spotter, Hannover, directly in the chest and dropped him with a blood-curdling scream.  Jack snapped his headed over to look at the late trooper, shock rolling through his system at his first view of violent, allied death.  His emotions barely stayed hidden as he bellowed his next order, “Spartan, forget the Phantom, take out those ****ing Banshees!”

                Charlie stopped fumbling to reload the oversized Covenant weapon to shoot a look at his squadmate, the abnormal sounds in his voice surprising the commando.  He tossed the thought aside and shrugged while ramming home a fresh clip of fuel rods into the alien anti-armor gun.  Hefting the alien device up, he began tracking the flyers as they came around for a second pass with a ghastly whine.  The pilots were not even maneuvering to evade any possible fire when Charles-3B-047 pulled the Covenant equivalent of a trigger.  A lone green dart lanced out and connected head-on with the lead Banshee, blasting it into a rolling fireball that fell quickly and slammed into the ground just meters ahead of the hangar’s wall.

                The second Banshee was barely beginning to evade when the second shot flew out and hit at the craft’s port wing root, sending the wing and engine careening off in one direction, and the main body’s smoldering remains into the flight path of Banshee number three.  The two flyers collided, pitching the stricken craft up and away while the second was forced into a downward spiral building onto its already immense speed. 

                Charlie saw what was about to happen. “GET DOWN!” he cried a moment late.  The Banshee slammed into the hangar’s remaining west wall with enough force to continue straight through as it exploded into a rolling blue ball.

     

                Jack was lying face down on the ground, his ears ringing and the world swirling around him.  It took a moment for his mind to catch up with the events of the last few seconds.  He shifted slightly and saw his helmet lying on in the rubble, barely visible through the dust floating in the air, its tinted faceplate shattered and the dark grey paint scraped off to reveal the titanium alloy beneath.  Then a dull thudding slipped through his mind’s fog and the commando moved again and saw the muted forms moving through the debris.

                Six… Seven… Eight! Jack swore to himself as he counted the figures and realized the number was a clear indication of Covenant inside the hangar.  The way the aliens were moving around suggested they were searching for surviving members of the human squad.  One stopped for a moment and looked down at something on the floor and nudged it with its hoof-like foot.

                Panic flooded through Jack as the creature leveled its weapon at the unlucky human.  Come on where is my weapon?  Wait, my pistol!  Jack’s hand flew back to his hip and tore the M6G off as the Brute fired into one of the survivors. 

                “YOU SON OF A *****!”  Jack roared as he threw himself up and snapped his weapon’s sights to the alien’s head.  The Brute was but five meters away and the Spartan could hardly miss.  Three rounds shattered the creature’s helmet and skull and sent a grayish mist into the air as the bullets reduced the brain to little more that a light mush. 

                Seven other aliens whipped around to face the commando and prepared to fire until a Brute wearing black-and-red armor roared for them the hold fire.  The alien whipped up its gravity hammer and charged at Jack, who by this time had brought weapon to bear on the Covenant captain. 

    Yet he did not have time to take aim and guarantee a kill.  Jack was forced to dive out of the powered hammer’s path as he pulled the trigger letting another pair of rounds fly into the dark.  A loud ping followed by a hiss succeeded the gunshots as the Spartan recovered from his escape and found himself directly behind the Brute.  Bringing his weapon up, he attempted to take aim and deliver a killing blow to his attacker when the Brute whipped around with astounding alacrity and hit him directly in the chest the hammer’s massive head.  The blow sent his entire four-hundred twenty kilogram armored body flying into a hangar wall.  Stars exploded before his eyes as he dropped to the ground, unable to do anything more than roll onto his side and face what was soon to be his killer.

    Stomping to the felled Spartan, the Brute Captain raised its hammer, preparing to deliver a final blow to its quarry.  Jack closed his eyes and braced himself for the impact and hoped death would not be painful.  A single, loud crack echoed into the cavern of the hangar.  Interesting sound for a gravity hammer to make, he thought as he became certain he was dead.  Hmm, it didn’t hurt.

    Then came a single heavy thud as something landed next to him.  Wait a second, that’s not supposed to happen!  Jack forced his eyes open as the chatter of a SMG reached his ears. In front of him lay the Brute Captain, albeit with most of its head missing, and just beyond the alien corpse was…

    Charlie! About bloody time!  With this realization, Jack forced himself to move and reach for the Spiker clamped to the felled Brute’s hip.  Fighting through a wave of pain, he wrapped his fingers around the weapon’s grips and ripped it off the body.  The other Spartan had already felled three more Covenant when Jack took aim with his new gun and pulled the trigger, letting a flurry of white-hot metal shards fly into a nearby Grunt, perforating its orange armor and methane tank.

    The remaining Covenant, a Grunt and Jackal, began running for the hanger’s makeshift exit, only to be cut down by combined fire from Charlie’s Mauler and M7.  The second Spartan tossed away the now-empty Mauler and sprinted to his downed comrade.  “You all right?” Charlie asked.

    “Do I look like I’m okay?”  Jack replied rhetorically, as he forced himself to stand.  A wash of pain flooded through his body, almost dropping him back to his knees.

    “You got lucky, those rounds of yours disabled the hammer’s gravity enhancer.  If that hadn’t happened…”

    “…I’d be a goner,” he said through a grimace.  Jack started coughing hard, spitting up blood onto the ground in front of him.  Charlie reached as if to help his friend, but Jack waved him off, “Nothing you can do.  Now what about the rest of the men?”

    Charlie turned off and began walking over to where the first Brute Jack had killed had fired.  “It’s Olson,” he said to the other Spartan, “he’s gone.”  Jack nodded in response and began limping around the hangar hoping to find the Marine survivors.  The commando cursed the loss of his helmet, the built-in thermal imaging would have made this so much easier.

    After ten minutes they had found Corporal Nguyen, unconscious, but alive.  The Marine had been trapped under a slab of concrete that had fallen from the Banshee’s impact, but rather miraculously did not crush him.  Meyers, however, was nowhere to be seen, that is, until a weak voice came from inside the wrecked Phantom from the battles three days prior.  “Why isn’t that other dropship moving?”

    Both Spartans whipped to the sound, weapons pointed and ready to fire, but upon seeing the wounded man, held their fire.  Charlie spoke first, “What the hell are you doing in there Marine?”

    “Hiding sir, no one else was moving and the Brutes were starting to move on the hangar.  Didn’t want to die out there,” the private responded weakly.  “The dropship, though, shouldn’t it be moving?”

    Jack took a second to process the question, and then looked out to the same ship, wondering the same thing.  Charlie provided an answer, “No crew.  There’re all dead.”  The commando indicated a Brute corpse clad in silver armor and wearing a helmet type Jack had never seen before.

    Then an idea dawned upon the Spartan, “Charlie, can you fly one of those things?”

    The other commando drew a grin across his faceplate, “Yes.  You thinking what I’m thinking?”

    “Of course.”

     

    10 December 2583; Military Calendar

    Saunders City, New Cyprus

     

                Captain Gabriel wound his way through another narrow alley with the shaken Spartan just a few meters back.  They were about halfway to his safe house and weapons cache, and he hoped he could elicit some information from the giant super-soldier upon reaching it.  If these guys are here, then something big is going on.  Just what the hell is it? he wondered.

                A low whining sound began to pierce the night as he began to formulate guesses.  Richard signaled for his comrade to stop and get low as he scanned the skies.  There! Two Phantoms and at least half-a-dozen Banshees streaked through the sky at high speed.  Very high speed, too fast for just some airborne patrol.

                “What direction do you think those things are headed?” the armored figure behind the ODST said darkly.

                “Southeast,” the captain decided.

                The Spartan paused for just a moment before cursing. “I agree.  Do you have access to a vehicle?” he then demanded.

                “What… yeah, why?” the Helljumper frowned, puzzled.

                “No time to explain. Lead me to it now!”

                “Right this way,” Gabriel started moving again, faster this time.  What in Hades is going on here?  Why does a group of Phantoms and Banshees heading southeast suddenly light this guy up?  This is really starting to get weird.


    "Whoever said the pen is mightier than the sword never encountered automatic weapons."
    -General Douglas MacArthur

    The Pheonix War: Pheonix Rising:
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/378844.aspx
  •  12-12-2008, 6:02 PM 423900 in reply to 421484

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    You really pulled out the ol' thesaurus out for this one eh? great chapter man plenty of action. Soviet weaponry ftw! XD

    "When I give food to the poor they call me a Saint, when I ask why the poor have no food, they call me a Communist."
    -Dom Hélder Câmara

    Smexy fanfics that I've read on this site so far
    -Phoenix War
    -The Untold Tales
  •  12-12-2008, 8:44 PM 424054 in reply to 423900

    Re: Pheonix War

    not so much, but thanks.  Twelve will be up in about another week.  Probably less though.
    "Whoever said the pen is mightier than the sword never encountered automatic weapons."
    -General Douglas MacArthur

    The Pheonix War: Pheonix Rising:
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/378844.aspx
  •  12-18-2008, 8:56 PM 427933 in reply to 424054

    Re: Pheonix War

    Okay, right on time, here's chapter zwolfe,

     

    Chapter Twelve

    10 December 2583; Military Calendar

    Jorgenson Air Force Base, New Cyprus

    .

                “Into the dropship! Now!”  Jack shouted to his compatriots as the specks on the horizon grew into various Covenant aircraft.  The four remaining men were sprinting to the immobile Phantom, left crewless by the human attack upon the alien patrol, and it was now to be commandeered for use against its former owners.  Or at least to haul the gravely outnumbered Marines clear of the ruined base and away from the clutches of the alien conglomerate. 

                Piling in, Charlie shouted back over his shoulder, “I’m headed for the cockpit. Jack, Corporal, get on the turrets!”  The two complied immediately, pausing only to heft Meyers into the cargo bay.  Seeing that the wounded Marine was in, Jack moved for the turret and punched a key, lowering the plasma cannon to its deployed position, and he slipped into the gunner’s position as Nguyen did the same on the port side. 

                A thrum worked through the craft as Charlie powered up the ship.  “Okay, everything looks fine, engines are in acceptable ranges, and the main gun is operational…”

                “Charlie shut up and punch it!” Jack yelled to his squadmate as his eyes tracked the incoming vessels.

                “Roger, hold on!” The Phantom lurched forward as the main drives kicked in and rapidly brought the vessel up to full speed as it climbed up to altitude.  A high-pitched whining filled the crew compartment causing all three men in it to cover their ears in a vain attempt to shut out the high-pitched squeal.

                Then a snapping sound punctuated the noise, cutting it out as the men aboard felt the craft rapidly drop its speed.  “What the hell was that!?” Nguyen shouted up towards the cockpit.

                “Aw, crap,” Charlie returned as he fumbled with the controls, “Guys, I think I figured out why the crew abandoned this thing.”

                “Tell me that’s not what I think it was Charlie,” Jack said, getting a very bad feeling in his gut.

                “Wish I could, port engine just cut out, something is wrong with the gravity drive.  Starboard is starting to look a little shaky, too,” the piloting Spartan confirmed the other’s fear.

                Jack then stuck his head out of the gunner’s window just enough to look back on the approaching alien aircraft.  “Any chance we could get to ground and evade those Covenant fighters before they catch us?”

                “Not a chance,” the Marine corporal voiced his opinion on the matter.  He was right, the alien Banshees and the dropships would only take about two minutes to catch the commandeered Phantom at its current speed and only seconds if it landed.

                The helmetless commando swore, “Alright then, we’ll have to make the best of it.  Meyers, how are feeling?”  Looking up from his slumped position at the back of the bay, the wounded Marine just shot the Spartan an annoyed look.  “Think you can man the forward gun?”

                “Y-yes,” Meyers stuttered, barely audible over the growling of the remaining engine, as he forced himself to his feet and stumbled into the cockpit, taking a seat next to Charlie.

                At this point Nguyen leaned back and face the only other man in the troop bay, “No offense, but I think we were better off just staying back in that closet.”

                “You’re probably right.”

                It took only a minute for the first Banshee flyer to close within range of the Phantom and begin its lethal mission.  Plasma bursts filled the pre-dawn sky as the squadron of craft opened up and began their erratic maneuvers as they rocketed around the dropship, attempting to land a killing blow.  Armor plates melted off and several circuits and other parts began smoking as the first hits connected on the larger vessel’s stern.

                However, their high speed also worked against them.  As they shot by, Jack and Nguyen fired their guns, forcing many to break off their flight paths and regroup, their initial plan of attack foiled.  A swarm of about eight formed up high off the Phantom’s two o’clock and Jack instantly took advantage of the formation’s mistake.  He depressed the trigger on the plasma cannon and let fly with a hail of azure energy.  The group scattered, making it almost impossible to track a shot on any one of them, however there was one exception.  A lone Banshee shot by, parallel to the dropship’s starboard side, and Jack fired a second flurry of plasma into it as the craft flashed past.

                He smiled as he saw a smoke trail erupt from the stricken fighter and the smaller craft began hurtling to the ground.  “I got one!” the Spartan shouted, allowing himself to feel just a moment’s elation at the enemy death.  No one heard him over the roar of the battle, and he then threw his focus back into the fight, sending another Banshee careening off as he grazed a flight stabilizer with his gun.

                Behind the Spartan, Corporal Lee Nguyen was pouring all the fire he could into an incoming pair of Banshees as they attempted to walk their own fire into the Marine’s position.  The human saw several of his shots splash across the opaque canopy of one of the hostiles and the enemy craft ceased its firing, its pilot dead at his controls.  Nguyen almost let out a cry of joy akin to the Spartan’s, but his heart sank as he saw the wingman also stop the fire from its twin plasma cannons and loose a single green bolt of energy. 

    It was a fuel rod round and it impacted just to the Marine’s left, exploding and fragmenting the armored troop bay’s port drop hatch and sending shrapnel throughout the compartment.  Multiple chunks of the alloy struck Nguyen, piercing his shoulder and hip armor and ripping gashes across his chest plate.  This created enough momentum to fling the human from his seat behind the gun and pitch him into the forward bulkhead.

    .

    Charlie felt the impact as he sat in the pilot’s seat at the front of the Covenant dropship.  “What the hell!?” the Spartan shouted as the bulky craft’s tail began sliding to the right.  He fought as hard as he possibly could to pull the damaged craft back into a path he could control, but it was all in vain.

    “Crap, tailspin!” Meyers shouted next to him, calling out the ship’s new predicament.

    “Yeah, I know!” the super-human commando still wrestled with the controls, praying the craft would miraculously right itself.  Yet it did not, and the Phantom began rapidly losing altitude and fell with ever increasing speed to the harsh earth below.  NO! NO! NO! Charlie screamed at himself as he realized the futility of his last actions.  And in the last few seconds, he summoned up the will to give one last warning to his charges, “BRACE FOR IMPACT!”

    .

    The pilot of the lead Banshee purred happily to himself as he saw the stolen Phantom strike the surface of the human-infested planet.  Its crew of filthy humans was finally dead after what he had considered to be a very good fight on their part, pity it had cost the lives of three of his pack brothers.  Yet it was a victory nonetheless.

    “Assabeus, be warned there is a Demon on that Phantom!” the voice of another Jiralhanae crackled over his Battlenet unit.

    Another muffled noise of glee, “And the Demon is dead, we have killed the Phantom.”

    “Do not be so confident, many of our packs perished at the hands of such abominations because we believed them dead,” the voice cautioned.

    “Your advice is noted.” Assabeus switched his frequency to converse with the surviving members of his flight-pack, “My brothers, I have good news.  We have slain a Demon, perhaps more than one.”  This was followed by growls and roars of victory, and the Captain let it die down before speaking again, “Magnus, Jureus, you will accompany me to deliver this news to our Chieftain and the most holy Prophet of Vengeance, for such a thing should not be spoiled by the soulless Battlenet, but ought be delivered in person.  Narberus, stay here, you should gather trophies to our victory and bring honor to our pack.  Hiramus, cover him and ensure that the infidels are dead.”

    With this, three of the purple craft broke off and slipped away into the first lights of dawn.

    .

    10 December 2583; Military Calendar

    Somewhere on New Cyprus

    .

                Whines pierced the air and sent an icy jolt down the spine of Matt “Sludge” Keller as he sat leafing through a small paperback book in the cockpit of his D-77SOC Pelican Nightstalker.  What in Hades? ****, Banshees! The realization threw him into action and he hurled himself around his ejector seat and back into the troop hold where his copilot and two Marines were playing a game of poker on the deck. 

                Startled by his superior’s action, the vessel’s copilot spoke up first, “Sludge, what’s going on?”

                “Couple of bandits flying nearby, if they’re here, they’ve got a pretty *** good idea of where we are.  Now start preflight, essentials only!”  Sludge ordered, himself beginning the shortened list of power-up sequences and safety checks.  Within a minute, the UNSC dropship hummed to life and the crew found themselves at the controls, sending the Pelican variant off into the waning dark.

                His copilot flipped a number of switches behind him in the tandem-seated cockpit.  “Okay, radar is off, passive scanners are up,” the junior officer paused for a moment, “Wait, I’m getting hits on seven, make that six, Banshees and a Phantom.”

                “Yeah, so what does it matter?  Make your point, Nugget,” Sludge said as he brought the dropship up to the maximum speed he wanted to risk.

                “Sludge, it almost looks like they’re pulling of some kind of combat maneuver like wolves after a deer.  Give me a second, I need to check something,” Nugget repeatedly hit a button until one of his monitors cycled to a specialized Identification Friend/Foe display.  The man blinked twice, “Holy ****, we got one of the Spartans on that Phantom!”

                The Navy pilot wrenched himself around to face his crewmate, “Are you sure?”

                “Dead certain.”

                Sludge faced back forward and yanked the controls to bring the Pelican back around and set it on a course for the dogfight.  ***, only one Spartan. This is not good.  Shaking his head, he gave his order, “Prep the chain gun, we have work to do.  Oh, and tell the mudbugs in back to buckle up, things are about to get bumpy.”

                “Sir?”

    .

                “I do not care what Assabeus said, I will gather up our victory trophies,” one of the simian aliens growled to its wingman in the other Banshee guarding the desecrated dropship the inferior humans had stolen.

                “And why would I let you claim the kill of the Demon, do you think I would willingly let you rob me of my conquest?” the other snarled back. “Assabeus gave me the duty of collection, and if you think I will give that up, you’re more foolish than an Unggoy!”

                The insult bit deeply into the Jiralhanae, and his response was that of a roar, “HOW DARE YOU CHALLENGE ME!  Come let us settle this on the land and let me show you who the true fool is!”

                “Bah! If you wish to finish this, let us do it here, a test of our finest skills!”

                “Coward!”  As the quarrel escalated in insults and violent remarks, the two aliens hardly noticed the near-invisible form drop in just two hundred meters in front of them.

    .

                Sludge brought Pelican to a stop just in front of the two remaining Banshees. “Blast, the mike-foxtrots downed the dropship.  Look like we gonna find survivors?”

                “Call it fifty-fifty, but how about these two hairy ***?  Can I send off to meet whatever SOB they worship yet?”  Nugget pleaded.

                “Go for it.  Just make sure the techs are painted two silhouettes on our hull”

                The copilot grinned as his brought his eyes down to his targeting display, “Bye-bye, boys.”

     


    "Whoever said the pen is mightier than the sword never encountered automatic weapons."
    -General Douglas MacArthur

    The Pheonix War: Pheonix Rising:
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/378844.aspx
  •  12-21-2008, 12:45 PM 429580 in reply to 427933

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    This is definitely the best halo fanfiction i've read, its good so much goodness and detail...thanks for the awesome chap man.

    "When I give food to the poor they call me a Saint, when I ask why the poor have no food, they call me a Communist."
    -Dom Hélder Câmara

    Smexy fanfics that I've read on this site so far
    -Phoenix War
    -The Untold Tales
  •  12-31-2008, 4:43 PM 433898 in reply to 429580

    Re: Pheonix War

    And here it is, Chapter XIII.

     

    Chapter Thirteen

    10 December 2583; Military Calendar

    Somewhere on New Cyprus

     

                Sludge looked out across the visible sky, his nerves shivering more and more with each passing second.  No matter how one cut it, each morsel of time meant creeping closer and closer to death in his situation.  Perhaps that death could be for the men trapped within the smoldering remains of the alien dropship before him, or for himself and his crewmates as the extraterrestrial enemy would undoubtedly return to claim a prize within the dead craft’s hull.  Every noise on the wind seemed to sound like the whine of a fighter or transport coming to end his life.

                Yet what he feared the most was the failure of the two Marines digging through the wreckage to find anyone alive.  The pilot had seen or been involved in a half dozen accidents and actual missions where someone had died because the rescue crews had been just a second late or merely slipped when prying a chunk of whatever was impeding their progress loose.  He could barely stand it the first time he had seen such failure, and this was no different.  Sure, this predicament was caused by enemy weapons fire instead of the usual pilot error, but still it was real, human, life at stake.

                Somewhere, perhaps in heaven above or maybe it was just the unpredictably twisted whim of lady luck, someone or thing decided at least to give the man a weak smile.  “Captain, I have something over here!”

                “What?” Sludge leapt from his ship and sprinted to the Marine, who was attempting to pull a section of the Covenant craft’s hull off of something.  The Marine had no need to say any more as the pilot saw all he needed to see when a forearm, clad in a dark grey carapace, protruded from under the chunk of metal.  It lay slack, unmoving on the ground and caused the pilot’s heart to leap into his throat.  “Let’s get this off of him!”

                It took almost a minute to remove the heavy slab, but the two did revealing the wounded Spartan beneath.  The commando lay silent and bleeding, unmoving in his state of near-death.  Sludge looked in fear at the augmented soldier, realizing that he and the Marines would have but moments to lift the four-hundred kilogram form out of the wreckage and into the Pelican and they just could not do it.

                “Private, keep searching, see if you can find anything else.  I’ll see if I can get this armor off him somehow,” the pilot quietly ordered, knowing what he might have to do.  Witnessing a fatality was terrible, leaving a fellow soldier to death was far worse.  Especially when one was assigned to ensure that soldier made it out alive.

                For just five more minutes they would remain.  Sludge found the armor release on the Spartan and managed to remove enough of it from the body so that the rescuers were able to drag the commando into the dropship’s bay.  The second Marine also found the sole other survivor, a severely injured man pinned under the remains of the forward bulkhead with shrapnel wounds and lacerations covering much of his body.  Unfortunately two other bodies were also found in the Phantom’s cockpit, both crushed to death by the impact of the crash.

                “Why?” the pilot said under his breath, the mourning pains creeping into his unheard voice as he climbed back into his seat.  Because some alien son of a *** decided to start a little war here and these boys were soldiers who happened to be in the way! The realist side of him replied angrily.  They knew the risks and their luck ran out. Now pull yourself together!  Yet, Matthew Keller would not as he brought the Pelican back online and began to rise away from the world that was now the graveyard for so many of his species.  Two more were dead, and though he had no fault in their demise, he could not help but feel somewhat responsible.

                Even as the dropship began to ascend into the heavens, Sludge also did not realize what his copilot was about to tell him.  “Hey Sludge, I got the IFF beacon from a third Spartan.  He’s moving fast, like he’s in a,” Nugget paused, “***, sir, he’s heading for the AFB, and I’m reading at least four dropships there.  We have got to head him off!”

                Somber, the ship’s commander replied, “Do it, and then we get the hell out of here.”

    .

                Three hours and four hundred kilometers away from the crash site a blinding flash appeared at the edge of New Cyprus’ atmosphere.  Within that flash a certain UNSC Prowler entered slipspace, putting an end to reconnaissance gone both miraculously right and wrong, as they had aboard two of the most vital assets in humanity’s existence, but yet it had come at such a great price, few would have even begun to comprehend their value as great enough to compensate.

    .

    Epilogue

    22 December 2583; Military Calendar

    Wagner Military Hospital, Ai II

     

    Salvation

     

    It all seems so hollow

    This life of mine

    Yet to someone it is hallow

    This life of mine

     

    Some had to die

    So that I may live

    Some granted me this salvation

    At the price of their blood

     

    Why is it then

    I must go on

    If others must die

    For one to live?

     

    It all seems so hollow

    This life of mine

    Yet to someone it is hallow

    This life of mine

     

                Jack laid back into his medical bunk, setting the small poetry book to the side.  So *** true, he thought, So *** true.  And we’re just getting ****ing started.

     

    Okay, so it is over, for a short while.  If anyone is interested the sequel, The Pheonix War: Wings of Crimson, will be out within a month.


    "Whoever said the pen is mightier than the sword never encountered automatic weapons."
    -General Douglas MacArthur

    The Pheonix War: Pheonix Rising:
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/378844.aspx
  •  01-07-2009, 9:21 PM 439099 in reply to 433898

    Re: Pheonix War

    nice chap, sad to see the series over. Can you post a link to the new one in this thread? that would be easy for those reading phoenix war, thanks.

    "When I give food to the poor they call me a Saint, when I ask why the poor have no food, they call me a Communist."
    -Dom Hélder Câmara

    Smexy fanfics that I've read on this site so far
    -Phoenix War
    -The Untold Tales
  •  01-08-2009, 3:59 PM 439389 in reply to 439099

    Re: Pheonix War

    oh, don't worry ablot, the series is far from over.  I will might put the links up here, but if I do not, the topic title will be The Pheonix War: Wings of Crimson, and it will be out soon, very soon.
    "Whoever said the pen is mightier than the sword never encountered automatic weapons."
    -General Douglas MacArthur

    The Pheonix War: Pheonix Rising:
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/378844.aspx
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