In case some of you haven't noticed, i have put up an advertisement for blood ties in the terminal.

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Restlessness You will read this fic.
Blood Ties its a sweet fic.

chapter 5 is up.

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Restlessness You will read this fic.
Blood Ties its a sweet fic.

did you guys already start making them. because i never got invited

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that last chapter was great, it seems the major fics are getting less and less attention now

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Im back! Now with 72% more unseriousness!

Ge3t ready for more attentoin killer grunt, because chapter 6 is up.

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Restlessness You will read this fic.
Blood Ties its a sweet fic.

I was two chapters behind, just finished reading Chapters 5 and 6. Good work, 343.

Just remember, if you have "he said" after a bit of speech, end it with a comma, not a period. And don't have a capital after a bit of speech unless it's a name or rank.

Also, you missed a word at one point at the start of Chapter 6.

Then a message was sent to UNSC commander in chief Lord Loot, the message talked about three generals are going to take over the URF.

This would be better off written like this: Then a message was sent UNSC commander in chief Lord Loot, the message talked about three generals who are going to take over the URF.

Also, at the start of Chapter 6 "sky's" should have been "skies"

Otherwise, no errors that I saw. Good chapter, keep it up.

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Officialy offline as of April 4 Australian time.

Great chapter, there was only one thing im not sure on and i may be wrong but...

Were the nova bombs even invented back then, i though the first was made just before the fall of reach?

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Im back! Now with 72% more unseriousness!

I'm back and in just a few days i should be getting a decent internet connection. For the past four or five months i've been gone i,ve been writing and correcting the last explosive chapters of Blood Ties. So get your drinks ready, fix your meals, and go to the bathroom because im putting the final five chapter up at once. No breraks in the action whatsoever.

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Restlessness You will read this fic.
Blood Ties its a sweet fic.

I remember this!

ahh the good old days...

why back then you didnt have any of these fancy spartan lasers and bubble shields we just had a good old assault rifle and a pistol with a scope on it....what the hell am i on about

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Im back! Now with 72% more unseriousness!

I sure hope that more people read this than before, i plan for this to be one of the final fics before the game comes out.

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Restlessness You will read this fic.
Blood Ties its a sweet fic.

chapter 8 is up, man i missed this so much. So im going to spam this message up a bit. Killer i really could use a pm with a listing of some of the hot topics if you will. Offensive, you seem like a good judge of fic now so could you send me a pm with some good fics that are going on right now.

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Restlessness You will read this fic.
Blood Ties its a sweet fic.

its a gewd FF, yu should check mine out, rise of the marines and odst conspiracy

 

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