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Caba 2.0(FF)

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  •  05-10-2008, 11:45 PM 225676 in reply to 224783

    Re: Caba 2.0

    OMG Don it just keeps getting better and better

    and Pm


    VIVA LA FAMILIA

    wanna see somthing funny read through the first two pages of this thread http://halowars.com/forums/thread/318933.aspx
  •  05-10-2008, 11:55 PM 225681 in reply to 225676

    Re: Caba 2.0

    Arby: Soldato for the Corleone's:

    OMG Don it just keeps getting better and better

    and Pm

    *Stares* HOW DARE YOU TAKE MY LINE T_T

    anyways don i dont know how much more you can make me LOVE this story i mean this is 100000000000% Uber Good Great Anyword you want to use *that means good* It is I mean i cant even start to Explain how good it is This is a ton better and longer then my ff :) lol

  •  05-10-2008, 11:58 PM 225687 in reply to 225681

    Re: Caba 2.0

    HOO-RAA

    and Amen to that Ban


    VIVA LA FAMILIA

    wanna see somthing funny read through the first two pages of this thread http://halowars.com/forums/thread/318933.aspx
  •  05-12-2008, 6:30 AM 227130 in reply to 225687

    Re: Caba 2.0

    Don. By going on with this story you have shown the perseverance that most members of this forum will never have. You've shown 'true' passion and I respect that.

    A wonderful and exuberant story that portrays your talent as a writer effectively.

    Keep on going because it is a savoury read that makes me leave with a content smile.

    Good work.

     

     




    The silver crest of the gleaming point of the tool wishes you freedom from a retched existence.
  •  05-12-2008, 9:28 AM 227184 in reply to 224545

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    Ch.21 is done.

    Woot!


    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/255446.aspx]The Great War[/url]Ch.5 is up
    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/224551/ShowThread.aspx#224551]Caba's Journey[/url]Done
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  •  05-12-2008, 9:32 AM 227188 in reply to 227184

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    Ah... nice.

    Can't wait to read it.

    Well done.




    The silver crest of the gleaming point of the tool wishes you freedom from a retched existence.
  •  05-12-2008, 9:33 AM 227189 in reply to 227188

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    Grazie...gotta go to next class!!!
    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/255446.aspx]The Great War[/url]Ch.5 is up
    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/224551/ShowThread.aspx#224551]Caba's Journey[/url]Done
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  •  05-12-2008, 1:06 PM 227215 in reply to 227189

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    Ch.21

       Caba was overjoyed with his new gift.He couldn't wait to shoot it tomorrow.He had it put up over his fire place and kept looking up at it,afraid it may dissapear.He had had a Margarita and his spirits were still rising."What the hell.I*'ll shoot it right now.It will look great out at night.He walked outside with only a minor stagger.He did have a couple Margaritas.He walked until he got to the most reclusive spot on the property.He was about to open up with the rifle,and then he heard another sound,like a light groaning of wood.

       A door wasd opening,but where?It was so seclu-.A hatch began to slowly rise out of the ground,a cellar door.Caba was surprised and his instincts begged him to hide.He crawled to a small shrub and hid."-that he doesn't know?"It sounded like HB but Caba was unsure."Of course not.He thinks some old guy did it."Caba was sure that was The Boss."But what if he does know?He has a very bad temper.And I wish he could be kept alive."HB said with worry."No disrespect but its very plain and simple.Caba does not know that we killed Suzan.Is it plain enough?I mean no disrespect but I'm sure that he has no Earthly idea that we were responsible.So calm down son.Enjoy life."

       Caba swallowed,his head began to swim.He was going numb.A rage filled his veins,his vision was blurring.Those dirty bastards!They had mislead him.They had told him that someone else had killed Suzan.He felt a recuring feeling,one of cold rage.A rage that was patient.He hid there until HB and Boss walked away,still discussing Suzan's death.He slowly got up and walked to the warehouse.All of the lights were off and Caba sneaked in.He walked into the back to find Hunter asleep with the T.V. on Caba slowly got beside Hunter and put the rifle to his head."Wake up."Caba whispered.Hunter said nothing."GET UP!"Hunter jumped out of his bed and stared at Caba in horror.What the *** are you doing?""Who killed Suzan?"Who?"Don't *** with me 'pal'.Who did it?"Hunter was afraid.He had no idea who Suzan was.Caba slowed down and thought.He was an outside member of the Family.He might not know about it."Hunter,you have been a friend to me.Now,I need a answer.Do you know who killed a very close friend of mine.Suzan."Hunter was starting to understand the situation."Caba,I did not know anything of this."Caba sighed and got up from Hunter's chair."I was hoping for an answer."

       Hunter felt like a father to Caba ,being fairly old and his giving Caba help where it was needed."Caba,what do you want me to do?There ain't much I can do."Caba thought and figured out his only option."Grab the lupara,and follow me."Hunter obeyed and followed Caba.Caba slid into the mansion of The Boss.Hunter followed.Caba walked throughout the house and found The Boss.Asleep in his bed.Caba walked over and slowly got onto the bed."The lupara."Caba whispered.Hunter nodded and handed Caba the gun.Caba poked The Boss in the head with the muzzle until he was awake."Caba?What is going-""Don't worry,Caba has no earthly idea that we are responsible for Suzan's death."The Boss went pale."Like you said boss,'You come in kickin-"Caba fired both barrels of the lupara into The Boss' head"-and you come out dead."Hunter was astonished.The Boss was dead.He was stuck.He was quite commited now.

       Caba looked over to Hunter."Call the police.Tell them,the Don is dead."Caba waited in the room until HB ran in."What...Dad?"HB looked at Caba with pure animal hatred."I trusted you.I helped you.We gave you shelter."Caba thought back to the happy days he had had with Suzan."But what else did you do?You took my love."He raised the rifle and fired.Beautiful bolts flew as they exited the barrel in flames.HB crumpled into a smoldering heap."Goodnight,my friends."He sat there until he heard the sirens.Caba turned to Hunter."My journey is finally over."

     


    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/255446.aspx]The Great War[/url]Ch.5 is up
    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/224551/ShowThread.aspx#224551]Caba's Journey[/url]Done
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  •  05-12-2008, 1:49 PM 227228 in reply to 227215

    Re: Caba 2.0

    Keep 'em coming


    Hope you are having a good time at Relic, Thunder!
  •  05-12-2008, 2:21 PM 227233 in reply to 227228

    Re: Caba 2.0

    good job Don
  •  05-12-2008, 4:19 PM 227349 in reply to 227233

    Re: Caba 2.0

    My friends,Caba's Journey is finished.

    Say yes if you wish me to add a little more.

    Say no if you want me to leave it as is.


    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/255446.aspx]The Great War[/url]Ch.5 is up
    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/224551/ShowThread.aspx#224551]Caba's Journey[/url]Done
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  •  05-12-2008, 4:24 PM 227351 in reply to 227349

    Re: Caba 2.0

    I don't think there's much more you can add...

    I say no, leave it

    Great job on all 21 chapters!


    Chuckles

    We are young
    But we have heart
    Born in this world as it all falls apart
    We are strong
    But we don't belong
    Born in this world as it all falls apart

    Never Forgotten

  •  05-12-2008, 4:32 PM 227362 in reply to 227349

    Re: Caba 2.0

    Last Ch. of Caba's Journey...

       ...It was a horrible night.The men that were standing around Caba looked at him in awe.Thay had just heard of what Caba had been through.Caba held a small session every year.Caba was bemused at their astonishment.Caba had learned,after being released from an undisclosed area,that it had been Ban that had killed his closest friend.He still didn't know the reason that caused her death ,but time healed his wounds.He lived just as he had before the bombing.He was provided for by the government after being released of all accusations.He had guards that he took with him wheneer he went.He got up from his seat and began to exit the room."Caba!Mr.Caba!"Caba turned around to see a familiar looking man.He walked over to the man."What do you need?"The man pulled a pistol out of his pocket."The Don sends his regards."Caba heard a report and fell to the ground.He never heard the screaming civilians.He never heard the police.And he never heard that warning from Hunter had left on Caba's phone.


    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/255446.aspx]The Great War[/url]Ch.5 is up
    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/224551/ShowThread.aspx#224551]Caba's Journey[/url]Done
    2
  •  05-12-2008, 4:33 PM 227365 in reply to 227351

    Re: Caba 2.0

    ChucklesSpartan:

    I don't think there's much more you can add...

    I say no, leave it

    Great job on all 21 chapters!

    The last chapter is done.It was fun friends.


    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/255446.aspx]The Great War[/url]Ch.5 is up
    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/224551/ShowThread.aspx#224551]Caba's Journey[/url]Done
    2
  •  05-12-2008, 4:44 PM 227376 in reply to 227362

    Re: Caba 2.0

    Don Corleone:

    Last Ch. of Caba's Journey...

       ...It was a horrible night.The men that were standing around Caba looked at him in awe.Thay had just heard of what Caba had been through.Caba held a small session every year.Caba was bemused at their astonishment.Caba had learned,after being released from an undisclosed area,that it had been Ban that had killed his closest friend.He still didn't know the reason that caused her death ,but time healed his wounds.He lived just as he had before the bombing.He was provided for by the government after being released of all accusations.He had guards that he took with him wheneer he went.He got up from his seat and began to exit the room."Caba!Mr.Caba!"Caba turned around to see a familiar looking man.He walked over to the man."What do you need?"The man pulled a pistol out of his pocket."The Don sends his regards."Caba heard a report and fell to the ground.He never heard the screaming civilians.He never heard the police.And he never heard that warning from Hunter had left on Caba's phone.

    Wow. Thats a rather, sad ending.  =(

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