Nice! And well layed out!

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Spartan 33:

Nice! And well layed out!

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed.

The utter nexus of art is this splendid story.

Very good contextual layout of which includes the terminology, grammer and information.

The story brings both action and emotionalism into a text to create one of the best fan fics on this site.

You are a talented person and have shown true knowledge of the gaming world and the world around us.

Can't wait till the next branch of this story is done, and untill then shall wait in a cloud of suspense.

Brilliant work.

 

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Best of Wishes Sparhawk

Sparhawk:

The utter nexus of art is this splendid story.

Very good contextual layout of which includes the terminology, grammer and information.

The story brings both action and emotionalism into a text to create one of the best fan fics on this site.

You are a talented person and have shown true knowledge of the gaming world and the world around us.

Can't wait till the next branch of this story is done, and untill then shall wait in a cloud of suspense.

Brilliant work.

 

Man, you're almost forcing me to write another one...

That review was amazing BTW. Thanks! I'm gonna kick my self in the rear and really try to get something released soon. But bear with me, I have finals, work and community service, not to mention my Halo 3 clan that I have to organize and take care of. And GTA IV, GOW, plus numerous chores and yard work. Life's a *** but by the time summer break rolls around I should be in good shape to write up the next part of the saga. My computer is, sadly, still broken. While making some 'mods' I managed to rip off the power button and haven't gotten around to getting it fixed. Instead I dissasembled my desk and chair and put them into storage to make room for my Xbox 360 'control station' with an amazing 27 inch TV from 1994! Whoa! High-Tech! *Sarcasm Alert* Anyways, I'm rambling.

In terms of the actual novel (or novella, a short novel) I haven't begun any work but I'm keen for ideas. Would the community like to see me continue Spartan 492 and humanity's story, or move on to somethin different. I could also cover the Human-Flood war which many of you wanted to see. The choice is yours.

 

Jeteye1:

Sparhawk:

The utter nexus of art is this splendid story.

Very good contextual layout of which includes the terminology, grammer and information.

The story brings both action and emotionalism into a text to create one of the best fan fics on this site.

You are a talented person and have shown true knowledge of the gaming world and the world around us.

Can't wait till the next branch of this story is done, and untill then shall wait in a cloud of suspense.

Brilliant work.

 

Man, you're almost forcing me to write another one...

That review was amazing BTW. Thanks! I'm gonna kick my self in the rear and really try to get something released soon. But bear with me, I have finals, work and community service, not to mention my Halo 3 clan that I have to organize and take care of. And GTA IV, GOW, plus numerous chores and yard work. Life's a *** but by the time summer break rolls around I should be in good shape to write up the next part of the saga. My computer is, sadly, still broken. While making some 'mods' I managed to rip off the power button and haven't gotten around to getting it fixed. Instead I dissasembled my desk and chair and put them into storage to make room for my Xbox 360 'control station' with an amazing 27 inch TV from 1994! Whoa! High-Tech! *Sarcasm Alert* Anyways, I'm rambling.

In terms of the actual novel (or novella, a short novel) I haven't begun any work but I'm keen for ideas. Would the community like to see me continue Spartan 492 and humanity's story, or move on to somethin different. I could also cover the Human-Flood war which many of you wanted to see. The choice is yours.

 

Dang, I thought that might motivate you to write again. I have similar problems, draw myself from work and GTA IV  but I do what I can.

I would like you to look at the Flood-human war, as it was only skimmed on in DoH, it is well worth exploring, as well as the other options.

The choice may be ours, but I would close the door on the other options.

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'For eons I have watched as you have misinterpreted. This is not Reclaimation, this is reclaimer'- Mendicant Bias

Vigil is watching you

Check out my second fan-fic: Operation Overwatch

I review good of those who deserve it...you just happen to be one of those people who deserve it.

So come summer something more to read...*His eyes open in excitement*.

I'm regrettable to hear about your computer problem, hopefully everything works out for you. I agree life can be harsh and frosty cold.

Yes, I have to admit my TV is quite the sh#t heap too, but good things happen to those who do good things for others.

In terms of the novel you want to do... I'll have to ask around and think on it to come to a conclusion that everyone (majority) will be content with.

I shall come to a decision soon.

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Best of Wishes Sparhawk

I've come to a desicion for your next story: Human-flood war.

You're a talented writer and I wish you the best of good luck.

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Best of Wishes Sparhawk

Vigil:

Jeteye1:

Sparhawk:

The utter nexus of art is this splendid story.

Very good contextual layout of which includes the terminology, grammer and information.

The story brings both action and emotionalism into a text to create one of the best fan fics on this site.

You are a talented person and have shown true knowledge of the gaming world and the world around us.

Can't wait till the next branch of this story is done, and untill then shall wait in a cloud of suspense.

Brilliant work.

 

Man, you're almost forcing me to write another one...

That review was amazing BTW. Thanks! I'm gonna kick my self in the rear and really try to get something released soon. But bear with me, I have finals, work and community service, not to mention my Halo 3 clan that I have to organize and take care of. And GTA IV, GOW, plus numerous chores and yard work. Life's a *** but by the time summer break rolls around I should be in good shape to write up the next part of the saga. My computer is, sadly, still broken. While making some 'mods' I managed to rip off the power button and haven't gotten around to getting it fixed. Instead I dissasembled my desk and chair and put them into storage to make room for my Xbox 360 'control station' with an amazing 27 inch TV from 1994! Whoa! High-Tech! *Sarcasm Alert* Anyways, I'm rambling.

In terms of the actual novel (or novella, a short novel) I haven't begun any work but I'm keen for ideas. Would the community like to see me continue Spartan 492 and humanity's story, or move on to somethin different. I could also cover the Human-Flood war which many of you wanted to see. The choice is yours.

 

Dang, I thought that might motivate you to write again. I have similar problems, draw myself from work and GTA IV  but I do what I can.

I would like you to look at the Flood-human war, as it was only skimmed on in DoH, it is well worth exploring, as well as the other options.

The choice may be ours, but I would close the door on the other options.

Got it. The Human Flood war will be done. Something new should be up soon.

Sparhawk:

I review good of those who deserve it...you just happen to be one of those people who deserve it.

So come summer something more to read...*His eyes open in excitement*.

I'm regrettable to hear about your computer problem, hopefully everything works out for you. I agree life can be harsh and frosty cold.

Yes, I have to admit my TV is quite the sh#t heap too, but good things happen to those who do good things for others.

In terms of the novel you want to do... I'll have to ask around and think on it to come to a conclusion that everyone (majority) will be content with.

I shall come to a decision soon.

You're right. Things will be better. Thanks for your support.

Sparhawk:

I've come to a desicion for your next story: Human-flood war.

You're a talented writer and I wish you the best of good luck.

Again, thanks. Support is always appreciated.

Now..

Must...Finish...Novel...Additions...Soon...

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Earth

^ Nice, it's already getting interesting. lol.

Best of luck.

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Best of Wishes Sparhawk

Sparhawk:

^ Nice, it's already getting interesting. lol.

Best of luck.

Oy, what time is it in Australia mate? I just posted that a few seconds ago and I'm in the middle of Computer Graphics. It's 9:30 here.

11:43 pm here. Pretty late lol.

Have fun.

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Best of Wishes Sparhawk

Sparhawk:

11:43 pm here. Pretty late lol.

Have fun.

I will. I've made some decisions about the next 'chapters'.

Once the happenings on Earth during the war are wrapped up, we're going to Triton and things are going f*cking insane. Triton is the thing of legend for the Forerunners and the remaining humans will discover that below the surface of the 'planet' things are moving and that a hellish conflict will erupt and consume everything in the galaxy.

Yes, another discovery of flood will help enlighten them to the real meaning of evil. Lots of action lol.

Triton...has a nice ring to it.

Can't wait... *Is waiting in anxiety*

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Best of Wishes Sparhawk

Sparhawk:

Yes, another discovery of flood will help enlighten them to the real meaning of evil. Lots of action lol.

Triton...has a nice ring to it.

Can't wait... *Is waiting in anxiety*

Found an awesome website detailing everything we know about the Forerunners and the Flood. I'm trying to get canon and also branch out at the same time, think riding on two different but parallel roads.