wise bass18:The prologue is good, but a couple days ago the story was about monsters in a cave system wasn't it?

We're building suspense, roll with it :p

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:( 
I want more story...
I thought it was gonna be about dirt for second :P Then i was like :O this is good!
Stanford sounds familiar ;)

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Spartan II
The definition of Control

Sangeili::( 
I want more story...
I thought it was gonna be about dirt for second :P Then i was like :O this is good!
Stanford sounds familiar ;)

Lol, glad you liked it. I am writing the new chapter. I'm trying to make it long and suspenseful without using action, it's hard though, I'm a very violent writer :)

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Offensive Bias:

Sangeili::( 
I want more story...
I thought it was gonna be about dirt for second :P Then i was like :O this is good!
Stanford sounds familiar ;)

Lol, glad you liked it. I am writing the new chapter. I'm trying to make it long and suspenseful without using action, it's hard though, I'm a very violent writer :)

Its boring when you make us wait on you OB and your sig is a No No unless you have gaint robot battles.

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eliteempire:

Offensive Bias:

Sangeili::( 
I want more story...
I thought it was gonna be about dirt for second :P Then i was like :O this is good!
Stanford sounds familiar ;)

Lol, glad you liked it. I am writing the new chapter. I'm trying to make it long and suspenseful without using action, it's hard though, I'm a very violent writer :)

Its boring when you make us wait on you OB and your sig is a No No unless you have gaint robot battles.

I like my sig. And you know I've been having extreme on and off cases of writers block. So length is my bane...

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What the hell is going on with the format of that first chapter OB? I could hardly read it.

                                Seriously it was like

this and it

                     got really confusing and I

                                                                                            was all like lulwtf

:/

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Wolverfrog49:

What the hell is going on with the format of that first chapter OB? I could hardly read it.

                                Seriously it was like

this and it

                     got really confusing and I

                                                                                            was all like lulwtf

:/

I didn't write that first off, Chuckles did. And second... The format is fine! You're just overplaying it! Anything constructive to say?

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It was interesting, although slightly vague.

Is this a co-fic then? Gotta be careful with those.

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Wolverfrog49:

It was interesting, although slightly vague.

Is this a co-fic then? Gotta be careful with those.

Vague is what we're going for. Building up the intrigue until the revealing moment. The turning point, some might say.

 Careful? Indeed.

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Wolverfrog49:

What the hell is going on with the format of that first chapter OB? I could hardly read it.

                                Seriously it was like

this and it

                     got really confusing and I

                                                                                            was all like lulwtf

:/

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Indent? This site made it really big and messed up the spacing between paragraphs. Not my fault?

And it wasn't that bad =]

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Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

Okay! After a long delay. I managed to get myself into the Alien mood by rewatching my favourite film of the Quadrilogy. Aliens. And my god, what a masterpiece. BUT! I digress, the chapter is ready and is availabe on the first page. Enjoy everyone!

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Offensive Bias:Okay! After a long delay. I managed to get myself into the Alien mood by rewatching my favourite film of the Quadrilogy. Aliens. And my god, what a masterpiece. BUT! I digress, the chapter is ready and is availabe on the first page. Enjoy everyone!

I love Aliens

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Shadow Titan:

Offensive Bias:Okay! After a long delay. I managed to get myself into the Alien mood by rewatching my favourite film of the Quadrilogy. Aliens. And my god, what a masterpiece. BUT! I digress, the chapter is ready and is availabe on the first page. Enjoy everyone!

I love Aliens

 

The film is so awesome. "THEY'RE COMING OUT OF THE WALLS MAN!" The Alien Queen was superb too.

Anyone have anything to say about the new chapter?

 

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Ah well I'm back, for a time. Just got Dragon Age Origins, and I'm finding it continually difficult to pull myself off of it.

But anyway I liked the chapter but the spacing between paragraphs seems...a little wrong...

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Thanks. And I don't know about the spacing. It seems pretty normal to me, or maybe it's because Chuckles used smaller spacing, so my spacing stands out more?

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