Halo: Pioneer (FF) *Completed* Parts 1-26

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  •  04-29-2009, 8:35 PM 571938 in reply to 571920

    Re: Halo: Pioneer (FF) Part VII

    Relevance: Redux

    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/474184.aspx

    Thanks, I'll give your's a once over ^_^


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  04-29-2009, 8:47 PM 571956 in reply to 571938

    Re: Halo: Pioneer (FF) Part VII

    All right...

    I like it... strange... but I like it.

    Seems like you got a good thing going, don't lose that.

    A few grammer mistakes, really only poor choice of words, but it flows nicely anyway

    Also, I think it's VIII not IIX 

    Good job, keep it up, don't lose your touch

    For if you lose your touch, then it won't be fun to read anymore :P

     "An Auther's touch is unbeatable, streaching outward into your mind, keeping it locked in a battle with it's own reason. Lose touch, and you've failed as an auther." -Unknown(Some auther I presume)


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  04-29-2009, 9:07 PM 571990 in reply to 571956

    Re: Halo: Pioneer (FF) Part VII

    Ωmega:

    All right...

    I like it... strange... but I like it.

    Seems like you got a good thing going, don't lose that.

    A few grammer mistakes, really only poor choice of words, but it flows nicely anyway

    Also, I think it's VIII not IIX 

    Good job, keep it up, don't lose your touch

    For if you lose your touch, then it won't be fun to read anymore :P

     "An Auther's touch is unbeatable, streaching outward into your mind, keeping it locked in a battle with it's own reason. Lose touch, and you've failed as an auther." -Unknown(Some auther I presume)

    cool, thanks. i thought about redoing some chapters due to spelling and grammar, but i'd have to repost and i don't want to do that to a reader. 

    and yeah, i just wanted to try something else with Roman numerals.  i don't really care what eight is, but thanks for the clarification.

    i commented on yours, good stuff.


    New story out! Halo: Below the Brine
    (it's the best story you're not reading!)
  •  05-03-2009, 7:52 PM 576093 in reply to 571286

    Re: Halo: Pioneer (FF) Part VII

    Awesome story so far!!
    Staring at the carnage
    Praying that the sun would never rise
    Living another day in disguise
    These feelings can't be right
    Lend me the courage
    to stand up and fight
    Woah tonight... - M.I.A. by A7x

    I'm not weird, I'm just different
  •  05-04-2009, 1:17 PM 576906 in reply to 576093

    Re: Halo: Pioneer (FF) Part 9

    Part 9


    "All clear, Sir."

    Sergeant Hill heard the tiny voice from his communicator in his left ear. "Acknowledged. All ships descent to the LZ. Recon team shows all clear." He shifted the device on his head to allow access to his night vision. These neural protectors better work. The added weight to the headgear the commandos wore was almost unnoticeable, but made some remove their helmets altogether, do to their cumbersome nature.

    The four ships rode on trails of flame as they made their way to the surface. With a sudden bump, Hill almost had his knees buckle as the ship leveled out. Simultaneously, the dropships touched down and troops filed out as the bay doors opened.

    Sergeant Hill felt an odd contrast as he emerged from the hold. He looked up into the night sky under an unfamiliar starscape and inhaled the air to find it pleasantly fresh. The contrast was the seriousness and importance of the mission with the beautiful and peaceful scenery he was gazing upon. This could have been home. He shook his head and set his mind on the task at hand. "All teams check in," he said. One by one Alpha through Delta reported ready.

    The commandos regrouped in the semi-circle area formed by the landing zone with the dropships forming a defensive perimeter that doubled as an immediate evacuation method. The tall grass was mashed down where they stood. Hill noticed Hannah Culver's team approach from his left and he waved her over.

    "Sergeant Hill, the power source in due..." she paused at giving a directional on a foreign planet, but continued, "northeast from our current position."

    "Thank you, ma'am." He made a signal with his left hand and his squad took point. "Miss Culver, I want your team behind Alpha incase we need you in a hurry."

    "We'll be ready, Sir." Hannah nodded her head, first to the sergeant then to her team. The two technicians with her took positions behind Hannah's escort while the two other soldiers formed a rear guard.

    Thomas Hill watched as his previous disposition of Culver dissolved in his mind. In the ready room she seemed like the classic Tech Specialist with her head in data files and computer gear. But here on the ground, with the captain relying so heavily on her expertise, her true confident self was shining through. She did not appear nervous and that calmness bled into her team.

    Hill marched up through the four columns of commandos to reach Alpha squad. The cool nighttime breeze made the grassy plain look like an ocean’s waves. The nebulae on the horizon gave off subdued light that was strong enough to light their way without the need of luminous amplification. He walked side by side with the Alpha squad leader and asked, "Did your sensor tech get a visual on the structure that’s housing the power nodes?"

    "Just now, Sir." Alpha leader held up his personal display and transmitted the image to the entire ground team. He gave a thumb up to his sensor tech that was squatting down on a stone ten meters in front of him with a scope in his hands.

    Hill looked down at his own display and frowned. The structure itself was tucked away inside a cave with a vaulted ceiling. He looked back up to the northeast to see it for his own eyes, but it was too dim to see through the fog that had settled in with the slowly dropping temperatures. Equipping his night vision he adjusted the settings. The depth of the cave was unknown as it connected to the side of the rocky valley. In some areas, sharp angles protruded to form support beams and columns giving the structure an organic look while maintaining a natural design that fit into the cliffside. They were still a good 300 meters away.

    He removed his goggles and called for Culver. She quietly moved to his other side and he noticed she has been mulling over the same image but had place navigation points and overlaid a grid pattern.

    "I’ve located an access door that is on the right side here," Culver pointed to the green flashing light on her display.

    "That will be out entryway." Hill pointed to the image on her screen and commented, "they must have built into the cave. It could be fairly fortified inside."

    "Yes, Sir. Still no sensor contacts within the area."

    Even though that was good news, Sergeant Hill could not dismiss his gut feeling that something wasn’t right. He set aside his reservations and announced into his communicator, "300 meters to destination. Form up tight, and stay sharp."

    They continued on.

    **********

    Karl Mather flipped the light switch on as he entered the storage hold. While the agro-garden did well to provide everyone aboard Pioneer with fresh vegetation, there was still the stock of supplies they had to use. He breathed a sigh as he realized the workload he now had. Since arriving in-system Pioneer was using its temporary supplies and had expected by now to be in full colonization swing. Since the colony project was put on hold, he was tasked with organizing the supply crates in daily sections to ration the foodstuffs they’ll be using in the following days to come. As his supply crew filed past him, they groaned and complained.

    "Hey, just look at this way, guys," Karl sarcastically offered. "The sooner we get this done, the sooner we can be locked down in our quarters again."

    All heads straightened up and smiles spread all around as the crew realized their freedom in their jobs. By taking a long time arranging the crates, that would mean less time spent confined to their rooms. The men slowly began identifying the crates they would need to move and Karl sectioned off a spot in the hold to place this week’s supply.

    "Hey! Mather, you might want to come look at this," yelled a crewman from the other side of the storage hold.

    Clipboard in hand, Mather walked over. "What is it?" He looked at the crewman and saw puzzlement in his expression. "What?" he asked again.

    The crewman carried a small crate over and laid it at Mather’s feet. He pulled the top off and pointed inside. "You see?"

    Mather tucked the clipboard underneath his right arm and reached down. The crate’s only contents were shredded up brown paper. He snapped his head up to the others around him. "Check the other crates and not just the foodstuffs."

    His crew began to grab random crates to find their weight was light and their contents all the same. Shredded brown paper.

    Mather looked in disbelief as the enormity of the situation set in. Those bastards. Those Hexil bastards! His hands balled into fists and his face turned red. "Get Captain Relo on the comm. He has to hear that his beloved corporation lead us out here to die."


    **********

    Alpha squad entered the cave and some could not help but look up to see the vastness of the formation. They proceeded towards the doorway Culver had identified. Delta squad fanned out at the entrance while Bravo and Charlie took a defensive position on opposite sides in the cave.

    Sergeant Hill led Hannah Culver’s team towards the door and paused. There was no visible way to open the two-meter wide, three-meter high door. Hill turned towards Culver who was unfastening her backpack to pull out some equipment. Alpha squad leader approached him from behind and Hill turned around. "Yes?"

    "Sir, Delta squad is reporting some strange noises."

    "Patch it through, Delta leader," Sergeant Hill ordered as he switched his communicator over to the tactical frequency. He heard a click, and his eyebrows bunched up as an eerie wailing filled his ears. He looked questioningly at Alpha leader who frowned as he shook his head.

    "Oh that’s nothing to worry about, Sir."

    Both men turned to face Hannah Culver and her two technicians who had removed their neural protectors. "You see," she began with a smile blossoming on her face, "that’s the least of your worries now."

    She pressed a few buttons on a device that Hill couldn’t identify and her smile widened.

    A terrible shriek resounded in Hill’s head. His body convulsed and he fell to the ground in tremendous pain. The shock of the pain as it washed over Hill rendered him speechless. His mind tried to tell his hands to reach up and remove the neural device on his head, but his body would not cooperate. With his eyes shut in shear tortuous agony, he forced them open. He saw Alpha leader beside him with a streak of blood coming from his forehead. He could not move his head, but his eyes shifted towards the pair of feet that was casually approaching him. Through squinted eyelids and with all his might he looked up.

    Hannah Culver stood defiantly with hands on her hips. Her voice sounded like it came across a great distance. "See, Sergeant? There’s nothing to worry about. Well, not anymore."

    She became silhouetted as bright light from the door to the power source slowly opened.

    Sergeant Hill closed his eyes and let the darkness take him.


    New story out! Halo: Below the Brine
    (it's the best story you're not reading!)
  •  05-04-2009, 1:57 PM 576942 in reply to 576906

    Re: Halo: Pioneer (FF) Part 9

    Ending of this part was intense! Didn't see that coming... Keep Writing!!!
    Staring at the carnage
    Praying that the sun would never rise
    Living another day in disguise
    These feelings can't be right
    Lend me the courage
    to stand up and fight
    Woah tonight... - M.I.A. by A7x

    I'm not weird, I'm just different
  •  05-04-2009, 2:12 PM 576956 in reply to 576942

    Re: Halo: Pioneer (FF) Part 9

    WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING?!?!?! Very interesting Footbutt (Lol, a weird name to type)
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  •  05-04-2009, 6:11 PM 577253 in reply to 576956

    Re: Halo: Pioneer (FF) Part 9

    thanks, guys. i'll try and write two more chapters in the next couple days. i'm really getting into this whole suspense thing. : )

    New story out! Halo: Below the Brine
    (it's the best story you're not reading!)
  •  05-04-2009, 6:17 PM 577263 in reply to 577253

    Re: Halo: Pioneer (FF) Part 9

    Remember, don't put in too much suspense. Then people get really impatient and annoyed. But so far, I am able to keep my patience running. BUT HURRY UP! I really wanna know what is happening!
    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  05-04-2009, 7:08 PM 577362 in reply to 577263

    Re: Halo: Pioneer (FF) Part 9

    oh, don't worry. much will be reveled in the next two chapters.

    New story out! Halo: Below the Brine
    (it's the best story you're not reading!)
  •  05-05-2009, 9:04 AM 578058 in reply to 577362

    Re: Halo: Pioneer (FF) Part 9

    i've went ahead and edited all of the previous chapters.
    i cleaned up some wording and grammar and changed the UN to the UNSC. Also fixed some spelling errors.
    i should have the new chapter up later today.

     


    New story out! Halo: Below the Brine
    (it's the best story you're not reading!)
  •  05-06-2009, 10:33 AM 579093 in reply to 578058

    Re: Halo: Pioneer (FF) Part 10

    Part 10

    Harper turned to Private Brooks and they both opened their mouths to say something. Harper spoke first. "Brooks, notify Pioneer we have contacts." He looked back to the ridgeline to see the objects were indeed coming closer.

    "Ian, they’re probably just doing a sweep of the outlying area," Kasan offered as Brooks hailed the colony ship.

    Private Smith cleared his throat to get their attention. "Um, if they’re headed this way, should we not be heading back to the ship?"

    Captain Relo’s voice crackled through Harper’s communicator. "Lieutenant, we have analyzed the spectrum of the red beams coming off of the objects down there with you. They are the same readings we received in your last encounter. Culver’s devices should reflect any signals they aim at you."

    Brooks didn’t look convinced. "Sir, it doesn’t mean they have no other offensive weaponry."

    "Understood, Private, but this is Harper’s call," Relo responded.

    Harper worked his jaw for a bit. At the moment they were not being threatened nor did they have much intel on these contacts. Frustrated, Harper could see his breath as he exhaled. "We’re still a Go, Sir." He looked over to Kasan who gave him an appreciative nod. "Smith, how many contacts do we have?"

    The soldier looked down and typed away on his commpad. "Exactly 336." He frowned as he looked up. "That’s an odd number."

    Harper crawled over to see Smith’s display and found the motion of the contacts to be almost casual with no perceivable pattern. They swept down over the rift and slowly circled back along the ridgeline. They only came within 250 meters of Contact Team. "Brooks, were you able to get a better image?"

    "Yeah, here it is," the rifleman said as he punched a few buttons on his commpad. The image resolved itself into a fairly cubed shape with rounded edges. It had a single red eye in the front that was centered in its gray chassis.

    All four of them were fixed on their displays. Harper made a quizzical expression. "Pioneer, do you see what we see?"

    "Yes, Lieutenant. Standby."

    Harper sat up and waited patiently for a response. They're probably talking with Sergeant Hill.

    "Harper, we have temporarily lost contact with Strike Team. They traveled into a cave where the power source is located and apparently it’s shielding our transmissions." A static hiss filled Harper’s ears as the captain sighed. "We still have their biometrics and comm buoys, but we are unable to make visual or radio contact."

    The coloring in Private Smith’s face paled as his right hand hovered over his rifle. "Not good." His commpad beeped repeatedly and his eyes grew wide. "I’m picking up multiple lifeforms entering the area."

    Harper quickly turned around when he heard an animal-like roar. His eyes swept from left to right trying to locate the source. "There! On the right."

    Both commandos' training kick in as they turned to face this new threat. "Mark 150 meters," Brooks informed Smith who was rising to his feet to take aim.

    Harper held up his hand to halt the two men. He squinted through the snowfall that had just begun and was able to identify a humanoid. It let out another yell that took a spit second to reach Harper’s ears. The wandering, gray cubes snapped out of scanning the surface and turned towards the humanoid. With a final cry he took off running towards the mass of 336. As if on cue, hundreds of other voices joined in the battle cry. Harper looked around the ridgeline to see an equally numbered force of humanoids charging into the clearing.

    "Sir, orders?" Brooks ask with obvious haste.

    Harper didn’t have time to analyze his options, but he couldn’t let those barbaric people get torn to shreds. "Fire on the machines at my command." He held his hand up as he watched the events in the clearing unfold. The humanoids had reached the first line of machines and were struck with the familiar red beam.

    Harper’s mouth hung open as the barbarians rushed on without any effect from the machines. They leaped into the air and landed hard on the machines causing them to dip to the ground. At first, it appeared the humanoids were beating them senseless with various long objects, but the rate at which the machines fell to the ground suggested to Harper that they had found a weakness in the chassis.

    The battle was a massacre as the gray cubed machines fell to the ground and their red eyes winked out. "Hold your fire," Harper said slowly as if not believing what he was seeing.

    If the soldiers said anything in response it was drowned out with a staccato of static that filled the communicators Contact Team wore. Sudden and agonizing pain returned to Harper’s head as his body stiffened and slammed to the ground. The snow did little to soften his fall and he realized it would soon blanket him, hiding any evidence he was ever on this planet. Kasan Abrams was in his periphery, lying face first in the snow with one eye visible. The pain on her half-exposed face made his heart ache. I’ve failed to protect her again.

    Harper could hear Smith and Brooks fall to the ground as well, and he knew the other two were paralyzed. His head felt like it was going to explode as the neural device somehow forced more needles of pain into his skull. As darkness crept into the sides of his eyes, he found himself perplexed. The machines could not have done this.

    He couldn’t explain it then, but he knew they had been betrayed.


    **********

    Kasan blinked her eyes several times. She knew she wasn’t dead, but her head felt like a spit melon. Kasan felt a strong hand push her left shoulder down to the ground so as to face her skyward. A couple snowflakes caressed her reddened cheeks. That same hand reached up and tore her neural device and communicator off. The pain she felt cut off like a door being slammed shut, and she immediately sat upright and coughed several times. Her vision swirled and she laid back down rubbing her temples with gloved hands. She heard Ian beside her respond in the same manner as a dark figure removed his headgear.

    "You are safe, for the moment," said an oddly accented voice.

    Kasan could hear the two commandos moaning as they too were brought back to the land of the living. Tension and worry brewed in Kasan’s chest as she didn’t recognize the voice that had just spoke. "Safe from what?" she asked hesitantly.

    A silhouette of a head and shoulders appeared from above. Kasan’s eyes focused on a middle-aged man with flowing gray hair. His face was lean and bearded that made him look much older while his brown eyes told of his youth. He smiled down at her. "We need to get you into shelter. The snowfall is a bit unpredictable and can turn to a blizzard very quickly." He sat Kasan back up into a sitting position and she found her vision normalizing.

    "You didn’t answer her question," Harper’s croaked. He reluctantly stood with his left hand holding his head. "And who are you?"

    The bearded man began to help up Kasan when he replied, "I am Dr. Shalan Canner, and we are safe from the machines, for now." He grabbed Kasan’s knapsack and handed it to her. "Please, we must hurry."

    Kasan looked over to Harper as he reached for his communicator. It was sparking and the severed wires at the ends gave little hope of contacting Pioneer. She looked down at her belt and found everything that was hooked up to the neural protector was blackened and smelled of burned electronics. "Our personal beacons are shot, too." She turned and faced Harper who gave a blank look.

    Brooks and Smith came up with rifles still in hand. Brooks shook his head at Harper. "Pioneer probably thinks we’re all dead, Sir."

    "And it should stay that way," Dr. Canner called up to them as he awkwardly stomped down the hillside. "Come, we must hurry. I’ll tell you all you need to know when we’re inside."

    "Orders, Lieutenant?" Private Smith asked with furrowed brow.

    Kasan could tell scenarios and possibilities raced through Harper’s mind behind his eyes. She shrugged in helplessness.

    "Follow the doctor," Harper said at last. "He’s got a lot of explaining to do."

    They traced Canner’s path down the slope, and even as their tracks left deep impressions in the ground, the snowfall quickly filled their steps.


    New story out! Halo: Below the Brine
    (it's the best story you're not reading!)
  •  05-06-2009, 12:06 PM 579158 in reply to 579093

    Re: Halo: Pioneer (FF) Part 10

    Okay, I'm confused...
    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  05-06-2009, 12:10 PM 579164 in reply to 553942

    Re: Halo: Pioneer (FF) Part 10 (with edited previous chapters!)

    Footbutt:

    Here's my first crack at this. Feel free to criticize or flame....

     

    In the early years of Colonization to the unknown worlds a ship and its crew set off on a mission to find a new place to call home. A private company, known as the Hexil Corporation, is the sole provider of financial and military support to the three-ship convoy. The medium cruiser, Pioneer, is suplimented with two verra-class fighters. Though small for a colony project, the crew is seasoned and eager to begin....

    The faint whisk of air that reached his face brought him back to reality. Captain Jonas Relo opened his eyes to see his second-in-command standing in the doorway. "Lieutenant, have we arrived in system?" Relo asked as he proped himself up on his right arm.

    "We have, Sir. We didn't expect our entry into Aegis to be so soon." Lieutenant Ian Harper looked down at his hands and opened them.
    "Sir, we have done our initial scan of the system and no sign of signal nor vehicle traffic."

    Jonas wiped away the last remnants of tiredness from his face with his left hand and sat up on the edge of his bed. "Good. I'll be on the bridge shortly." He stood up and looked outside his viewport to see a vast array of blackness punctuated by a single bright point, the star Aegis. "Well, this is the farthest any colony ship has made." ...and no one will barely hear a word about us back on Earth. He turned to face Harper and smiled, "Let's make ourselves a home."

    **********

    With the resounding thump of boots hitting the deck, Captain Relo forced himself to walk briskly without appearing to hurry. Everyone aboard Pioneer had woken up, dressed themselves, and were now quickly making it to their stations causing the corridor to seem more like a marketplace than a colony vessel. They had all recently come out of the cryo-pods just two weeks ago and most were resuming natural function, but some, like Relo, never took to the sudden change as well as others. The Captain had seen his fair share of conflict in his life. Even at the age of 34 he had his scars to confirm he was the veteran in which his file spoke.

    As the rest of the crew settled in, Lieutenant Ian Harper detached himself from a wide-range spectrum analyzer and came to the Captain's side as Relo entered the bridge. "All stations are checking in and will be ready in two minutes. Bringing the ship around."

    Relo nodded and made his way to the large panoramic view of the system. From his cabin he had only a small section to gaze, but from here he found the beauty of the multi-colored nebulae that framed the system to be fantastic. Deep purple and orange highlighted with green  made the entire bridge fall silent. Jonas could not help but smile as his officers and crewmen took in the awe of Aegis.

    It had been seven years in the making, but the Hexil Corporation's promises of a place worth the journey had come to fruition. Hexil had began its project as an open invitation to the public to prove that a private sector company could colonize just as efficiently as the government. The Corporation made sure to supply the ship with personnel of military background and advanced training capacities. Through miles of red tape and regulations tying up military-grade surplus, Pioneer was custom constructed to fit the role of a colony vessel that housed enough weapons and supplies to start a small war on one of Jupiter's moons. What helped make it unique was the ability to deploy two of the new Verra-class fighters from underside the ship's keel. The new fighters were the latest in Hexil design boasting a scaled-down version of the MAC gun as well as a improved thrusters for superb atmospheric flight.

    A console beeped and the crewman stationed at the long-range scanners called out as he read the information scrolling down his screen. "Captain, I'm picking up some faint, very weak signal coming from the second planet out."

    "That must be the probe. After several years, I'm impressed its beacon is still transmitting."

    "Sir?" asked Lt. Harper.

    "That probe was originally designed to inform Hexil of any habitable planets and send the location and atmospheric readings back," explained Relo. "Its beacon programming was an added-on feature that was to last for ten years. With all the loose ends and delays, that probe has well outlasted its life expectancy."

    The helmsman caught the Captain's nod and set course for the second planet. Relo could not ignore the ice in his stomach. There's little chance that probe would still be operable. He took his seat in the captain's chair and pushed aside any reservations he had about investigating the signal.

     

    no offense to u here but i hate people who write to much 

     

    bu i agree wit some of dem views


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  •  05-06-2009, 12:33 PM 579187 in reply to 579164

    Re: Halo: Pioneer (FF) Part 10 (with edited previous chapters!)

    ISITTHECAPTAIN:

    Footbutt:

    Here's my first crack at this. Feel free to criticize or flame....

     

    In the early years of Colonization to the unknown worlds a ship and its crew set off on a mission to find a new place to call home. A private company, known as the Hexil Corporation, is the sole provider of financial and military support to the three-ship convoy. The medium cruiser, Pioneer, is suplimented with two verra-class fighters. Though small for a colony project, the crew is seasoned and eager to begin....

    The faint whisk of air that reached his face brought him back to reality. Captain Jonas Relo opened his eyes to see his second-in-command standing in the doorway. "Lieutenant, have we arrived in system?" Relo asked as he proped himself up on his right arm.

    "We have, Sir. We didn't expect our entry into Aegis to be so soon." Lieutenant Ian Harper looked down at his hands and opened them.
    "Sir, we have done our initial scan of the system and no sign of signal nor vehicle traffic."

    Jonas wiped away the last remnants of tiredness from his face with his left hand and sat up on the edge of his bed. "Good. I'll be on the bridge shortly." He stood up and looked outside his viewport to see a vast array of blackness punctuated by a single bright point, the star Aegis. "Well, this is the farthest any colony ship has made." ...and no one will barely hear a word about us back on Earth. He turned to face Harper and smiled, "Let's make ourselves a home."

    **********

    With the resounding thump of boots hitting the deck, Captain Relo forced himself to walk briskly without appearing to hurry. Everyone aboard Pioneer had woken up, dressed themselves, and were now quickly making it to their stations causing the corridor to seem more like a marketplace than a colony vessel. They had all recently come out of the cryo-pods just two weeks ago and most were resuming natural function, but some, like Relo, never took to the sudden change as well as others. The Captain had seen his fair share of conflict in his life. Even at the age of 34 he had his scars to confirm he was the veteran in which his file spoke.

    As the rest of the crew settled in, Lieutenant Ian Harper detached himself from a wide-range spectrum analyzer and came to the Captain's side as Relo entered the bridge. "All stations are checking in and will be ready in two minutes. Bringing the ship around."

    Relo nodded and made his way to the large panoramic view of the system. From his cabin he had only a small section to gaze, but from here he found the beauty of the multi-colored nebulae that framed the system to be fantastic. Deep purple and orange highlighted with green  made the entire bridge fall silent. Jonas could not help but smile as his officers and crewmen took in the awe of Aegis.

    It had been seven years in the making, but the Hexil Corporation's promises of a place worth the journey had come to fruition. Hexil had began its project as an open invitation to the public to prove that a private sector company could colonize just as efficiently as the government. The Corporation made sure to supply the ship with personnel of military background and advanced training capacities. Through miles of red tape and regulations tying up military-grade surplus, Pioneer was custom constructed to fit the role of a colony vessel that housed enough weapons and supplies to start a small war on one of Jupiter's moons. What helped make it unique was the ability to deploy two of the new Verra-class fighters from underside the ship's keel. The new fighters were the latest in Hexil design boasting a scaled-down version of the MAC gun as well as a improved thrusters for superb atmospheric flight.

    A console beeped and the crewman stationed at the long-range scanners called out as he read the information scrolling down his screen. "Captain, I'm picking up some faint, very weak signal coming from the second planet out."

    "That must be the probe. After several years, I'm impressed its beacon is still transmitting."

    "Sir?" asked Lt. Harper.

    "That probe was originally designed to inform Hexil of any habitable planets and send the location and atmospheric readings back," explained Relo. "Its beacon programming was an added-on feature that was to last for ten years. With all the loose ends and delays, that probe has well outlasted its life expectancy."

    The helmsman caught the Captain's nod and set course for the second planet. Relo could not ignore the ice in his stomach. There's little chance that probe would still be operable. He took his seat in the captain's chair and pushed aside any reservations he had about investigating the signal.

    Here's my first crack at this. Feel free to criticize or flame....

     

    In the early years of Colonization to the unknown worlds a ship and its crew set off on a mission to find a new place to call home. A private company, known as the Hexil Corporation, is the sole provider of financial and military support to the three-ship convoy. The medium cruiser, Pioneer, is suplimented with two verra-class fighters. Though small for a colony project, the crew is seasoned and eager to begin....

    The faint whisk of air that reached his face brought him back to reality. Captain Jonas Relo opened his eyes to see his second-in-command standing in the doorway. "Lieutenant, have we arrived in system?" Relo asked as he proped himself up on his right arm.

    "We have, Sir. We didn't expect our entry into Aegis to be so soon." Lieutenant Ian Harper looked down at his hands and opened them.
    "Sir, we have done our initial scan of the system and no sign of signal nor vehicle traffic."

    Jonas wiped away the last remnants of tiredness from his face with his left hand and sat up on the edge of his bed. "Good. I'll be on the bridge shortly." He stood up and looked outside his viewport to see a vast array of blackness punctuated by a single bright point, the star Aegis. "Well, this is the farthest any colony ship has made." ...and no one will barely hear a word about us back on Earth. He turned to face Harper and smiled, "Let's make ourselves a home."

    **********

    With the resounding thump of boots hitting the deck, Captain Relo forced himself to walk briskly without appearing to hurry. Everyone aboard Pioneer had woken up, dressed themselves, and were now quickly making it to their stations causing the corridor to seem more like a marketplace than a colony vessel. They had all recently come out of the cryo-pods just two weeks ago and most were resuming natural function, but some, like Relo, never took to the sudden change as well as others. The Captain had seen his fair share of conflict in his life. Even at the age of 34 he had his scars to confirm he was the veteran in which his file spoke.

    As the rest of the crew settled in, Lieutenant Ian Harper detached himself from a wide-range spectrum analyzer and came to the Captain's side as Relo entered the bridge. "All stations are checking in and will be ready in two minutes. Bringing the ship around."

    Relo nodded and made his way to the large panoramic view of the system. From his cabin he had only a small section to gaze, but from here he found the beauty of the multi-colored nebulae that framed the system to be fantastic. Deep purple and orange highlighted with green  made the entire bridge fall silent. Jonas could not help but smile as his officers and crewmen took in the awe of Aegis.

    It had been seven years in the making, but the Hexil Corporation's promises of a place worth the journey had come to fruition. Hexil had began its project as an open invitation to the public to prove that a private sector company could colonize just as efficiently as the government. The Corporation made sure to supply the ship with personnel of military background and advanced training capacities. Through miles of red tape and regulations tying up military-grade surplus, Pioneer was custom constructed to fit the role of a colony vessel that housed enough weapons and supplies to start a small war on one of Jupiter's moons. What helped make it unique was the ability to deploy two of the new Verra-class fighters from underside the ship's keel. The new fighters were the latest in Hexil design boasting a scaled-down version of the MAC gun as well as a improved thrusters for superb atmospheric flight.

    A console beeped and the crewman stationed at the long-range scanners called out as he read the information scrolling down his screen. "Captain, I'm picking up some faint, very weak signal coming from the second planet out."

    "That must be the probe. After several years, I'm impressed its beacon is still transmitting."

    "Sir?" asked Lt. Harper.

    "That probe was originally designed to inform Hexil of any habitable planets and send the location and atmospheric readings back," explained Relo. "Its beacon programming was an added-on feature that was to last for ten years. With all the loose ends and delays, that probe has well outlasted its life expectancy."

    The helmsman caught the Captain's nod and set course for the second planet. Relo could not ignore the ice in his stomach. There's little chance that probe would still be operable. He took his seat in the captain's chair and pushed aside any reservations he had about investigating the signal.

    Here's my first crack at this. Feel free to criticize or flame....

     

    In the early years of Colonization to the unknown worlds a ship and its crew set off on a mission to find a new place to call home. A private company, known as the Hexil Corporation, is the sole provider of financial and military support to the three-ship convoy. The medium cruiser, Pioneer, is suplimented with two verra-class fighters. Though small for a colony project, the crew is seasoned and eager to begin....

    The faint whisk of air that reached his face brought him back to reality. Captain Jonas Relo opened his eyes to see his second-in-command standing in the doorway. "Lieutenant, have we arrived in system?" Relo asked as he proped himself up on his right arm.

    "We have, Sir. We didn't expect our entry into Aegis to be so soon." Lieutenant Ian Harper looked down at his hands and opened them.
    "Sir, we have done our initial scan of the system and no sign of signal nor vehicle traffic."

    Jonas wiped away the last remnants of tiredness from his face with his left hand and sat up on the edge of his bed. "Good. I'll be on the bridge shortly." He stood up and looked outside his viewport to see a vast array of blackness punctuated by a single bright point, the star Aegis. "Well, this is the farthest any colony ship has made." ...and no one will barely hear a word about us back on Earth. He turned to face Harper and smiled, "Let's make ourselves a home."

    **********

    With the resounding thump of boots hitting the deck, Captain Relo forced himself to walk briskly without appearing to hurry. Everyone aboard Pioneer had woken up, dressed themselves, and were now quickly making it to their stations causing the corridor to seem more like a marketplace than a colony vessel. They had all recently come out of the cryo-pods just two weeks ago and most were resuming natural function, but some, like Relo, never took to the sudden change as well as others. The Captain had seen his fair share of conflict in his life. Even at the age of 34 he had his scars to confirm he was the veteran in which his file spoke.

    As the rest of the crew settled in, Lieutenant Ian Harper detached himself from a wide-range spectrum analyzer and came to the Captain's side as Relo entered the bridge. "All stations are checking in and will be ready in two minutes. Bringing the ship around."

    Relo nodded and made his way to the large panoramic view of the system. From his cabin he had only a small section to gaze, but from here he found the beauty of the multi-colored nebulae that framed the system to be fantastic. Deep purple and orange highlighted with green  made the entire bridge fall silent. Jonas could not help but smile as his officers and crewmen took in the awe of Aegis.

    It had been seven years in the making, but the Hexil Corporation's promises of a place worth the journey had come to fruition. Hexil had began its project as an open invitation to the public to prove that a private sector company could colonize just as efficiently as the government. The Corporation made sure to supply the ship with personnel of military background and advanced training capacities. Through miles of red tape and regulations tying up military-grade surplus, Pioneer was custom constructed to fit the role of a colony vessel that housed enough weapons and supplies to start a small war on one of Jupiter's moons. What helped make it unique was the ability to deploy two of the new Verra-class fighters from underside the ship's keel. The new fighters were the latest in Hexil design boasting a scaled-down version of the MAC gun as well as a improved thrusters for superb atmospheric flight.

    A console beeped and the crewman stationed at the long-range scanners called out as he read the information scrolling down his screen. "Captain, I'm picking up some faint, very weak signal coming from the second planet out."

    "That must be the probe. After several years, I'm impressed its beacon is still transmitting."

    "Sir?" asked Lt. Harper.

    "That probe was originally designed to inform Hexil of any habitable planets and send the location and atmospheric readings back," explained Relo. "Its beacon programming was an added-on feature that was to last for ten years. With all the loose ends and delays, that probe has well outlasted its life expectancy."

    The helmsman caught the Captain's nod and set course for the second planet. Relo could not ignore the ice in his stomach. There's little chance that probe would still be operable. He took his seat in the captain's chair and pushed aside any reservations he had about investigating the signal.

     

    no offense to u here but i hate people who write to much 

     

    bu i agree wit some of dem views

    Shouldn't it be "i hate when people write too much"?

    Hate is such a strong word.
    (joking, of course. you do what you want.)


    New story out! Halo: Below the Brine
    (it's the best story you're not reading!)
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