Mr Sticky: Offensive Bias:I have a few problems with this... How is Reach inhabitable? Why would they plan to re-colonise one of the furthest colonies in the Outer Rim? Doesn't make sense to me. Oh and, a Ship Making Factory? Not a way a soldier would talk. It would be a Shipyard.
1. Why not? It was almost completely glassed over, but that doesn't mean its not inhabitable.
2. They haven't recollonized it yet. It is just a research facility. They will eventually, but I don't see any reason why they wouldn't. Its a planet that people can live on. Why pass it up?
3. Don't judge me. I'll change it just to make you happy.
1. Yes, it kinda does, lol. With the surface completely burnt and no plant life, there would be no oxygen, combine that with the fact that the atmosphere boils away during glassing, and it's a dead planet.
2. A reserach facility on a glassed planet and the furthest planet in the Outer Rim? Take into account that Harvest is months away from Reac or Earth, it wouldn't be a very reliable place to research. They would just use Earth for a research facility. As for Reach, that can be easily replaced by Mars.
3. Thank you.
Sorry if it seems I'm bearing down on you, but the story doesn't feel right to me.
In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.