The Videlicet:

Yam Head:

good installment

? What does he mean ?

in other words good chapter.

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"Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
"Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
"Better dead then Red!"
"Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"

your forgeting to put a . , ! or ? after some one speaks

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"Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
"Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
"Better dead then Red!"
"Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"

Sorry. i will edit, i keep forgeting!

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JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder

There we go i edited it.

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Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

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JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder

thats good. keep up the good work.

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"Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
"Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
"Better dead then Red!"
"Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"

In every chapter i have done someone has told me to go back and edit it with either !?,.

lol

I might finish chapter 4 now and i will put it up by tonight.

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JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder

Eh its not too bad. You already killed off the main character so it is feeling really to short for me.

Not unless that's what you were going for?

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add me on live! Danish77

Thanks joker!

Daniel:

Eh its not too bad. You already killed off the main character so it is feeling really to short for me.

Not unless that's what you were going for?

**psssst**

I'll give you a hint he was'nt the main charictor, Ren is, and the first 3 chapters where like a prologue for you to understand why i called it "the resistence"

Chapter 4 is where it all begins. I am putting chapter 4 up now.

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Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

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JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder

Its on the OP

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JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder

My mistake. sorry

x]

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add me on live! Danish77

Thanks joker!

Its pretty good, kinda suprised me when jenkins showed up.

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add me on live! Danish77

Thanks joker!

Daniel:

Its pretty good, kinda suprised me when jenkins showed up.

Sorry i didn't mean for jenkins to be a well known charictor it was just a name that came into my head.

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Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

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JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder

Chapter 5 is now up on the OP

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Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

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JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder

I just put 2 new chapters up and no-one wants to read?

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Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

December the 15'th, go here! ^^

JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder

No-one?

I will have a new chapter up later

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Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

December the 15'th, go here! ^^

JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder