you canz edit the first post and erase the double chapter one?

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Yam Head:

Yammy.......Its starting to grow on me. I really wanted to see what people would think If Malak died so I decided to post it. now they get to wonder how it happened and I get to write it :)

That is also true. But in my teasers, I like to show someone in an action scene or a battle. Or someone in incredible pain. Never someone getting killed.

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

JaxTheAx117:

you canz edit the first post and erase the double chapter one?

I tried that but it didn't work. It is quite a stubborn error.

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

mabe cuz we quoted it!

quick everyone correct that!

to the fatty mobile!

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Im running out of elite names and im tired of just saying the sangheili bla bla bla. So An excellent idea I saw Offensive bias put into action any reader of mine or any one for that matter can think of a elite name, rank (rookie, major domo, spec ops, a select few will be zealots or ship masters) finally choose up to two weapons, and I will put you into the story. Sorry to say just to keep it interesting Some characters may die eventually (ill PM the members to alert them and as long as it fits the plot they can choose their own death). I hope this works :)

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"Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
"Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
"Better dead then Red!"
"Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"

I would like to be a Minor Elite. (A rookie)

My weapon of choice is a carbine and a beam rifle.

My name is Tanra Thuramee (Shortened to Thuram after the civil war)

There you go. I don't want to die, but if I do, I still get to choose. I also want him to get hurt a lot, wounded and whatever because I don't want to seem invincible.

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

Offensive bias:

I would like to be a Minor Elite. (A rookie)

My weapon of choice is a carbine and a beam rifle.

My name is Tanra Thuramee (Shortened to Thuram after the civil war)

There you go. I don't want to die, but if I do, I still get to choose. I also want him to get hurt a lot, wounded and whatever because I don't want to seem invincible.

Okay, do you have a prefrence to what battles you perticipate in? Like do you want to be part of the sacred icon retrieval or the first movement of the civil war. Also you can choose if your just some random elite or that your one of the warriors on board sacred purity.

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"Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
"Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
"Better dead then Red!"
"Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"

I want my character to be one of the Elites that retrieves the sacred icon. I want to be a main character who tries to prove himself countless times. So in other words, this ends up with him being hurt a lot. He is an excellent marksman and is often used by Volvo as a sniper or scout. He helps Volvo massively in the civil war when the Elites try and get away from High Charity. There he proves himself to Volvo and Volvo accepts him. While when he is retrieving the icon, he is foolish and Volvo dislikes him at first...

There we go.

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

Will do. After volvo fends of the flood (you will be part of that batttle) Volvo will take you along with a handful of grunts will journey to the library and aid the arbiter in its capture

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"Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
"Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
"Better dead then Red!"
"Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"

Yay! I have almost finished my chapter too.

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

dude i love the story

if u can answer 2 things for me tho

1. can i somehow be added
2. what type of format do u use

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" I stay here until all others have gone. I will make sure I am the last one to be here. And when I am, I shall make a thread. A memorial thread. And I shall leave these forums behind. " - Offensive Bias

eliteempire:

dude i love the story

if u can answer 2 things for me tho

1. can i somehow be added
2. what type of format do u use

Anyone can be added if they want. Just leave your character name, your characters rank and your characters two preffered weapons.

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

Offensive bias:

eliteempire:

dude i love the story

if u can answer 2 things for me tho

1. can i somehow be added
2. what type of format do u use

Anyone can be added if they want. Just leave your character name, your characters rank and your characters two preffered weapons.

Yeah what OB said. You can just pm me the details.

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"Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
"Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
"Better dead then Red!"
"Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"

can i be a grunt commando that goes with the arbitar as well name yipyip with needler and special commando plasma rifle

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http://www.fallenearthrpg.com?x=11281

ok, Ill put that in. Your going to be in either this chapter or the next.

your going to be on Sacred Purity fighting flood like OB before you guys head off to the library

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"Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
"Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
"Better dead then Red!"
"Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"