" She hurriedly made a lunch and walked out the door in."
can someone just explain that bit, is it supposed to be out the door in?
it may just be terminology i dont know.
dam i had trouble wording this message.
@ Killer! Grunt!
Yep, didn't see that. *Puts on spectacles*
You do realise... when I said ten bucks I was speaking in terms of metaphorically?
lol ill go fix it.
lol.
Like the story? :D
No sparhawk, you entered a legally binding deal, i want my 10$!
Thank you don for leaving that one tiny mistake in :-)
Don Corleone: lol.Like the story? :D
I loved it.
Sure thing :D
lol
Its fixed now
*waits for more comments*
ah i love getting a fresh start on things...
and don the story is even better this time around, keep up the good work...
The story is pretty good so far...
Oh and what a weird coincidence. I actually have a grandpa whose last name is Sanders and he lives in the eastern part of Tennessee.
VolsFan368: The story is pretty good so far...Oh and what a weird coincidence. I actually have a grandpa whose last name is Sanders and he lives in the eastern part of Tennessee.
Weird...Thanks.Anything that displeases ya?lol