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The Great War(FF)

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  •  05-14-2008, 5:33 PM 229483 in reply to 229481

    Re: The Great War

    K.Our own German member will be the next character.

    The Great WarCh.5 is up
    Caba's JourneyDone
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  •  05-14-2008, 5:40 PM 229495 in reply to 229481

    Re: The Great War

    Second is read, third is wanted. This is interesting
  •  05-14-2008, 6:10 PM 229540 in reply to 229483

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    Don Corleone:
    K.Our own German member will be the next character.

    kirbster?


    I now have X-box live and Adamhag94 is my gamertag, so drop me a note and we'll play sometime...

    Death Comes Swiftly 2.0



  •  05-14-2008, 8:01 PM 229695 in reply to 229478

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    Don Corleone:

    Ch.3

       Nigel Zelt woke up in his tent.He got up on his elbows and looked around.Still dark.If this kept happening,the Sturmbannführer would have his ass in a sling.He needed to not feel as though bricks were tied to his feet.He layed on his back and willed himself to sleep.He rememberes his peaceful days.Before this war destroyed his life.When he lived out in Eastern Germany.He would play with friends,without fear of some yankee sniper.Then Hitler rose to power.He...He was a baloon.Full of himself.He only caused trouble.Enlisting all the capable men,deporting 'unreliables' that Nigel had been friends with since childhood.The hypocrisy of his serving still tasted sour in his mouth.But,he still felt a pride in the Fatherland.He would throw away his life for it.The SS were not soldiers.They were Untermenschen in fancy suits.They were curs who sucked up to the Party.He hoped never...to...be...

       A whistle started to sound in the background."The hell?"He murmered as he remembered where he was."Schiza!"He sprang up and started getting dressed.If he was late to roll,Sturmbannführer Fritz would...be most unhappy.The Sturmbannführer was a vicious thirty year old who loved to take out his anger on the dumb ass' that he caught.He was feared within the group.Many believed that the Devil had told him that if he calmed down,that he could be next in line.Of course,he was fair.He never made a trumped up charge.This earned many of the mens respect.But god help you should he find anything on you.Nigel got to roll just in time.He got in position and prayed he hadn't been overly noticed.

    still coming.Just not now.

    awesome dude...can't wait for the rest


    I now have X-box live and Adamhag94 is my gamertag, so drop me a note and we'll play sometime...

    Death Comes Swiftly 2.0



  •  05-14-2008, 8:32 PM 229786 in reply to 229695

    Re: The Great War

    Ch.3 is up:)

    The Great WarCh.5 is up
    Caba's JourneyDone
    2
  •  05-14-2008, 8:33 PM 229790 in reply to 229695

    Re: The Great War

    Hammerboy217: Underboss:
    Don Corleone:

    Ch.3

       Nigel Zelt woke up in his tent.He got up on his elbows and looked around.Still dark.If this kept happening,the Sturmbannführer would have his ass in a sling.He needed to not feel as though bricks were tied to his feet.He layed on his back and willed himself to sleep.He rememberes his peaceful days.Before this war destroyed his life.When he lived out in Eastern Germany.He would play with friends,without fear of some yankee sniper.Then Hitler rose to power.He...He was a baloon.Full of himself.He only caused trouble.Enlisting all the capable men,deporting 'unreliables' that Nigel had been friends with since childhood.The hypocrisy of his serving still tasted sour in his mouth.But,he still felt a pride in the Fatherland.He would throw away his life for it.The SS were not soldiers.They were Untermenschen in fancy suits.They were curs who sucked up to the Party.He hoped never...to...be...

       A whistle started to sound in the background."The hell?"He murmered as he remembered where he was."Schiza!"He sprang up and started getting dressed.If he was late to roll,Sturmbannführer Fritz would...be most unhappy.The Sturmbannführer was a vicious thirty year old who loved to take out his anger on the dumb ass' that he caught.He was feared within the group.Many believed that the Devil had told him that if he calmed down,that he could be next in line.Of course,he was fair.He never made a trumped up charge.This earned many of the mens respect.But god help you should he find anything on you.Nigel got to roll just in time.He got in position and prayed he hadn't been overly noticed.

    still coming.Just not now.

    awesome dude...can't wait for the rest

    me to




  •  05-14-2008, 8:35 PM 229795 in reply to 229790

    Re: The Great War

    awesome chapter don...
    I now have X-box live and Adamhag94 is my gamertag, so drop me a note and we'll play sometime...

    Death Comes Swiftly 2.0



  •  05-14-2008, 8:36 PM 229796 in reply to 229795

    Re: The Great War

    Grazie.

    The Great WarCh.5 is up
    Caba's JourneyDone
    2
  •  05-14-2008, 8:37 PM 229800 in reply to 229796

    Re: The Great War

    you can write good don

    i like it so far

    i have no idea how you're going to somehow put halo in it though 

  •  05-14-2008, 8:38 PM 229807 in reply to 229796

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    yes so far there all good i think i have figerd out whats going to hapen to but im not saying


  •  05-14-2008, 8:40 PM 229814 in reply to 229807

    Re: The Great War

    pm me the idea V.



    The Great WarCh.5 is up
    Caba's JourneyDone
    2
  •  05-14-2008, 8:56 PM 229872 in reply to 229814

    Re: The Great War

    Sweet, I'm German! 

     




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  •  05-14-2008, 9:06 PM 229915 in reply to 229872

    Re: The Great War

    lol, you do know that there is all ready a fan fic called Halo: The Great War by ty[insertabunchofrandomnumbershere]?

    Click the sig, I dare you!
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  •  05-14-2008, 9:16 PM 229942 in reply to 229915

    Re: The Great War

    i thought that name sounded familiar...

    but even so, the story is pretty good, isn't it?


    I now have X-box live and Adamhag94 is my gamertag, so drop me a note and we'll play sometime...

    Death Comes Swiftly 2.0



  •  05-14-2008, 9:20 PM 229953 in reply to 229814

    Re: The Great War

    Don Corleone:

    pm me the idea V.

    sent




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