FanFic: A New Enemy

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  •  05-10-2008, 8:17 PM 225421

    FanFic: A New Enemy

    This is part 1 of a probable 5 part story, they will all be in this thread though.

     

    "Where are we?" private Alex asked. " Anyone there?"

    "What happened?' asked Lt. Kate

    "I don't know, but I do know that we aren't on that ring-shaped world. We must be on some unknown moon." Colonel Jake replied. "We must have been hit by a covenant ship's fire when we were halfway to that Ring-world."

     

    A group of Pelican and Albatrosses on their way way to the ring world, called Halo, but they were shot and they were sent flying towards a moon. They crash landed on an unknown moon, and they all blacked out on impact. They woke up some several hours later and realized that they were not on Halo. But they could see it quite clearly, it was very close to the moon, but there was no way to get there because thier ships were severely damaged in the crashes. A They decide to try and call the Pillar of Autumn for evac.

    "Colonel Jake to Pillar of Autumn, We need imediate Evac. I repeat, we require imediate evac." Jake said.

    All he received for an answer was static. "I can't reach Them!!" he yelled, frustrated.

    "We still have 1 pelican left Captain!, We managed to land her safely, with only a couple of minor problems.The warthog on the back isn't damaged!" Sgt. Jim said excitedly.

    "Then lets get on that peilican and get the hell out of hear." Alex suggested happily.

    "We can't because there are far too many of us to fit on just 1 pelican, and we leave no man behind." Jake replied."We're going to have to salvage what reains of the other pelicans and albatrosses. We will use the parts to fix  a couple of them so that we can get out of here. If there are any other vehicles that can be saved, or fixed easily, then fix them." Jake ordered.

    "We have 3 functioning warthogs Colonel!  All 3 are Laags, we also have 1 mongoose, and We are reapairing a troop warthog, it will be ready in about 1 hour." Engineer Riggs explained.

    "Good! Then we will break up into groups and search for anything that can help us on this barren rock." Jake replied.

     

    2 hours later, 5 search parties, each consisting of 10 men went out into the barren wasteland searching for anything. 10 men were left behind to guard their camp.

     

    "What the hell is that Major Roland?" Corprol Chloe asked.

    "It looks like somesort of town or city. But what is a city doing on this moon?" Roland answered shocked. "We detected no signs of life anywhere near here other than the covenant, and if there was, the covenants scanners would have picked them up the and investigated. Unless the inhabitants are long dead, but they palce looks extremely well cared for."

    "Should we radio the other search parties, and tell them to meet us here?" Sgt. Maddie asked.

    "Yes, tell them to be here as soon as possible, and tell search party 3 to report back to camp and tell hem about this city. We have to investigate it and see if there is anything that we can use there. Tell search party 3 to report here with everyone and everything possible, especially the functioning pelicans and our ammo." Roland ordered her.

     

     Inside the city a silent alarm was sounding, the inhabitants awoke. They see the marines at the crest of the hill 10 miles away. They prepare silently and swiftly.

     

    "This is Jake of search party 3, reporting that we have all the ammo, equipment, and personnel prepared for departure, we will  arrive in less than 3 1/2 hours, over and out." Jake radioed to Roland.

    "Ok. How will we move all of the semi-functioning pelicans?'" Jake aked Sgt. Jim.

     "We  can attack cables o the working one and have them carrie some of the semi-functioning ones, and the semi's that can fly and land, but can't do much else, we'll fly them too." Jim replied.

    "Then lets get to work, and move out!" Jake ordered

     

     

    En route to Halo, A large group of Phantoms and covenant boarding craft received a distress call from an unknown moon. They realize that the signal is human and decide to go there to slaughter them.

    "What will we do Commander Shorl?" the Grunts, and Jackals inquired on the leading phantom of that brigade.

    "We will go to the distress signal and slaughter the human scum there!!!" Shorl replie loudly, encouraging his troops.

    "Tell the others to follow us to the distress beacon. They must activate their active camoflauge within 150 leagues of the distress signal or risk giving our advantage of secrecy away."Shorl continued.

     

    So, the small brigade of Covenant ships flew towards the signal, but they realize that the signal is coming from Govent, a hidden moon that is known only to the best Elites, it is hidden by a strange energy field-like gas cover. It is conatsntly moving around Halo, so it was rarely ever seen, and barely known about. They didn't see it until they were only 5 miles from its atmosphere.  They arrived to the origin of the distress signal 1 hour after the humans were within 1 mile of the city.

    "Where are They?!?!" Koalt roared, he was the leading Hunter.

    "They aren't any where near here!" the leading Gunt and Jackal, Doalnt and Fayvn yelled in unison.

    "Calm down, or the Prophets will have your heads!" rored Shorl, leader of the Elites and of this brigade. "They couldn't have gone far, have our banshees scout everywhere within a 15 mile radius of these crashed ships." he ordered one of his Elite officers.

    "Yes Commander Shorl!" he answered. He sent the banshee on their scouting within 15 minutes.

     

    The humans on the other hand found an entrance large enough for 20 pelicans to fit in at one time. They were all inside the city within minutes.

     

    "Is there a power plant any where, so that we won't have to use our flashlights?" maddie asked.

    "There has to be one, there is no possible way that anyone could build and live in this city without power." The General answered. " We'll first have to find a map of the city."

     

     

    That is the end of Part 1. Please comment.

     

  •  05-10-2008, 8:23 PM 225426 in reply to 225421

    Re: FanFic: A New Enemy

    It is good but needs some work.

    1.The only captain on Halo is Captain Keyes.

    2.The planet near by is Threshold.

    3.Threshold is a gas giant.

    Otherwise it pretty good


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  •  05-11-2008, 9:58 AM 226014 in reply to 225421

    Re: FanFic: A New Enemy

    This is Part 2.

     

    "Commander Shorl, we have found trraces of 8 medium-sized ground vehicles, 3 small ground vehicles, and 4 dropships, 2 of them are small, the other 2 are about twice the size. All heading in the direction of what looks like an ancient but well-kept city." Banshee scout 2 reported.

    "Good. Everyone you know what to do. Call in as many Wraiths, Ghosts, Banshees, and Phantoms as possible. We are going to need them to get in that city and destroy those filthy humans!" Shorl ordered his communications officers on 1 of the phantoms.

    "Yes Commander!" He replied.

     

     

    Meanwhile the humans just found what seems to be a maproom, here are 2 maps here, one traditional, and 1 electric, but is turned off and requires power. They read the traditional map carefully, until they find a generator.

     

    "Yes! There are 5 generators in repair bay 2, right below us, General!" Colonel Jake reported exicted.

    "Good, send 15 marines and 3 engineers down there. Make sure that they are quick about it too, I don't like leaving my marines in the dark, especiall in an unknown city." General Bryan ordered.

    "Yes General!" Jake replied.

     

    The marines and engineers found the power generators easily enough.

     

    "How the hell do we operate these things!?!" Private Mark questioned.

    "We have to reconnect the main cables to the main power outlet behind generator B. It is really easy." Engineer Lt. Greg stated.

    "Tell General Bryan that it will only take about half an hour tops." He told Sgt. Jim.

    "Yes sir!' He replied.

    "General, This is Private Mark of the repair party. Engineer Lt. Greg syays that we will only take half an hour at the most to get the generators running, Over." He radioed to the General.

    "Good, just hurry the hell up, i have a bad feeling about this city." Bryan ordered.

    "Affirmative. Over and Out" Mark said.

     

     

    The Covenant have just arrived at the crest of the hill that the marines were on just 5 hours ago. They prepare their weapons and vehicles.

     

    "There is a main entrance open, over there." One of the leading Elites stated pointing at the wide open door.

    "We will be in the city and have the humans dead in less than 6 hours. Commence the attack now." Shorl ordered his wraiths.

    "yes Commander!" They all replied cheerfully.

     

    "Power is up and running, General! We are coming back up!" Mark said over the redio.

    "Good." Replied Bryan.

     

    Just after the repair team returned they heard the horrible whistle and crash of Wraith fire.

    "Stay in doors!, Get the vehicles inside the vehicle bay now!!" Bryan ordered quickly.

     

     

    "Send in the Ghosts and Banshees to clear the entrance and streets." Shorl ordered his Second-in-command,  Teser.

    "Yes Commander!" She replied.

    "As soon as the Ghosts are halfway there, send forward everyone." Shorl continued.

    "Yes, Shorl." She answered.

     

     

    As soon as the power was turned on, everything that lived in the city called Drevvon by its inhabitants. they are angry that other beings have trespassed into their glorious city. They must kill these intruders, they must torture them, they must find out what they are and where they come from. They will destroy everyone that these intruders call their people. They will start a war that only they can win. they are The Drekon, or The Reapers as the other beings have called them and will always call them.

     

    That is the end of Part 2. please comment.

  •  05-11-2008, 10:09 AM 226029 in reply to 226014

    Re: FanFic: A New Enemy

    ok, but the covenant would not address UNSC vehicles by there name

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  •  05-11-2008, 10:22 AM 226043 in reply to 226029

    Re: FanFic: A New Enemy

    yeah

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  •  05-11-2008, 12:46 PM 226273 in reply to 226029

    Re: FanFic: A New Enemy

    ok, I'll edit it. But what do they call the vehicles then?
  •  05-11-2008, 1:44 PM 226340 in reply to 226014

    Re: FanFic: A New Enemy

    This is Part 3.

     

    The Covenant were laying seige to the city with their wraiths, as the rest of their little army enters the city. They have Hunters, Grunts Jackals and Elites, all fully armed and equiped. They also have Ghosts, Banshees, and Phantoms, they are very prepared for battle unlike the humans.

     

    "Tell the Wraiths to keep up the fire! Send the Ghosts and a Phantom to The power plant, We need this place to be fully lit, so that we can discover its secrets." Shorl ordered one of his Grunts.

    "Yes Commander!" It replied confidently. "Wraith 1, Commander Shorl's orders are that you keep up the fire for as long as possible."

    "Tell Commander Shorl that we can keep this up for a lttle more than 4 hours at the most." Wraith 1 answered.

    "Good. What is the status of the power generators?" Shorl asked.

    "I'll check" The Grunt replied. "Power team, what is the staus of the power?"

    "We almost have it, wait we have it up and running. It will take half an hour to warm up. We will be back in 45 minutes." The engineer reported.

     "What was that!?!?" Asked a Jackal. "I just saw a shadow go across the hallway. It wasn't human, covenant, or even flood."

     "calm down, we'll take care of it. Commander?" One of the Spec Ops Elites asked.

    "Sure. Make sure that your active camoflauge is working, and that your sensor are at full capacity. Don't forget to check your weapons."

    "Yes Commander, I have alreadydone that several minutes ago. Haver, Forgl,  Dewl, and Reciv, follow me." the Elite ansered.

    "Be back within half an hour, or we'll send backup." Shorl warned him.

    "Don't worry, we'll be back in 20 minutes tops." The Elite answered quite confidently.

     

    25 minutes later, Shorl received a radio message from Medv, the Elite that went out searching for what the shadow was.

    "There **static** strange creatures **static**!! They **static** HIGHLY agressive!! None of our weapons **static** do much damage!! We **static** immediate reinforcements!! In **static** Main Water Plant!!" was all that it said, after that, there was nothing but static.

    "What are they? We must send our entire force there to save them!!" Javem, a leading Jackal ordered.

    "NO!! That will only get us killed by them!! They said that our weapons are useless!! If they aren't already dead, they will retreat here, because they know that we can defend this place very eaily and effectively. Keep watch for 1 1/2 hours, if they aren't here by then, they're dead." Shorl retaliated harshly.

     

     

    Meanwhile, the humans were all safely in either the vehicle bay, or the fortified map room. they were communicating on a route to get to the Main Weapons Bay located on the far side of the city. They only had enough power in their flashlights for about 2 hours. And the main power wasn't activated yet.

     

    "We should go by the power lines." Jim suggested.

    "No, they are out in the open. The Covenant will see us and they will slaughter us." Jake answered. "We should go by the hallways in the buildings, it will take us longer, but it is much safer."

    "We will go through the hallways from where we are until we get to the Power plant, then we will go by the power lines, but in the shadows and alleys as much as possible. When we reach the Main Water Plant, we will follow the water pipes until we reach the Barracks. We will go through the tunnels there to reach the Main Weapons bay." General Bryan ordered.

    "Yes Sir!!" Jim and Jake said in unison.

    "Make sure that everyone is fully armed and equiped, we leave in 1 hour!" He ordered.

     

     

    "What are these things Medv?" Forgl asked.

    "I don't know but just keep shooting them!" Medv ordered. " We must get abck to the others, it will take us at least twice as long as it took us to get here because of these things!"

    "Where's Haver!?" Dewl yelled. "He was right next to me a minute ago."

    "I'm sending a radio message! Medv get over here! They will listen to you more than me!" I will tcover you!"Haver replied.

    "Cover me then!" Medv replied , and sent the radio message. " they aren't coming. they will want us to return, they are in a very good defensive position! They will probably only wait an hour and a half, so lets get out of here!" He ordered.

    "Keep up a suppressive fire!"

     

     

    "Ok! Lets move out!" Bryan ordered his marines.

     

     

    End of Part 3

     

  •  05-11-2008, 1:48 PM 226346 in reply to 226340

    Re: FanFic: A New Enemy

    Nice, keep 'em coming!
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  •  05-12-2008, 3:53 PM 227323 in reply to 226340

    Re: FanFic: A New Enemy

    This is Part 4.

     

    "General?"Jim asked.

    "What Jim?" Bryan asked back.

    "What is that writing on the walls, and what the hell is covering these tunnels?" Jim inquired.

    "I have no idea, but I don't want to find out. So. Keep moving!" Bryan ordered.

     

     

    The marines were now in the Main Water Plant. They missed the strange guardians of this city by only half an hour. They were out attacking the covenant trapped within one of the buildings.  They had entered the lair of The Reapers.

     

    "Keep running! We're almost there!" one of the Grunt lookouts heard from around the corner of the street.

    "Commander! I think that Medv and his Elites are back!" He reported

    "What!?!? I thought that they were dead!! Everyone to your post! Something is chasing them and we need to give them cover fire! Open up the dor!" Shorl ordered.

    "Yes Commander!" His troops replied at once.

     "Keep up the fire! They are just around the corner! We can make it!" Haver yelled hopefully.

    "They just keep coming! If anymore come, we're screwed."  Forgl replied.

    "COMMANDER SHORL!!!" Medv yelled as loud as he could. "WE NEED COVER FIRE!! tHOSE CREATURES ARE RIGHT BEHIND US!!"

    "We will cover you as soon as round the corner Medv!! Just hurry up!!" Shorl answered.

    "On three, We just run as fast as we can! On 3!!! 1! 2!  3!!!!! RUNNNN!!!!!" Medv!!! ordered his elites.

    So they ran as fast they could. They rounded the corner and were in the building and closwed the door behind them within 30 seconds. But the Reapers were crawling up the building, so they closed the blast barriers on the windows and doors.

    "We thought you were all dead!" one of the Grunts said.

    "We almost were. Our weapons will not kill them, but they will slow them down."  Medv explained to them all.

    "We know what they are. We found a terminal and hacked it. They are the Drekon, or more commonly known as The reapers. They were part of an experiment, to see whic one of the three deadliest infecting species is stronger. These Reapers, were the best by a long shot, they decimated the flood, and these creatures called xenomorphs. They infected both of those 2 species, but there is still a flood hive, and a xenomorph hive that The Reapers don't attack. They Reapers can't be infected by them, but all it needs is to bite or cut someone, and their virus will spread throughout the victims body, and change them suddenly into one of them. The files say that they are even more intelligent than the forerunners, but that must be impossible. This was a forerunner facility, and there are energy fields around this place that will counter-act the effects of the Holy Rings. there is only 1 thing that could have happened, these things really are smarter than the forerunners, and that means they are the smartest beings of all. There is a facility underground that is easily the size of High Charity, if not then it is larger, far larger. These Reapers escaped the facility, but they can't fly, otherwise they wouldn't even be here." Shorl explained to them

    dewl looked fearfully at his foot which had been clawed by a Reaper. he said nothing and hid it.

     

    End of Part 4. Only a few more left.

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