The Survivors

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  •  08-02-2007, 12:36 PM 82759 in reply to 82755

    Re: The Survivors

    are we working on the xenomorph from any of the movies, or a specific one?

    carefull... it^ will steal your soul...
  •  08-02-2007, 12:37 PM 82760 in reply to 82759

    Re: The Survivors

    the one from avp and the first movie, I didnt like the one in Aliens, also i'm all open to new forms.
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  •  08-02-2007, 12:43 PM 82767 in reply to 82760

    Re: The Survivors

    ok.  I wanted to know so that I can find out how these aliens move, think, etc...  the more I know about them the better I can write about them.  this should be fun.  ("



    carefull... it^ will steal your soul...
  •  08-02-2007, 12:46 PM 82768 in reply to 82767

    Re: The Survivors

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xenomorph_%28Alien%29

    have fun =)


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  •  08-02-2007, 12:48 PM 82770 in reply to 82768

    Re: The Survivors

    I was already planning on looking there.  ("

     

    (oops, I almost for got to post the next chapter, sorry!  Here it is.)

     

    Chapter 4:  strange like me?

    What had I gotten myself into?  This is just like Feltago! I thought to myself.  Is this ever going to end?  We were rushed into safe areas of the base, and were told to stay there unless we were summoned.  We waited for about half an hour in the safe room before I couldn’t stand being cooped up in it anymore.  “I am going to go insane if I have to stay in here any longer!”  I screamed in rage.  I looked at the Doc.  “We have to get out of here and help!”  The Doc nodded in agreement.  “At least they left the guns with us.”  He reached down for what I had recently learned was called a BR55.  I grabbed my own gun (an MA5B, again something that I had just recently learned.) and opened the door and crept out of it.  Marines were running up and down the hallways.  We stopped one and asked what was going on.  “They have taken the south wall.”  We rushed to the south wall of the base; sure that was where the mysterious soldier was at.  We figured that he would be where the fighting was the fiercest.

    I saw him standing on a pile of dead aliens, and about 30 more rushing towards him.  I ran towards him gun blazing.  Aliens dropped left and right as the deadly bullets sprayed across their unprotected heads.  The strange soldier turned to see who was rushing into the most dangerous area of the base with him.  He saw me. “What are you doing?!?” he exclaimed, “You are going to get yourself killed!  I didn’t answer right away; instead I just shot aliens when they got to close to us.  I looked back at him, guns blazing, looking like one of the Greek Spartans of old defeating every foe that came in his reach.  “We thought you could use some help, sir!”  I answered his startled yell.  “What can we do to help?”  He looked back at me again, and realized that the Doc, and myself would not be persuaded by anything he could say to us.  All right, cover my back.  Take cover behind that broken wall.”  He pointed to where he wanted us to go.  I told the Doc, and we hurried to it before the next wave of aliens hit us. 

    We fought for about 2 hours before they finally gave up on taking the base.  But during those 2 hours, all hell broke loose in the fighting around that base.  After the battle the marines cheered, as did the Doc and I, but the Strange soldier said nothing, just did what he always did:  stand guard. 

    I looked at the marines; they were cheering and congratulating each other for repelling the foul aliens.  I pulled one of them aside, and asked them him if he knew anything about the strange soldier.  He didn’t, so I let him go back to his celebrating.  I motioned for the Doc to come over.  “We have to get off this planet Doc.  There aren’t any people here except the marines, and this planet is going to be glassed any day now!  We have to get off it!”  The Doc looked at me, “yes, we do, but there aren’t any ships here, they have all been destroyed.  How would we get off?”  I looked around; we can get them to let us search for a ship, if we find one we can bring it back and then we can all get off before it gets destroyed. 

    I went to find the Sgt.; he is the man that I would have to ask to search for an abandoned private ship.    I found him in remnants of the base that was still in one piece, looking over a fallen comrade.  “Sergeant, I need to ask you a question.”  He looked up.  “What is it, civilian?”  He scowled at me, because of the interruption.  I paused for a moment, and then I posed my question.  “I want to take a few men and search for a ship to get us off the planet before it gets glassed.”  The Sergeant looked at me.  “I suppose that we don’t really have much choice do I.  I will send 5 men with you, and you can look for a ship.  But be back before 3 days are up.  I am told that they will be in position to glass us before the week is out.”  I am going to take the Doc with me too, he could be useful.”  He nodded, “yes take him.”  He smiled at me. 

    The next day I took the Doc, and the 5 men that the Sergeant had ordered to come with me, and left the base.  Wait,” I turned around.  The sergeant informed me that you intend to search for a ship to get us off the planet, he also asked if I would go with you.  I smiled, “This way then!”  We walked to the jeeps that the Sergeant had given us to search the surrounding area with. 

    For the first half an hour things were pretty quiet, we didn’t see any hostile forces, so things (for the most part) went well.  But about 6 hours into our search, we came across a large enemy patrol.  I was blown out of my seat by the blast from a large blue alien, a kind I had never seen before.  (I was later told that I was lucky to have even survived such a close hit.  It landed not 4 feet from me.)  The Strange soldier seemed to know something about it though and proceeded to kill it swiftly.  I was so impressed with the speed and skill that he displayed that no words of mine could ever give them justice.  Nevertheless I will try.  As the large creature brought it’s awful and terrible shielded arm up to crush him he rolled under it, and brought his gun up to bare and fired half a clip into its unprotected back.  The thing roared in anger, and spun around with a speed that I wouldn’t have thought possible for a creature so large.  It batted him off of itself as if he were no more than a fly!  He landed on the ground some feet away, but got to his feet again and repeated the actions that had got him a swat from the mighty left arm, but this time the creature crumbled when he fired into its back, and orange blood spattered everywhere.  All this time I was ducking and firing for all my life was worth. 

    We were the only three left, the Strange Soldier, the Doc, and I.  We were forced to retreat into a small cave that we had found about an hour earlier.  We hadn’t explored it much; just enough to find out if it was some private citizen’s hanger, which it wasn’t. This time we went as far back into it as we dared, for fear of the enemy blocking up the entrance while we were inside.  We left the strange soldier at the entrance so that if they should find our hiding spot, we might be able to hold them off. 

    The Doc and I walked farther into the cave, until we noticed that the deeper into the cave we walked, the less natural it became.  We finally came to a point where it looked as if it had been carved out by hands that were something akin to human.  Although we could clearly see that the stature of these creatures was different than our own, we were astonished when at least we came to a door!  Not some primitive stone door, but one of a strange make, and an advanced technology that (to my knowledge) surpassed ours.  We paused, and looked around us to see if perhaps some unknown enemy might jump out and kill us. Fortunately we found none, seeing as how the area of the cave in which we found ourselves was small and open.  I looked at the door, and reached to open it, but the Doc grabbed my arm.  “No!”  He cried, “It might be booby trapped!”  I looked at his grim face.  “Your right Doc, it might at that.  But it also might be the door to a way off this unfortunate planet.  He looked at the door, and then at me again, then let go of my arm.  He nodded slightly in hesitant agreement.  “Alright, but be careful.” 

    I reached out for the door again, and put my hand on it.  A crack appeared on the edge of the door, and I looked inside.  I heard a strange crackling voice talking from inside, almost like an old record playing.  I didn’t see anyone inside so I opened the door the rest of the way.  I almost immediately regretted it; we were barraged by tiny flying robots, the instant we stepped inside the room.  We ducked, dodged and shot at them.  (Looking back I have to admit that shooting them was not the brightest thing to do, since there were so many of them, and only two of us.) 

    We looked around trying to find refuge in the room, but they were everywhere!  We finally found a small space where the tiny menaces wouldn’t go.  It had a small door in it, and because we figured that it couldn’t be any worse than the tiny things flying around us, we opened it.  It was dark inside, but as soon as we stepped in, the lights came on and the doors slammed shut behind us.  We both tensed up, prepared for anything that might jump out at us.  But after a few seconds nothing happened, and we relaxed.  We wandered around us, looking for an exit since the way that we had come through was sealed. 

    After a few minutes we came across an ancient glass armor case.  Inside it had two sets of armor, strange gauntlets, and various other strange items.  We looked at each other, then back at the case.  “I wonder who put this here,” said the Doc.  I looked around to see if I could find another exit, but instead I found a computer console.  I walked over to it to see if perhaps it controlled the doors.  I was surprised to find that it was displaying in my language.  It had several options to display.  I chose one and a hologram of a strange being appeared and said the following:

    “I am truly sorry for things to come to this.  If this is playing then I know that worst has come to worst, and that the covenant have misunderstood the meaning of the artifacts that we left behind.  On behalf of my entire race, I give my sincerest apologies.  If we had but known what would become of them; we would have left things differently.  But, we cannot change the past, so we must help secure the future!  The suits that you see hanging in that case,” at this point is pointed at the ones we had found moments before, “are the most advanced fighting suits that we have had the privilege to construct for beings not of our own race.  We built them for the race called ‘humans’.  Two specific humans in fact, for we have seen that these two humans will be brought together through a third, although this third person is not entirely human himself.  It is imperative that you use these suits, and save your planet.  In doing so you will learn things that can save the human race from ultimate destruction!

    It stopped there and I found a printed copy of what the hologram said.  The Doc and I looked it over, and tried to decide what we should do.  We decided to pick one of the other two choices, and the hologram came up again; but this time it was garbled and hard to understand.  But what we could pick out one or two things that seemed important.  But the only thing that I think is noteworthy was the fact that it mentioned both of our names!  We stared at the hologram in astonishment, and looked at the suits.  They chose the third option, and the hologram came up again, this time clear enough to hear the whole thing.

    “Greetings again, my friends, again I apologize for the haste with which I make this record: the Flood is reaching the outer barriers of this chamber as I speak.  The topic that I speak on in this message is using the suits.  You will notice that you have peculiar birth mark on your hands.  The suits will only work for people with this mark; it is a genetic marker that allows you to use our technologies at will.  It is the reason that you can even be in this room, because without it the door would have killed you immediately.  The hologram went on like this for some minutes, telling us how to open the case and retrieve the suits.  Once we had them on it told us that the gauntlets were not only protective, but destructive as well: they were devastating weapons.

    After about 10 more minutes we left the room in a very different state than when we entered it.  We walked back to the entrance of the cave, the strange soldier was still there, and although we couldn’t see his face, we could tell that he was furious.  Who are you?!  It looked like we had some explaining to do.  We warned took our helmets off, and showed him who we were, and he relaxed a bit. What took you so long?!?!  You have been in there for nearly half an hour!  We told him what had happened to us, and handed him the copy of what the old hologram had said.   He took several minutes to read it, and reread it a few times just to make sure that he wasn’t being fooled.  You mean to tell me that you found this armor in the back of this cave?  He sounded stunned.  I wonder what advantages this armor gives you.  Perhaps increased strength or speed?  We decided that it was best to try and answer these questions as we searched for a way off the planet.  What we didn’t know was that our new armor was going to be tested sooner than we thought.

    (EDIT: I spaced it out to make it easier to read.)



    carefull... it^ will steal your soul...
  •  08-02-2007, 1:16 PM 82785 in reply to 82770

    Re: The Survivors

    meh...  I have seen better.
    I am the defender of the good, protecter of the righteous, guardian of the pine!
    Don't mess with the furry-tailed clan!
  •  08-02-2007, 2:38 PM 82831 in reply to 82785

    Re: The Survivors

    Your story is good.

    IT'S GREAT!


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  •  08-02-2007, 3:25 PM 82871 in reply to 82770

    Re: The Survivors

    here is the next chapter.

     

    Chapter 5:  We heroes three

    We contacted The Sgt to tell him what we had found.  He seemed slightly amused at it, as if it was a joke.  He also told us that we had about 3 days before the covenant glassed the planet.  We walked around, (seeing as how our jeeps had gotten blown up and there were only 3 of us,) which was not easy at first.  The suits were very tight, and almost constricting at first.  The Doc and I wanted to examine the possibilities of the suits, seeing as how they were supposed to help us fight, and the strange soldier agreed that it would be best if we learned how they worked.  But even after 2 hours of fiddling with them, the suits showed little to no change.  We also looked at the strange objects that we had found with the suits.  We tried a few buttons, but nothing happened… until we saw that some of them fit together, almost like puzzle pieces.  We tried several combinations before we found one that did something.  But when it did, it wasn’t hard to tell the difference.  Immediately things happened.  We were stronger, faster, and smarter.  The world looked the same, and yet we saw it differently.  Things were slower, but not.  It was amazing! 

    After a while we got used to walking in the suits, but we never got used to seeing things like that.  Still feels strange…  Anyways, after we got the suits working we tinkered with them a little more to see if anything else happened, and as with most tinkering, it did:  I sort of blew up a tree… a big tree.  They weren’t kidding when they warned us about the power in the gauntlets, they really are powerful.  Fortunately we found that we could control the power of the blast, and we didn’t blow up any more trees.  For hours we searched before we actually found something.  It was a slightly damaged covenant drop ship.  The only problem was that the former crew was still with it. 

    The strange soldier thought that it might be best if we tried to stay hidden, seeing as how we still couldn’t fight very well.  He crept up to the leader, and was going to bash the creature’s head in, but he stepped on a twig, and it turned around in time to duck and punch him in the helmet.  He dropped, unconscious.  Oh, no!  I thought, what are we going to do now?!?!?!  The doc looked at me, and then at the seemingly suicidal choices that lay before us.  1.  Either we could attempt to rescue our fearsome comrade, or 2. We could leave him to save ourselves.  We wrestled with ourselves over it for about 10 minutes before we decided to try and save him.  This is suicide! I thought to myself for the 10th time.  We are just lucky that they haven’t seen us as it is!  But then I steeled myself, and began approaching the crash site anyways.  The Doc had circled around and gone at them from behind, while I went at them from the front. Again, I thought to myself, suicidal!    

    This is the first time I had willingly engaged these monsters, so I still shook with fear.  But I resisted the urge to back down, and kept walking.  When I neared the open area immediately around the crashed ship, I surveyed the defenses, things still moving in slow-mo, they had 4 of the bird-like creatures attempting to repair the ship, and 2 little ones and 2 ape-like creatures walking around as guards.  I snuck up behind one of the smaller ones, and grabbed its head, and it gave a good struggle until--- snap! It hung limp and I gently set it on the ground so that it didn’t make any noise. 

    I heard firing around the other side of the ship, and ran to help the Doc.  One of the ape-like creatures stepped in my way, and laughed at me.  It roared and grunted as it rushed at me on all fours.  I blasted it with my gauntlet weapon and it was thrown back by the savage blast.  Another rushed at me, and was given the same treatment.  The noise alerted the bird-like creatures, and they activated their shields and started firing at me.  My speed boosted by the suit, enabled me to dodge some of the blasts, and the rest were nowhere near me.  I gave 2 of them the same strength blast that had thrown the big ones head over heels, and after the smoke cleared the spot that they were in, I couldn’t see anything left of them. 

    I turned around to head back into the forest to meet the Doc.  I was the distraction, while he ran in and grabbed the strange soldier.  I saw him waving his hands at me, signifying that he had our wounded comrade.  “Is he going to be all right?”  I asked the Doc, “He looks hurt bad.”  I frowned, and I said this because the strange soldier really did look messed up.  They had taken his armor off, and it was in a sack over the Doc’s shoulder.  The Doc looked at me, “He will be fine.  He is one seriously tough guy.  In fact, he should be coming around anytime now.  But either way, we need to get him back to the base, so that he can get his armor back on.”  I frowned; this would mean that it would be harder to find this ship again.  But our friend comes first, so we high-tailed it back to base.

    When we got to the base the Sgt. Was surprised to see us.  “What in Sam Hill are you, (he pointed at the Doc and I,) wearing, how in Sam hill are you still alive while this ---- um… soldier, is unconscious and has been taken out of his armor!  What happened, why didn’t the men I gave you answer the radio hails we have been sending for almost 2 hours now?!?!?”   I explained what happened to the grizzled old marine, how his men had died fighting the giant blue creatures, how we came across the suits, and finally about the aliens who had captured the strange soldier when we tried to take their crashed ship.  “If we go back, we can capture and repair it.  There aren’t more than 5 of them left, so it would be easy!”  The Sgt looked at the Doc, who nodded in agreement with my assumption.  The Sgt grumbled for a few minutes, but finally gave in, and the next day we set off for the crash site.  The strange soldier seemed to feel better, as did the Doc and I. 

    When we found the crashed ship it was in a little better shape than we left it.  The marines stayed hidden behind the trees, as the Sgt, the Doc, and I tried to get a better look.  Like we had thought there were only a few aliens left guarding it: the rest were hard at work fixing their ship.  Sgt. Peterson motioned for the marines to sneak in and take out the two guards, and we killed the ones doing the repairs, it took only a few minutes.  Nice and neat, unlike last time we had been there, we got into the hold and found that the ship wasn’t nearly as damaged as we had thought; only a small part of the engine needed replaced.  Fortunately the aliens had the parts on hand to fix it enough to get it off the planet and to safety. 

    The Doc, the strange soldier and I walked away from everyone else for a few minutes.  “I think that we really should do something about the ship that threatened the planet.  For all we know it could glass this planet and leave at any time.  I think that the only reason that they haven’t is because they have had so much success on the ground.  They might even take over and leave an occupying force.”  The Doc looked at me with surprise on his face.  “Do you know nothing about them?” He asked me.  “Look,” I said, “you two are in the military, and know a heck of a lot more about these monsters than I ever will because they don’t tell us “civilians” anything.  A few weeks ago I didn’t even know that these things existed!  You,” I said pointing to both of them, “on the other hand, have been fighting them for years!”  They were taken aback by my bold statement, and looked at me with something akin to remorse their words.  “Your right, I don’t know a whole lot about them.  But I do know that we have a weapon against them that works!  You have seen what these suits can do, and we have probably only scratched the surface of their potential!”  The Doc nodded in agreement.  “They are formidable weapons, and so far we have been successful in repelling any more attacks with them.  I say we try it!”  The strange soldier looked back and forth between us.  There really isn’t any persuading either of you is there?” he noted, almost to himself.  “No,” I replied, “there is not.” 

    We talked for another half hour until we had a rough idea of what we were going to do when we got on the ship.  We really didn’t have much of an idea about what the inside of the Mindful Warrior looked like so mostly we would be improvising.  But we finally came up with something that seemed to have a slight chance of working in our favor:  Get in, hack the alien’s compute and find the engine room, and control room, get to the control room (killing all in our way) and try to take over the ship.  If we failed in that we would locate the engine room (again, killing all in our way) and blow the reactor up.  The only thing standing in the way of our simple plan was the Sergeant.



    carefull... it^ will steal your soul...
  •  08-02-2007, 5:01 PM 82917 in reply to 82755

    Re: The Survivors

    Pretty good but the only problem is that it's a column of words, space out paragraphs, etc. Trying to follow it is pretty tough when you get in the middle.
    "Honor? There ain't no honor in this war. The Plasma-Rifles killed it. And if the Plasma-Rifles didn't, then the Wraiths did. If the Wraiths didn't, then the Scarabs sure as hell did."

  •  08-03-2007, 12:55 AM 83164 in reply to 82917

    Re: The Survivors

    I will take that into consideration next time I post a chapter, thank you.

    carefull... it^ will steal your soul...
  •  08-03-2007, 1:05 AM 83175 in reply to 83164

    Re: The Survivors

    wow two ppl r doing it on the Aliens now? i am guessing thats wat it is... idk kinda confused... other than that its rather good keep it up....

    P.S. wow u post these new chapters up pretty quickly!


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  •  08-03-2007, 1:44 AM 83192 in reply to 83175

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    I posted them quick because I already had them written.  I still have a few more that I haven't put up yet.  but the whole thing isn't done yet, so you may have to wait at least a little while for those.  :(

    Speaking of posting chapters, here is the next one.  it is kind of short, but it gets across what I want it to.  ("

    (Note to Jin:  I tried to find breaks in the text, but in this chapter, they really aren't there, sorry.  Although I will go back and edit the previous ones, and make them easier to read.  Again, thanks for the advice.)

     

    Chapter 6:  You said what?!

    Immediately after we figured out what we were going to try to do we went to find the Sgt, who happened to be away at the moment.  We waited about ten minutes before he got back, (he had gone to oversee the repair and arming of his new alien toy.)  When he got back he looked happy as a clam:  They had just finished putting on the last weapon.  We got his attention and presented our plan to him.  His answer was swift, and negative.  “NO!”  He said.  “I will not put the rest of my men in any more danger than they are going to be just trying to get off this blasted rock!”  His response stunned us.  I had thought that to him the advantages would have outweighed the risk involved.  But I guess I was wrong.  “Unlike you I would like to live a long healthy alien free life, till I see the day I am supposed to die: In my old age!  I started to say something but he cut me off.  “Also, just how did you plan on getting into the ship in the first place?  That thing is tucked in tighter than two snails in a shell!”  I have to admit, he had a point there.  We hadn’t really thought about how we were actually going to get into the ship.  We figured that we would just fly our captured drop-ship to the launch bay and they would be fooled into letting us inside, then we would set down, and jump out guns blazing.  But as soon as the Sergeant said something about it, everything snapped into focus more and I realized that would never work.  Then I had an idea.  “Well… Actually we were going to ask you to help us figure that out.”  He looked up at me again, and started to protest, but found was cut off by the sound of gunfire, we ran to where the gunfire was coming from , and saw one of the most gruesome sights ever.  They were everywhere!  The sergeant called for a retreat into the surrounding woods.  Only 19 men (not including the Doc, the strange soldier, the Sergeant, and myself) made it to safety.  The alien ship’s pilot got away in the ship as well, but by himself.  The rest…  Well, I am sure that you can imagine what happens to a small group of marines when they come up against a bloodthirsty enemy force that was ten times larger than they were.  The sergeant was about to protest against my idea again, but stopped suddenly, because he had found that he didn’t have the heart to.  His face became moderately grim again.  “Alright, I will help you.  But if there is even the tiniest sign of trouble, my men and I are hightailing it right out, with or without you!”  He then turned back to his fallen comrades, and we walked away, leaving him to his silent grief.



    carefull... it^ will steal your soul...
  •  08-03-2007, 1:48 AM 83194 in reply to 83192

    Re: The Survivors

    Well since this is supposed to be a reporter doesn't he have grammar lessons of some sort?


    Angatar, Iron-Power
  •  08-03-2007, 2:00 AM 83199 in reply to 83194

    Re: The Survivors

    how do you mean?



    carefull... it^ will steal your soul...
  •  08-03-2007, 2:09 AM 83206 in reply to 83199

    Re: The Survivors

    liked the next chapter... got me wanting more :P....

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