Slayer 2277: i like it alot and i got drawn into it so the writing wasnt bad. and i liked how you included soren which was a nice easter egg.
i just didnt care for where the story had turned. it just drew me out of the story.
but its your story to tell not mine. do what you want with it
-polite
Hey listen man don't worry the story will get better I promise sorry for the turn the story took I was just testing something. Aparantly I failed. New chapter will be up soon :)
You can't play halo wars until you see this video
http://www.escapistmagazine.com/videos/view/zero-punctuation/645-Halo-Wars
I've been perma-banned at bungie.net :(