Hibernation (FF)

Last post 12-29-2009, 6:05 AM by Offensive Bias. 44 replies.
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  •  12-14-2009, 7:16 PM 786648 in reply to 785598

    Re: Hibernation (FF)

    The prologue is done! Now to wait for OB to post it. It's short for the wait, sorry guys, I had to think about several aspects to make it easier for OB to add-on to, it's hard to build off of others ideas! =]

    Merry Christmas, may your holidays be filled with the reading of Alien mayhem and warfare ;)

    To anyone who doesn't know, me and OB are setting this story within the universe of the Alien series, happy holidays!

     


    Chuckles

    Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

  •  12-14-2009, 7:19 PM 786649 in reply to 786648

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    Me wansts to read teh story! whar is itzorz?!?
    I am Aloysius's best cub scout!

    But now I have a new heart to win over.
  •  12-15-2009, 10:43 AM 787081 in reply to 786649

    Re: Hibernation (FF)

    Prologue is up! You can thank Chuckles for the masterpiece. I love co writes :D
    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  12-15-2009, 11:04 AM 787086 in reply to 787081

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    not bad, you guys.

    there were a few spelling/ gramar mistakes, but i was able to figure the sentence out.

    are you guys going to be trading on and off? or each do big chunks at a time?


    New story out! Halo: Below the Brine
    (it's the best story you're not reading!)
  •  12-15-2009, 11:53 AM 787107 in reply to 787086

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    Bit of both.
    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  12-15-2009, 11:58 AM 787108 in reply to 787107

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    yippee. me like variety.
    New story out! Halo: Below the Brine
    (it's the best story you're not reading!)
  •  12-15-2009, 12:14 PM 787113 in reply to 787108

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    It really is the cornerstone of society eh?
    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  12-15-2009, 12:47 PM 787127 in reply to 787113

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    Offensive Bias:It really is the cornerstone of society eh?

    what, variety? or my happiness?


    New story out! Halo: Below the Brine
    (it's the best story you're not reading!)
  •  12-15-2009, 1:18 PM 787136 in reply to 787127

    Re: Hibernation (FF)

    Footbutt:

    Offensive Bias:It really is the cornerstone of society eh?

    what, variety? or my happiness?

    Bit of both :D


    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  12-15-2009, 2:48 PM 787171 in reply to 787136

    Re: Hibernation (FF)

    I liked it but it was a little short.

    This line caught my eye though.

    Jerry let himself be let pulled out of the trench. I think Chuckles meant, Jerry let himself be pulled out of the trench.


    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
  •  12-15-2009, 9:59 PM 787488 in reply to 787171

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    Sorry, I haven't written much in a while, I'm still trying to straighten out the edges.

    And yeah...I accidentally added another let for some reason.

    Next one will be better, I promise.


    Chuckles

    Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

  •  12-15-2009, 10:20 PM 787508 in reply to 786648

    Re: Hibernation (FF)

    very interesting
  •  12-16-2009, 1:09 PM 787709 in reply to 787508

    Re: Hibernation (FF)

    liking this, OB and Chuckles. Whens next chapter?
    just call me R!zZle BiZzl£, it was my '08 account... i joined on 09-19-2008.
    WHAT? WHAT? WHAT?.....YEEAAH!

    I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass,
    faster than a fat ***, who sat down too fast.

    GLORY GLORY MAN UTD!
  •  12-16-2009, 1:17 PM 787711 in reply to 787709

    Re: Hibernation (FF)

    Next chapter is when I write it.

    It's gonna be ready between now and the weekend.


    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  12-16-2009, 1:36 PM 787715 in reply to 787711

    Re: Hibernation (FF)

    The prologue is good, but a couple days ago the story was about monsters in a cave system wasn't it?
    I am Aloysius's best cub scout!

    But now I have a new heart to win over.
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