AudiA4:

dj0wns:

Has anyone ever told you to proofread something before submitting it? If not then i recommend it because there are a lot of basic errors that just show laziness.

 

Anyways, I like the story a lot and you should continue writing it

I do not care a, in your eyes that laziness and I find that quite rude to say

ugh people always have to voie their opinions no matter how nice you are...

He is trying to help you write better to more people can give a better opinion of your story...... You have to listen to the advice if you want a good story.....

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Wolverfrog49:

dj0wns:

Has anyone ever told you to proofread something before submitting it? If not then i recommend it because there are a lot of basic errors that just show laziness.

 

 

I very rarely proofread, and yet I do just fine. A few typos are nothing to cry about, lighten up.

thanks for agreeing =D

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Distant Storm:

AudiA4:

dj0wns:

Has anyone ever told you to proofread something before submitting it? If not then i recommend it because there are a lot of basic errors that just show laziness.

 

Anyways, I like the story a lot and you should continue writing it

I do not care , in your eyes thats laziness and I find that quite rude to say

ugh people always have to voie their opinions no matter how nice you are...

He is trying to help you write better to more people can give a better opinion of your story...... You have to listen to the advice if you want a good story.....

a few typos does not imply lazyness...

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AudiA4:

Distant Storm:

AudiA4:

dj0wns:

Has anyone ever told you to proofread something before submitting it? If not then i recommend it because there are a lot of basic errors that just show laziness.

 

Anyways, I like the story a lot and you should continue writing it

I do not care , in your eyes thats laziness and I find that quite rude to say

ugh people always have to voie their opinions no matter how nice you are...

He is trying to help you write better to more people can give a better opinion of your story...... You have to listen to the advice if you want a good story.....

a few typos does not imply lazyness...

I'm not saying a few typos imply laziness, just saying he is right, there are quite a lot that should be fixed.

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Read my FF! Human-Covenant War: Without The Great Schism. It's an FF based upon how the war would have ended up if there was no Great Schism. There are a lot of twists and there is a lot of action!

in your opinion. Its not a professional piece of work, so no need for fine tuning, Im happy with it =D

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AudiA4:in your opinion. Its not a professional piece of work, so no need for fine tuning, Im happy with it =D

Your the Author, do whatever you think is right.

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Read my FF! Human-Covenant War: Without The Great Schism. It's an FF based upon how the war would have ended up if there was no Great Schism. There are a lot of twists and there is a lot of action!

Alright, I read it...

It has a lot to live up to in my mine, I've seen some very well written assassin fictions in my time here.

I wish you luck, if nothing else. 

Corrections were PM'd to you.

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You get hit with a heavy object.
-2 DXT
-5 STM
-200 INT
You are dead.

Ωμέγα:

Alright, I read it...

It has a lot to live up to in my mine, I've seen some very well written assassin fictions in my time here.

I wish you luck, if nothing else. 

Corrections were PM'd to you.

yes i recieved that thank you for that

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I just realized Asad is from COD4....wow I did that without even realizing it haha

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Dark Reign, A Fan Fic of sorts, Check it out

oh and chapter 2 is up!

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Dark Reign, A Fan Fic of sorts, Check it out

I did read it (well, what was up when I posted). I don't actually know much about the storyline of Dark Reign, I was just curious.

And even if I did, there could have been parallels or references or something that I missed. 

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Veraam:

One with power = Corruption
Two with power = War

The Kelvinator:

I did read it (well, what was up when I posted). I don't actually know much about the storyline of Dark Reign, I was just curious.

And even if I did, there could have been parallels or references or something that I missed. 

there were none, so to answer your question...no? haha sorry I was confused

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