Chapter five is up! I was like, three quarters done when my browser decided to mess up! I had to rewrite about three quarters of chapter five... It was going to be a little bit better... Anyways, I addressed the issue about the ranks. Also, the encyclopedia tells me it's ok for the Lance corporal to lead. Now, the main character is pretty much Jan.
Well I hope you enjoy and, please leave positive feedback!
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