Tmspartan:Jake looked back at the partan

only mistake I found, but I love chapter six, I laughed when jake ran out of ammo, does taht make me a bad person. lol

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Ugh, and I thought I combed through that for spelling errors...

*mutters in displeasure*

Alright no need to worry I fixed it.

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"Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."

good...now hurry up with the next chapter =D

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Chapter 7 is up, it's short but it is just a foreshadow for the coming events.

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"Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."

Another bridge I suppose.

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SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.

Offensive Bias:Another bridge I suppose.

Mmm yes, I would've had some action in this chapter, but I'm saving it for the next chapter.

 Can anyone say EPIC NAVAL BATTLE?? I'm sure you can.

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"Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."

nothing really happened in this chapter...and I still loved it =)

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Chapter 8 is up, and hopefully it quells the thirst for action most of you were looking for, and if not then you should look forward to the next chapter.

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"Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."

tmspartan:ignoring the many officers that asked hi questions

lol, you always leave a spell error, but I like this chapter even thoug space battles arent really my thing.

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Good job TM. Not one frickin comment on my story

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A grenade need not speak, for when he blows up, a blast speaks for him
The assassin returns in Klone 666 2.0

Grenade I will read it later, I'm tired right now; and I saw its length and just pressed back.

Tomorrow I will thoroughly read it though.

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"Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."

tmspartan:

Grenade I will read it later, I'm tired right now; and I saw its length and just pressed back.

Tomorrow I will thoroughly read it though.

Okay thanks

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EPIC NAVAL BATTLE indeed TM.

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Chapter 9 is up, it's pretty long; and there is some action as well. Things will get interesting from this point on.

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"Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."

finally a chapter with no spelling errors, lol

I love this chapter, keep it up, but I hate when you describe things using exact numbers, instead of saying like a 10 grunts or elites say a handful, I think it's just me but it just kinda off sets the mood of the story a little

but nice read, keep me posted.

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